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svn commit: r695126 - in /continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site: ./ apt/ apt/administrator_guides/ apt/administrator_guides/security/ apt/developer_guides/ apt/installation/ apt/user_guides/building_project/ apt/user_guides/managing_builddef/ apt/use...

Author: olamy
Date: Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
New Revision: 695126

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=695126&view=rev
Log:
[CONTINUUM-1885] Clean up site documentation
Submitted by Kenneth Liu


Modified:
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/appearance.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/external-db.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/jdk.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/security/customising-security.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/security/ldap.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/shutdown.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/developer_guides/building.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/getting-started.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/geronimo.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/glassfish.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/installation.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/jboss.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/jetty.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/requirements.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/standalone.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/tomcat.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/upgrade.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/building_project/index.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_builddef/index.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/addProject.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/editProject.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/removeProject.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/notification/index.apt
    continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/site.xml

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/appearance.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/appearance.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/appearance.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/appearance.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 * {Banner}
 
   You can configure the right logo of the banner including title and link on the image.
-  You have to add some informations in a pom (like a company pom) (here informations coming from org.apache:apache :
+  You have to add some information in a pom (like a company pom) (coming from org.apache:apache in this example) :
   
 +----------------------------+
   <organization>
@@ -33,15 +33,15 @@
   
 [../images/select-company-pom.png] 'Select a Company POM'   
 
-  The result will be display (here using org.apache:apache) :
+  The result will be displayed (using org.apache:apache in this example) :
   
 [../images/selected-company-pom.png] 'Selected a Company POM'  
 
-  Note : the pom is searched in central repository and the repositories available for the active profiles from you ${user.home}/.m2/settings.xml 
+  Note : the pom is searched in central repository and the repositories available for the active profiles from your <<<${user.home}/.m2/settings.xml>>> 
  
 * {Footer}
  
-  You can configure the footer with writing your own html content from the 'Appearance' entry of the menu.
+  You can configure the footer by putting your own html content in the 'Appearance' entry of the menu.
  
 [../images/configuration-footer.png] 'Configure footer'
 

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/external-db.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/external-db.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/external-db.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/external-db.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -22,10 +22,10 @@
 
 ** Standalone version
 
-    To use an external database with Continuum standalone, you must configure datasources in <<<$CONTINUUM_HOME/conf/jetty.xml>>>
+    To use an external database with Continuum standalone, you must configure DataSources in <<<$CONTINUUM_HOME/conf/jetty.xml>>>
 
 %{snippet|id=datasources|url=http://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/continuum/trunk/continuum-jetty/src/main/conf/jetty.xml}
 
 ** Webapp
 
-    To use an external database with the Continuum webapp, you should configure the datasource in your container.
+    To use an external database with the Continuum webapp, you should configure the DataSource in your container.

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/jdk.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/jdk.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/jdk.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/jdk.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
  ------
- Managing Jdk
+ Managing JDKs
  ------
  Olivier Lamy
  ------
  Oct 11 2007
  ------
  
-Managing Jdk
+Managing JDKs
 
   From the menu, choose the 'Installations' entry 
   
@@ -22,10 +22,10 @@
 
   You can use the checkbox if you want to add a Profile with the same name as your jdk name.
   
-  The value 'Value/Path' field must contains the jdk path (as a JAVA_HOME value).
+  The value 'Value/Path' field must contain the jdk path (as a <<<JAVA_HOME>>> value).
   
-  The value will validated with testing path/bin/java -version
+  The value will validated by testing path<<</bin/java -version>>>
   
-  It the the test, the following error will be displayed 
+  If the test fails, the following error will be displayed
   
 [../images/jdk-validation-failed.png] Jdk validation failed   

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/security/customising-security.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/security/customising-security.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/security/customising-security.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/security/customising-security.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 
    []
 
- (In the above list, <<<~>>> is the home directory of the user who is running
+ (In the list above, <<<~>>> is the home directory of the user who is running
  Continuum, and <<<$CONTINUUM_HOME>>> is the directory where Continuum is installed,
  such as <<</opt/continuum-1.2>>>.)
 

