[GitHub] camel pull request #2119: FUSEDOC-2096 - Update links and correct grammar

[nichmoore <gi...@git.apache.org>]

GitHub user nichmoore opened a pull request:

    https://github.com/apache/camel/pull/2119

    FUSEDOC-2096 - Update links and correct grammar

    I've amended some of the grammar.
    The section called 'Using the JPA based idempotent repository' particularly needs to be looked at because:
    - The instructions were not clear. The language was very strange and at times incomprehensible. I've rewritten it as best as I can but it needs a review.
    - It seemed that assumptions were made about the level of prior knowledge as far as this subject goes. A straw poll of developers here shows that they know the concept, but not necessarily that terminology. 
    - The examples were missing. Asciidoc doesn't seem to handle snippets at all.
     


You can merge this pull request into a Git repository by running:

    $ git pull https://github.com/nichmoore/camel FUSEDOC-2096

Alternatively you can review and apply these changes as the patch at:

    https://github.com/apache/camel/pull/2119.patch

To close this pull request, make a commit to your master/trunk branch
with (at least) the following in the commit message:

    This closes #2119
    
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commit 720e6235351f37fe049bfcda31ef69bd0712c31a
Author: nmoore <nm...@redhat.com>
Date:   2017-11-24T00:57:10Z

    FUSEDOC-2096 - Update links and correct grammar

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[GitHub] camel pull request #2119: FUSEDOC-2096 - Update links and correct grammar

[oscerd <gi...@git.apache.org>]

Github user oscerd closed the pull request at:

    https://github.com/apache/camel/pull/2119


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