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Posted to commits@openoffice.apache.org by bu...@apache.org on 2013/08/02 21:11:10 UTC

svn commit: r872506 - in /websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk: cgi-bin/ content/ content/download/checksums.html

Author: buildbot
Date: Fri Aug  2 19:11:10 2013
New Revision: 872506

Log:
Staging update by buildbot for ooo-site

Modified:
    websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/cgi-bin/   (props changed)
    websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/content/   (props changed)
    websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/checksums.html

Propchange: websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/cgi-bin/
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--- cms:source-revision (original)
+++ cms:source-revision Fri Aug  2 19:11:10 2013
@@ -1 +1 @@
-1509808
+1509822

Propchange: websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/content/
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--- cms:source-revision (original)
+++ cms:source-revision Fri Aug  2 19:11:10 2013
@@ -1 +1 @@
-1509808
+1509822

Modified: websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/checksums.html
==============================================================================
--- websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/checksums.html (original)
+++ websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/content/download/checksums.html Fri Aug  2 19:11:10 2013
@@ -66,8 +66,8 @@
 <h3>How to verify your download with PGP/ASC signatures and MD5, SHA256 hash values?</h3>
 
 <p>A <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Checksum" title="What means to verify the file integrity?">hash value</a>
-processed on the downloaded file is a way to make sure that the content is authentic and was not manipulated by an
-unauthorized third party, and has not been damaged during the download process.</p>
+processed on the downloaded file is a way to make sure that the content is transferred OK and has not been damaged during
+the download process.</p>
 <br />
 
 <h4>Verify with PGP/ASC and KEYS signatures</h4>
@@ -84,15 +84,16 @@ unauthorized third party, and has not be
   <code>C:\Program Files\Gnu\GnuPg\gpg.exe</code>) until you add it to the <code>$PATH</code> system environment
   variable.</li>
   <li>Save the following file with your Internet browser to the location where the downloaded AOO file is stored:</li>
-  <li><pre>http://www.apache.org/dist/openoffice/KEYS</pre></li>
+  <li><a href="http://www.apache.org/dist/openoffice/KEYS" title="http://www.apache.org/dist/openoffice/KEYS">
+  http://www.apache.org/dist/openoffice/KEYS</a></li>
   <li>Open the start menu and enter <code>cmd.exe</code> into the search box.</li>
   <li>Now change to the directory with the downloaded AOO, KEYS and PGP/ASC file, import and verify with the following
   commands:</li>
   <li><pre>cd &lt;path_to_AOO_and_KEYS_and_ASC_file&gt;</pre></li>
   <li><pre>C:\Program Files\Gnu\GnuPg\gpg.exe --import KEYS</pre></li>
   <li><pre>C:\Program Files\Gnu\GnuPg\gpg.exe --verify &lt;installation_file&gt;.asc</pre></li>
-  <li>When both signatures match it is indicated with an "Good signature from &lt;Person who has created the signature&gt;
-  statement. <br /> Otherwise "BAD signature from ...".</li>
+  <li>If the signature matches the file it is indicated with an "Good signature from &lt;Person who has created the
+  signature&gt; statement. <br /> Otherwise "BAD signature from ...".</li>
 </ul>
 <br />
 
@@ -106,8 +107,8 @@ unauthorized third party, and has not be
   <li><pre>wget http://www.apache.org/dist/openoffice/KEYS</pre></li>
   <li><pre>gpg --import KEYS</pre></li>
   <li><pre>gpg --verify &lt;installation_file&gt;.asc</pre></li>
-  <li>When both signatures match it is indicated with an "Good signature from &lt;Person who has created the signature&gt;
-  statement. <br /> Otherwise "BAD signature from ...".</li>
+  <li>If the signature matches the file it is indicated with an "Good signature from &lt;Person who has created the
+  signature&gt; statement. <br /> Otherwise "BAD signature from ...".</li>
 </ul>
 <br />
 
@@ -123,8 +124,8 @@ unauthorized third party, and has not be
   <li><pre>curl http://www.apache.org/dist/openoffice/KEYS -o KEYS</pre></li>
   <li><pre>gpg --import KEYS</pre></li>
   <li><pre>gpg --verify &lt;installation_file&gt;.asc</pre></li>
-  <li>When both signatures match it is indicated with an "Good signature from &lt;Person who has created the signature&gt;
-  statement. <br /> Otherwise "BAD signature from ...".</li>
+  <li>If the signature matches the file it is indicated with an "Good signature from &lt;Person who has created the
+  signature&gt; statement. <br /> Otherwise "BAD signature from ...".</li>
 </ul>
 <br />
 
@@ -243,11 +244,11 @@ title="How to use MD5 hashes">how to use
 <h3 id="no_match">What to do when the values do not match?</h3>
 
 <ul>
-  <li>If the values do not match, your downloaded AOO file is broken. Please try again a download to get a valid 
-  file.</li>
-  <li>If you are using a proxy server to get connected to the Internet try to disable this if your Internet Service
-  Provider is allowing this. Or enable it if it is disabled at the moment. Please consult the respective help topics for
-  the used Internet browser where to find this setting. Then try again to download and verify the file.</li>
+  <li>If the values do not match, your downloaded AOO file is broken. Please try the download again, and recheck.</li>
+  <li>If the check still fails, try another browser if possible. If you are using a proxy server to get connected to the
+  Internet try to disable this if your Internet Service Provider is allowing this. Or enable it if it is disabled at the
+  moment. Please consult the relevant help topics for the used Internet browser where to find this setting. Finally try
+  to download again, and recheck.</li>
   <li>If you still get no matching values and you are sure it is not caused by an error during downloading, please
   notify the Apache OpenOffice project. Before doing this, make sure you have the following information at hand:<br /><br />
   <b>1)</b> The exact file name of the downloaded installation file.<br />
@@ -263,7 +264,7 @@ title="How to use MD5 hashes">how to use
   User forums (different languages)</a></li>
 </ul>
 
-<p><b>*)</b> Be aware that all mails do not go to a single person but a so-called mailing list. Mails will be archived and
+<p><b>*)</b> Please note that all mails go to a public mailing list, not an individual person. Mails will be archived and 
 can be accessed also by other users. To receive answers, you will need to subscribe to the mailing list before sending
 mails. For instructions, see: <a href="http://openoffice.apache.org/mailing-lists.html"
 title="Learn more about how to use mailing lists">Learn more about how to use mailing lists</a>.</p>
@@ -294,7 +295,7 @@ Development mailing list</a>.&nbsp;<b>*)
 </ul>
 <br />
 
-<p><b>*)</b> Be aware that all mails do not go to a single person but a so-called mailing list. Mails will be archived and
+<p><b>*)</b> Please note that all mails go to a public mailing list, not an individual person. Mails will be archived and 
 can be accessed also by other users. To receive answers, you will need to subscribe to the mailing list before sending
 mails. For instructions, see: <a href="http://openoffice.apache.org/mailing-lists.html"
 title="Learn more about how to use mailing lists">Learn more about how to use mailing lists</a>.</p>