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/security/ldap.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/security/ldap.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/security/ldap.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/security/ldap.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
 LDAP Configuration
 
-    Continuum support LDAP for authentication. To configure it, you should follow these steps:
+    Continuum supports LDAP for authentication. To configure it, you should follow these steps:
 
     * Shutdown Continuum
 

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/shutdown.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/shutdown.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/shutdown.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/administrator_guides/shutdown.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -8,8 +8,7 @@
 
 Shutdown Continuum
 
-    To Shutdown correctly Continuum, you should look at the build queue. It isn't recommended to shutdown Continuum
-    when a project is building or in the queue.
+    Shutting down Continuum while a project is building or queued is NOT recommended. The build queues page should be used to cancel any currently running and queued builds before shutting down.
 
 * Queues view
 
@@ -26,7 +25,6 @@
 
 * Shutdown
 
-    To shutdown Continuum, the queue must be empty, so when you want to shutdown it, you can wait the end of all processes or cancel them.
+    To shutdown Continuum, the queue must be empty, so when you want to shutdown, you can either wait until all builds are complete or cancel them.
 
-    If you don't want to have new projects added in the build queue before you shutdown Continuum, you can disable all schedules (Note: You'll need to enable
-    them on the next startup). In future, you'll have an action to automate the disable/enable schedules process.
+    If you don't want to have new projects added in the build queue before you shutdown Continuum, you can disable all schedules. You'll need to re-enable them on the next startup. (In the future, you'll have an action to automate the disable/enable schedules process.)

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/developer_guides/building.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/developer_guides/building.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/developer_guides/building.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/developer_guides/building.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -6,26 +6,26 @@
  Oct 3 2007
  ------
 
-Guide to build Continuum
+Guide to building Continuum
 
 * Why would I want to build Continuum?
 
-  Building Continuum yourself is for one of two reasons:
+  You might want to build Continuum yourself for one of two reasons:
 
     * to try out a bleeding edge feature or bugfix (issues can be found in
       {{{http://jira.codehaus.org/browse/CONTINUUM} JIRA}}), but you can try our SNAPSHOTs: {{http://vmbuild.apache.org/}}
 
-    * to fix a problem you are having and submit a patch to the developers team.
+    * to fix a problem you are having and submit a patch to the development team.
 
-  Note, that you don't need to build Continuum for day to day use. While we encourage getting
+  Note that you don't need to build Continuum for day to day use. While we encourage getting
   involved and fixing bugs that you find, for day to day use we recommend using the latest release.
 
 * Checking out the sources
 
-  All of the source code for Maven and its related libraries is in {{{http://subversion.tigris.org/} Subversion}}.
-  You can {{{http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/} browse the repository}}, or checkout specific modules directly.
+  All of the source code for Continuum and its related libraries is in a {{{http://subversion.tigris.org/} Subversion}} repository.
+  You can also {{{http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/} browse the repository}}, or checkout specific modules directly.
 
-  All SVN instructions are available in {{{../../../source-repository.html}Source Repository page}}.
+  All SVN instructions are available on the {{{../../../source-repository.html}Source Repository page}}.
 
 * Building the sources
 
@@ -34,11 +34,11 @@
     * JDK 5 or greater
 
     * Maven 2
-
+	
 ** Building
 
-  To build Continuum, you run this command from the top directory:
+  To build Continuum, you run this command from the top (trunk) directory:
 
 -----------------
 mvn clean install
------------------
+-----------------
\ No newline at end of file

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/getting-started.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/getting-started.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/getting-started.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/getting-started.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -9,14 +9,14 @@
 
 Getting Started
 
-    When you start continuum for the first time (without existing database), the first you will
-    have to do is the admin account creation and the {{{administrator_guides/configuration.html}general configuration}}
+    When you start Continuum for the first time (without an existing database), the first thing you will
+    do is create the admin account and perform the {{{administrator_guides/configuration.html}General Configuration}}.
     
 [images/admin-account-creation.png] Admin account creation
 
-    After admin account creation, you can log as an admin.  The next thing you will see is the General Configuration
+    After admin account creation, you can log as the admin. The next thing you will see is the General Configuration
     page.
 
 [images/configuration.png] General Configuration
 
-    You may also create users, {{{user_guides/managing_project/addProject.html}add projects}}, etc.
+    You may also create users, {{{user_guides/managing_project/addProject.html}add projects}}, etc.
\ No newline at end of file

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/geronimo.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/geronimo.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/geronimo.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/geronimo.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
 Guide to Install Continuum on Geronimo
 
-    Instructions for installing, deploying, configuring Continuum for the Apache Geronimo.
+    Instructions for installing, deploying, configuring Continuum for Apache Geronimo.
 
