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[GitHub] [druid] techdocsmith commented on a diff in pull request #13641: docs: Refresh the update data tutorial

techdocsmith commented on code in PR #13641:
URL: https://github.com/apache/druid/pull/13641#discussion_r1093939838


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docs/tutorials/tutorial-update-data.md:
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@@ -24,33 +24,39 @@ sidebar_label: "Updating existing data"
   -->
 
 
-This tutorial demonstrates how to update existing data, showing both overwrites and appends.
+This tutorial shows you how to update data in a datasource by overwriting existing data and adding new data to the datasource.
 
-For this tutorial, we'll assume you've already downloaded Apache Druid as described in
-the [single-machine quickstart](index.md) and have it running on your local machine.
+## Prerequisites
 
-It will also be helpful to have finished [Tutorial: Loading a file](../tutorials/tutorial-batch.md), [Tutorial: Querying data](../tutorials/tutorial-query.md), and [Tutorial: Rollup](../tutorials/tutorial-rollup.md).
+Before starting this tutorial, download and run Apache Druid on your local machine as described in
+the [single-machine quickstart](index.md).
 
-## Overwrite
+You should also be familiar with the material in the following tutorials:
+* [Tutorial: Loading a file](../tutorials/tutorial-batch.md)
+* [Tutorial: Querying data](../tutorials/tutorial-query.md)
+* [Tutorial: Roll-up](../tutorials/tutorial-rollup.md)
 
-This section of the tutorial will cover how to overwrite an existing interval of data.
+## Load initial data

Review Comment:
   nit: use of "initial" here seems awkwrd. "Load some data to start?" "Load seed data?"



##########
docs/tutorials/tutorial-update-data.md:
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@@ -24,33 +24,39 @@ sidebar_label: "Updating existing data"
   -->
 
 
-This tutorial demonstrates how to update existing data, showing both overwrites and appends.
+This tutorial shows you how to update data in a datasource by overwriting existing data and adding new data to the datasource.
 
-For this tutorial, we'll assume you've already downloaded Apache Druid as described in
-the [single-machine quickstart](index.md) and have it running on your local machine.
+## Prerequisites
 
-It will also be helpful to have finished [Tutorial: Loading a file](../tutorials/tutorial-batch.md), [Tutorial: Querying data](../tutorials/tutorial-query.md), and [Tutorial: Rollup](../tutorials/tutorial-rollup.md).
+Before starting this tutorial, download and run Apache Druid on your local machine as described in
+the [single-machine quickstart](index.md).
 
-## Overwrite
+You should also be familiar with the material in the following tutorials:
+* [Tutorial: Loading a file](../tutorials/tutorial-batch.md)
+* [Tutorial: Querying data](../tutorials/tutorial-query.md)
+* [Tutorial: Roll-up](../tutorials/tutorial-rollup.md)
 
-This section of the tutorial will cover how to overwrite an existing interval of data.
+## Load initial data
 
-### Load initial data
+Load an initial data set to which you will overwrite and append data.

Review Comment:
   note initial bothers me less here "an initial data set" 



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