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[09/12] incubator-predictionio git commit: Update the Recommendation Quickstart

Update the Recommendation Quickstart

* Clean up some of the language (fix suffixes, remove unnecessary pronouns)
* Add specificity, clarity, and structure to the rate/buy examples
* Fix typo in buy example


Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-predictionio/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-predictionio/commit/2e8d0c22
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-predictionio/tree/2e8d0c22
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-predictionio/diff/2e8d0c22

Branch: refs/heads/develop
Commit: 2e8d0c2222516fb3a2cbf1dd532f34d8ccd5fc74
Parents: 03e9981
Author: Chris Woodford <ch...@gmail.com>
Authored: Wed Nov 2 11:21:13 2016 -0700
Committer: Donald Szeto <do...@apache.org>
Committed: Wed Nov 2 11:21:13 2016 -0700

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 .../templates/recommendation/quickstart.html.md.erb   | 14 +++++++++++---
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-predictionio/blob/2e8d0c22/docs/manual/source/templates/recommendation/quickstart.html.md.erb
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diff --git a/docs/manual/source/templates/recommendation/quickstart.html.md.erb b/docs/manual/source/templates/recommendation/quickstart.html.md.erb
index 11e6292..2ad5872 100644
--- a/docs/manual/source/templates/recommendation/quickstart.html.md.erb
+++ b/docs/manual/source/templates/recommendation/quickstart.html.md.erb
@@ -48,13 +48,17 @@ NOTE: You can customize to use other event.
 
 Next, let's collect some training data. By default,
 the Recommendation Engine Template supports 2 types of events: **rate** and
-**buy**. A user can give a rating score to an item or he can buy an item. This template requires user-view-item and user-buy-item events.
+**buy**. A user can give a rating score to an item or buy an item. This template requires user-view-item and user-buy-item events.
 
 INFO: This template can easily be customized to consider more user events such as *like*, *dislike* etc.
 
 <%= partial 'shared/quickstart/collect_data' %>
 
-For example, when a user with ID "u0" rate an item with ID "i0" with rating of 5 on time `2014-11-02T09:39:45.618-08:00` (current time will be used if eventTime is not specified), you can send the following "rate" event. Run the following `curl` command:
+### Example **rate** event
+
+A user (ID "u0") gives an item (ID "i0") a rating of 5 at `2014-11-02T09:39:45.618-08:00` (current time will be used if eventTime is not specified)
+
+Run the following `curl` command to send the `rate` event:
 
 <div class="tabs">
   <div data-tab="REST API" data-lang="json">
@@ -156,7 +160,11 @@ client.createEvent(rateEvent);
   </div>
 </div>
 
-When a user with ID "u1" buy an item with ID "i2" on time `2014-11-10T12:34:56.123-08:00` (current time will be used if eventTime is not specified), you can send the following "rate" event. Run the following `curl` command:
+### Example **buy** event
+
+A user (ID "u1") buys an item (ID "i2") at `2014-11-10T12:34:56.123-08:00` (current time will be used if eventTime is not specified)
+
+Run the following `curl` command to send the `buy` event:
 
 <div class="tabs">
   <div data-tab="REST API" data-lang="json">