     Sections:
 

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/glassfish.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/glassfish.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/glassfish.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/glassfish.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 Guide to Install Continuum on GlassFish V2
 
 
-    Instructions for installing, deploying, configuring Continuum for the GlassFish.
+    Instructions for installing, deploying, configuring Continuum for GlassFish.
 
     Sections:
 

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/installation.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/installation.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/installation.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/installation.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
 Continuum Installation
 
-    In this section, you'll find all information about Continuum installations:
+    In this section, you'll find all information about Continuum installation:
 
     * {{{standalone.html}Standalone}}
 

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/jboss.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/jboss.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/jboss.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/jboss.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -8,17 +8,17 @@
 
 Guide to Install Continuum on JBoss
 
-    Instructions for installing, deploying, configuring Continuum JBoss. Tested with JBoss 4.2.2.GA and 4.0.5.GA.
+    Instructions for installing, deploying, configuring Continuum in JBoss. Tested with JBoss 4.2.2.GA and 4.0.5.GA.
 
     Sections:
 
 ~~%{toc|section=0}
 
-* {Datasource Configuration}
+* {DataSource Configuration}
 
     * Copy {{{http://repo1.maven.org/maven2/org/apache/derby/derby/10.1.3.1/derby-10.1.3.1.jar}derby-10.1.3.1.jar}} into <<<$JBOSS_HOME/server/default/lib/>>>
 
-    * Create a jdbc deployment configuration file named <<<derby-continuum-ds.xml>>> in <<<$JBOSS_HOME/server/default/deploy>>> with the following contents:
+    * Create a JDBC deployment configuration file named <<<derby-continuum-ds.xml>>> in <<<$JBOSS_HOME/server/default/deploy>>> with the following contents:
 
 +--------------------------------+
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 </datasources>
 +--------------------------------+
 
-    * Create a jdbc deployment configuration file named <<<derby-users-ds.xml>>> in <<<$JBOSS_HOME/server/default/deploy>>> with the following contents:
+    * Create a JDBC deployment configuration file named <<<derby-users-ds.xml>>> in <<<$JBOSS_HOME/server/default/deploy>>> with the following contents:
 
 +--------------------------------+
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
@@ -95,6 +95,6 @@
     By default, the '<<<working directory>>>' and the '<<<build output directory>>>' are stored under the WEB-INF directory. If you want to change them (necessary on Windows
     due to the path length limitation), you can configure them in the {{{../administrator_guides/configuration.html}Configuration page}}.
 
-    By default, Continuum logs are stored into <<<${appserver.base}/logs/>>>. appserver.base is a system property. If you don't define it in the jboss startup script, it will be empty,
-    so the Continuum logs directory will be at the root of your disk. If you want to use an other location, you should modify
+    By default, Continuum logs are stored into <<<${appserver.base}/logs/>>>. appserver.base is a system property. If you don't define it in the JBoss startup script, it will be empty,
+    so the Continuum logs directory will be at the root of your disk. If you want to use another location, you should modify
     <<<$JBOSS_HOME/server/default/deploy/continuum.war/WEB-INF/classes/log4j.xml>>>

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/jetty.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/jetty.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/jetty.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/jetty.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
 Guide to Install Continuum on Jetty
 
-    Instructions for installing, deploying, configuring Continuum for the Jetty. Tested with Jetty 6.1.5.
+    Instructions for installing, deploying, configuring Continuum for Jetty. Tested with Jetty 6.1.5.
 
     Sections:
 

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/requirements.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/requirements.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/requirements.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/requirements.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 *----------------------+--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------+
 | <<Memory>>           | No minimum requirement                                                                                                         |
 *----------------------+--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------+
-| <<Disk>>             | The Continuum application is in itself less than 30MB but will use more disk space when it's checking out and building sources |
+| <<Disk>>             | The Continuum application package is less than 30MB but will use more disk space when it's checking out and building sources |
 *----------------------+--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------+
 | <<Operating System>> | No minimum requirement. Tested on Windows XP, Debian, Fedora Core, Solaris and Mac OS X                                        |
 *----------------------+--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------+

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/standalone.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/standalone.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/standalone.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/standalone.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 
     * Extract the file
     
-    * Set a JAVA_HOME environnement variable which use a jdk >= 1.5 
+    * Set a JAVA_HOME environment variable which use a jdk >= 1.5 
 
 ** {Defining JNDI Resources}
 

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/tomcat.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/tomcat.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/tomcat.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/tomcat.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 
     [[1]] A defined \<Context\> xml section to define the JNDI resources.
 
