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Posted to commits@cordova.apache.org by mw...@apache.org on 2013/07/16 23:20:55 UTC
[4/8] docs commit: [CB-3962] started removing we/let's,
but there are too many for now
[CB-3962] started removing we/let's, but there are too many for now
Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/commit/a6d123a2
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/tree/a6d123a2
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/diff/a6d123a2
Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: a6d123a288656f30bb6e9b9b1a3a672a569a4f46
Parents: b624d4e
Author: Mike Sierra <le...@gmail.com>
Authored: Tue Jul 16 10:18:25 2013 -0400
Committer: Michael Brooks <mi...@michaelbrooks.ca>
Committed: Tue Jul 16 14:15:56 2013 -0700
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STYLESHEET.md | 4 ++--
docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/plugin.md | 10 +++++-----
2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/blob/a6d123a2/STYLESHEET.md
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diff --git a/STYLESHEET.md b/STYLESHEET.md
index e77e02d..cb4667b 100644
--- a/STYLESHEET.md
+++ b/STYLESHEET.md
@@ -81,8 +81,8 @@ editorial guidelines.
* Do not start a sentence with a lowercase member name.
* Do not refer to "I," the author of the documentation, as in "What I
- am going to show you now." Likewise avoid "we," as in "We see
- that..."
+ am going to show you now." Likewise avoid "we" and "let's," so
+ instead of "We see that..." try "Note that..."
* OK to refer to "you," the developer, but only if necessary, e.g., to
avoid passive voice.
http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/blob/a6d123a2/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/plugin.md
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diff --git a/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/plugin.md b/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/plugin.md
index 39a79d7..dba4f2d 100644
--- a/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/plugin.md
+++ b/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/plugin.md
@@ -49,9 +49,9 @@ by Cordova.
## Writing an Android Java Plugin
-We have JavaScript to fire off a plugin request to the native side. We
-have the Android Java plugin mapped properly via the `config.xml` file.
-So what does the final Android Java Plugin class look like?
+JavaScript fires off a plugin request to the native side. The Android
+Java plugin is mapped properly via the `config.xml` file. So what
+does the final Android Java Plugin class look like?
What gets dispatched to the plugin via JavaScript's `exec` function gets
passed into the Plugin class's `execute` method. Most `execute`
@@ -116,11 +116,11 @@ If you do not need to run on the UI thread, but do not want to block the WebCore
### Echo Android Plugin Example
-We would add the following to our config.xml:
+Add the following to our `config.xml` file:
<plugin name="Echo" value="org.apache.cordova.plugin.Echo" />
-Then we would add the following file to
+Then add the following file to
`src/org/apache/cordova/plugin/Echo.java` inside our Cordova-Android
application: