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[jira] Created: (FELIX-2814) Spelling Mistake
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Key: FELIX-2814
URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FELIX-2814
Project: Felix
Issue Type: Bug
Components: Felix Commons
Reporter: Andriyko
Please excuse my spelling bug-reports, but it really bothers me to read this.
On the documentation page:
http://felix.apache.org/site/providing-osgi-services.html#ProvidingOSGiservices-Instancereconfiguration
Under "Service Publication" section, first paragraph:
1. "The provided service handler manages the service publication and providing". I think "providing" is not a correct word to use here.
2. "For each declared <provides/>, the handler register a service.". And it should be "registers".
3. "As the @Provides annotation can be used only once, only on service is registered (but publishing all interfaces)." - There are two mistakes here: first, change "on" to "one", second - "but publishing all interfaces" I think should be changed to "but all interfaces are published".
In the second paragraph, last sentence:
1. "However it is possible to set exposed specifications with the specifications attribute to avoid to expose all collected interfaces". I think "to avoid to expose all" should be changed to "to avoid exposing all...". Also - this sentence is very confusing in general - is it possible to simplify it?
Furthermore, following the code sample after this paragraph, the three change notices (blue boxes) are not left-aligned. I don't know if it is like that intentionally or not.
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[jira] Updated: (FELIX-2814) Spelling Mistake
Posted by "Clement Escoffier (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
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Clement Escoffier updated FELIX-2814:
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Component/s: (was: Felix Commons)
iPOJO
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> Key: FELIX-2814
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FELIX-2814
> Project: Felix
> Issue Type: Bug
> Components: iPOJO
> Reporter: Andriyko
> Assignee: Clement Escoffier
> Labels: documentaion, felix,, osgi,
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> Please excuse my spelling bug-reports, but it really bothers me to read this.
> On the documentation page:
> http://felix.apache.org/site/providing-osgi-services.html#ProvidingOSGiservices-Instancereconfiguration
> Under "Service Publication" section, first paragraph:
> 1. "The provided service handler manages the service publication and providing". I think "providing" is not a correct word to use here.
> 2. "For each declared <provides/>, the handler register a service.". And it should be "registers".
> 3. "As the @Provides annotation can be used only once, only on service is registered (but publishing all interfaces)." - There are two mistakes here: first, change "on" to "one", second - "but publishing all interfaces" I think should be changed to "but all interfaces are published".
> In the second paragraph, last sentence:
> 1. "However it is possible to set exposed specifications with the specifications attribute to avoid to expose all collected interfaces". I think "to avoid to expose all" should be changed to "to avoid exposing all...". Also - this sentence is very confusing in general - is it possible to simplify it?
> Furthermore, following the code sample after this paragraph, the three change notices (blue boxes) are not left-aligned. I don't know if it is like that intentionally or not.
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[jira] Resolved: (FELIX-2814) Spelling Mistake
Posted by "Clement Escoffier (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
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Clement Escoffier resolved FELIX-2814.
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Resolution: Fixed
Assignee: Clement Escoffier
Richard has fixed the issues. It will be updated during the next sync.
Thanks !
Clement
> Spelling Mistake
> ----------------
>
> Key: FELIX-2814
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FELIX-2814
> Project: Felix
> Issue Type: Bug
> Components: Felix Commons
> Reporter: Andriyko
> Assignee: Clement Escoffier
> Labels: documentaion, felix,, osgi,
>
> Please excuse my spelling bug-reports, but it really bothers me to read this.
> On the documentation page:
> http://felix.apache.org/site/providing-osgi-services.html#ProvidingOSGiservices-Instancereconfiguration
> Under "Service Publication" section, first paragraph:
> 1. "The provided service handler manages the service publication and providing". I think "providing" is not a correct word to use here.
> 2. "For each declared <provides/>, the handler register a service.". And it should be "registers".
> 3. "As the @Provides annotation can be used only once, only on service is registered (but publishing all interfaces)." - There are two mistakes here: first, change "on" to "one", second - "but publishing all interfaces" I think should be changed to "but all interfaces are published".
> In the second paragraph, last sentence:
> 1. "However it is possible to set exposed specifications with the specifications attribute to avoid to expose all collected interfaces". I think "to avoid to expose all" should be changed to "to avoid exposing all...". Also - this sentence is very confusing in general - is it possible to simplify it?
> Furthermore, following the code sample after this paragraph, the three change notices (blue boxes) are not left-aligned. I don't know if it is like that intentionally or not.
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