-    [[1]] The Javamail / Activation JAR files.
+    [[1]] The JavaMail / Activation JAR files.
 
     [[1]] The Apache Derby JAR files.
 
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
 
 ** {Defining JNDI Resources}.
 
-    Continuum will, on startup, ask the web container for a few JNDI configured resources, two jdbc datasources, and one javamail session.
+    Continuum will, on startup, ask the web container for a few JNDI configured resources, two JDBC DataSources, and one JavaMail session.
 
     To configure these JNDI resources in the Tomcat Web Container, you will need to specify a \<Context\> section that Tomcat can utilize for those requests coming from Continuum.
 
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
 
     * <<<jdbc/users>>>
 
-    The individual techniques for describing these resources, and the parameters associated with them are specific to the Tomcat version, resource type, and even jdbc implementation type.
+    The individual techniques for describing these resources, and the parameters associated with them are specific to the Tomcat version, resource type, and even JDBC implementation type.
 
     For the purposes of this document, the following assumptions are made.
     
@@ -61,13 +61,13 @@
 
     [[1]] You will be using the embedded Apache Derby database. (not an external database, that's another show)
 
-    [[1]] Details specific to Apache Tomcat, Javamail, or Apache Derby are left for the reader to research on those projects websites.
+    [[1]] Details specific to Apache Tomcat, JavaMail, or Apache Derby are left for the reader to research on those projects websites.
 
-** {The Javamail / Activation JAR files}
+** {The JavaMail / Activation JAR files}
 
-    <<Note:>> Continuum requires Javamail 1.4 (or later)
+    <<Note:>> Continuum requires JavaMail 1.4 (or later)
 
-    Apache Tomcat does not typically ship with a copy of the Javamail or Activation jar files. 
+    Apache Tomcat does not typically ship with a copy of the JavaMail or Activation jar files. 
     In your role as the Apache Tomcat administrator of your installation, you will need to obtain these jar files and place it into your preferred lib directory.
 
     The appropriate lib directory to choose is a personal preference, and we do not encourage or enforce a specific location for it, as all installations of Apache Tomcat are different.
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
 
     Direct download links for these jar files.
 
-    * Java Mail 1.4 - {{{http://repo1.maven.org/maven2/javax/mail/mail/1.4/mail-1.4.jar}mail-1.4.jar}}
+    * JavaMail 1.4 - {{{http://repo1.maven.org/maven2/javax/mail/mail/1.4/mail-1.4.jar}mail-1.4.jar}}
 
     * Java Activation Framework 1.1 - {{{http://repo1.maven.org/maven2/javax/activation/activation/1.1/activation-1.1.jar}activation-1.1.jar}}
 
@@ -84,13 +84,13 @@
 
     <<Note:>>Continuum 1.2 has been tested with Apache Derby 10.1.3.1
 
-    Default installation of Continuum utilizes the Apache Derby 100% Java Database to maintain Continuum specific information, and also the Users / Security Database.
+    The default installation of Continuum uses the Apache Derby 100% Java database to maintain Continuum-specific information, and also the Users / Security Database.
 
     You will need to obtain the derby.jar and derbytools.jar and place them into your preferred lib directory.
 
     We put them into the <<<$CATALINA_HOME/common/lib/>>> directory.
 
-    Direct download links for these jar files.
+    Direct download links for these jar files:
 
     * {{{http://repo1.maven.org/maven2/org/apache/derby/derby/10.1.3.1/derby-10.1.3.1.jar}derby-10.1.3.1.jar}}
 

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/upgrade.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/upgrade.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
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--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/upgrade.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/installation/upgrade.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 
 * Goal
 
-    When upgrading continuum, it could have some database model changes.  This tool exports data from old database model and imports the data into the new database model.
+    When upgrading Continuum, it could have some database model changes. This tool exports data from old database model and imports the data into the new database model.
 
     There are 2 databases that need to be converted, one for the builds and one for the users.
     
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
 
         * Start the new version of continuum.
 
-* Specific steps to do before to import
+* Specific steps to do before import
 
 ** 1.1 import
 

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/building_project/index.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/building_project/index.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
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--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/building_project/index.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/building_project/index.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
 Building Projects
 
-    For Ant, maven 1/2 builds the following system properties will be added via -D command line :
+    For Ant and maven builds the following system properties will be added via -D command line:
     
     * continuum.project.group.name
     

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_builddef/index.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_builddef/index.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
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--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_builddef/index.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_builddef/index.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -9,12 +9,12 @@
 
 Managing Build Definitions
 
-    Each project or the project group must have an attached build definition in order to build.
+    Each project or project group must have at least one attached build definition in order to build.
     
-    Depending on the project, you can define different value which will be used in order to build your project.
+    Depending on the project, you can define different values which will be used in order to build your project.
     
-    Continuum contains some default build definitions which can be changed in <<{{{../../administrator_guides/builddefTemplate.html}the build definition templates screen}}>>.
+    Continuum includes some default build definitions which can be changed in the <<{{{../../administrator_guides/builddefTemplate.html}Build Definition Templates screen}}>>.
     
-    You can add or edit build definition at the <<{{{builddefGroup.html}project Group level}}>> or at the <<{{{builddefProject.html}project level}}>>.
+    You can add or edit build definitions at the <<{{{builddefGroup.html}Project Group level}}>> or at the <<{{{builddefProject.html}Project level}}>>.
     
      
\ No newline at end of file

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/addProject.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/addProject.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
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--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/addProject.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/addProject.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -17,22 +17,22 @@
     
 [../../images/add-m2-project-menu.png] Add a maven2 project
 
-  The pom.xml file must be available through one of the following format : http, https and ftp 
-  (file protocol is off by default for security and must enabled manually).
+  The pom.xml file must be available through one of the following protocols: http, https, or ftp 
+  (The file protocol is also supported but is disabled by default for security and must enabled manually).
     
-  Or it can be uploaded (Note this doesn't support multi modules project).
+  Or it can be uploaded from a local file (Note this doesn't support multi modules project).
     
 [../../images/add-m2-project.png] Add a maven2 project
 
-  You can define username/password if the POM URL require an authentication.
+  You can define username/password if the POM URL requires authentication.
 
-  If your SCM store credentials like CVS or SVN and you want to use the SCM Credentials cache, check the "Use SCM Credentials Cache" field.
+  If your SCM stores credentials like CVS or SVN and you want to use the SCM Credentials cache, check the "Use SCM Credentials Cache" field.
 
   You can define the group you want to use or "Defined by POM" in this case project.name will be use as Project Group.
 
-  By default Continuum add each sub-module POM as a Continuum Project. If you want to add only the root POM without sub-modules, check the "load only root as recursive build" field.
+  By default, Continuum adds each sub-module POM as an individual Continuum Project. If you want to add only the root POM without sub-modules, check the "load only root as recursive build" field.
   
-  You can choose a Build Definition Template which will be apply to your project.
+  You can choose a Build Definition Template which will be applied to your project.
 
 * {Maven 1 project}
     
@@ -53,19 +53,19 @@
 
   If your SCM store credentials like CVS or SVN and you want to use the SCM Credentials cache, check the "Use SCM Credentials Cache" field.
 
-  You can define the group you want to use or "Defined by POM" in this case project.name will be use as Project Group.
+  You can define the group you want to use or "Defined by POM." In this case project.name will be used as the Project Group.
   
-  You can choose a Build Definition Template which will be apply to your project.
+  You can choose a Build Definition Template which will be applied to your project.
 
 * {ANT Project}
 
   From the menu, choose the 'Ant Project' entry
     
-[../../images/add-ant-project-menu.png] Add a ANT project
+[../../images/add-ant-project-menu.png] Add a Ant project
 
     TO WRITE
 
-[../../images/add-ant-project.png] Add a ANT project
+[../../images/add-ant-project.png] Add a Ant project
 
 * {Shell Project}
 
@@ -79,15 +79,15 @@
 
 * {Add a project from the Project Group}
 
-    From the Project Group, you can add a project without to use the menu. With this operation, the Project Group will be set to the current group.
+    From the Project Group, you can add a project without using the menu. With this operation, the Project Group will be set to the current group.
 
 [../../images/add-project-from-group.png] Add a project from a project group
 
 * {Scm hints}
 
-** {Clearcase}
+** {ClearCase}
 
-    With Clearcase, you can configure SCM things in few ways. For example, you can use, in the scm url in your POM, the absolute path of your config spec file like this:
+    With ClearCase, you can configure SCM things in few ways. For example, you can use, in the scm URL in your POM, the absolute path of your config spec file like this:
 
 +----------------------------+
 <scm>
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@
 </scm>
 +----------------------------+
 
-    The SCM URL format used for Clearcase is defined {{{http://maven.apache.org/scm/clearcase.html}here}}
+    The SCM URL format used for ClearCase is defined {{{http://maven.apache.org/scm/clearcase.html}here}}
 
     and you can create a <<<clearcase-settings.xml>>> file under <<<${user.home}/.scm/>>> with the following content:
 
@@ -106,5 +106,5 @@
 </clearcase-settings>
 +----------------------------+
 
-    This configuration won't work with each Clearcase installation because each Clearcase configuration is different, so we recommend to read the
-    {{{http://maven.apache.org/scm/clearcase.html}Clearcase page}} on the Maven-SCM site.
+    This configuration won't work with each ClearCase installation because each ClearCase configuration is different, so we recommend reading the
+    {{{http://maven.apache.org/scm/clearcase.html}ClearCase page}} on the Maven-SCM site.

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/editProject.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/editProject.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
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--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/editProject.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/editProject.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
 
 * {Project View}
 
-  When you edit a project from the groupSummary, you will see basics informations.
-  First part of the page contains some informations regarding :
+  When you edit a project from the Group Summary page, you will see basic information.
+  The first part of the page contains information regarding:
 
   * project name
 
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
   With the <<<'Edit'>>> button, you can change some project informations like the scm url if your project was moved.
   With the <<<'Build Now'>>> button, you build the project manually with the default build definition.
 
-  Second part contains informations regarding :
+  Second part contains information regarding:
 
   * project notifiers
 

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/removeProject.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/removeProject.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
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--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/removeProject.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/managing_project/removeProject.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@
 
 Remove a Project
 
-    To remove a project, go to the project group summary and use the <<delete>> icon.
+    To remove a project, go to the Project Group Summary and click the <<delete>> icon.
 
 [../../images/delete.gif] Delete icon
 
-    You can also use the <<<'Delete group'>>> button in the project group summary to remove the whole project group.
+    You can also use the <<<'Delete group'>>> button in the Project Group Summary to remove the whole project group.

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/notification/index.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/notification/index.apt?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
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--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/notification/index.apt (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/apt/user_guides/notification/index.apt Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@
  Oct 3 2007
  ------
 
-Notification
+Managing Notification
 
-  Notifiers can be attached to a project with adding them in a pom in the {{{http://maven.apache.org/pom.html#Continuous_Integration_Management}ciManagement section}}.
+  Notifiers can be attached to a Maven project by adding them to the pom in the {{{http://maven.apache.org/pom.html#Continuous_Integration_Management}ciManagement section}}.
   
 +-------------------------------+
   
@@ -31,23 +31,23 @@
   
 +-------------------------------+  
 
-  Or they can be added to a projectGroup with the Notifiers link :
+  Or they can be added to a Project Group with the Notifiers link:
   
 [../../images/notifiers-link-project-group.png] Notifiers Link  
   
-  Or to a project with the add button in the edit project page :
+  Or to a project with the Add button on the Edit Project page:
   
 [../../images/notifiers-button-project.png] Notifier Button 
 
-  Here you will the choice between notifiers implementation provided with continuum
+  Here you select between Notifier implementations provided with Continuum:
 
 [../../images/notifiers-type-choice.png] Notifier Type Choice
 
-  You have the following choices :
+  You have the following choices:
   
   * {{{mail.html}Mail}}
   
-  * {{{irc.html}Irc}}
+  * {{{irc.html}IRC}}
   
   * {{{jabber.html}Jabber}}
   

Modified: continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/site.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/site.xml?rev=695126&r1=695125&r2=695126&view=diff
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--- continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/site.xml (original)
+++ continuum/trunk/continuum-docs/src/site/site.xml Sat Sep 13 23:44:14 2008
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
         <item name="Adding Project Group" href="administrator_guides/projectgroup.html"/>
         <item name="Managing Builders" href="administrator_guides/builder.html"/>
         <item name="Managing JDKs" href="administrator_guides/jdk.html"/>
-        <item name="Managing Profiles" href="administrator_guides/profiles.html"/>
+        <item name="Managing Build Environments" href="administrator_guides/profiles.html"/>
         <item name="Managing Schedules" href="administrator_guides/schedules.html"/>
         <item name="Managing General Configuration" href="administrator_guides/configuration.html"/> <!-- (configuration and appearance) -->
         <item name="Managing Local Repositories" href="administrator_guides/localRepository.html"/>