[GitHub] [jena-site] kinow commented on a change in pull request #79: More documentation

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kinow commented on a change in pull request #79:
URL: https://github.com/apache/jena-site/pull/79#discussion_r762622539



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File path: source/documentation/sparql-apis/__index.md
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@@ -89,26 +89,59 @@ objects have been removed.
 
 * Deprecate modifying `QueryExecution` after it is built.
 
-* Parameterization for remote queries.
-  Parameterization - replacing variables by values before sending
-  a query - makes the query into a template. The same applies to updates.
-  This is also provided uniformly for local queries and should be used in
-  preference to the local-only "initial binding" approach which is
-  similarly but not identical.
+* Substitution of variables for concrete values in query and update execution.
+  This is a form of paramterization that works in both local and remnote usage
+  (unlike "intial bindings" which are only available for lcoal query execution).

Review comment:
       s/lcoal/local

##########
File path: source/documentation/sparql-apis/__index.md
##########
@@ -89,26 +89,59 @@ objects have been removed.
 
 * Deprecate modifying `QueryExecution` after it is built.
 
-* Parameterization for remote queries.
-  Parameterization - replacing variables by values before sending
-  a query - makes the query into a template. The same applies to updates.
-  This is also provided uniformly for local queries and should be used in
-  preference to the local-only "initial binding" approach which is
-  similarly but not identical.
+* Substitution of variables for concrete values in query and update execution.
+  This is a form of paramterization that works in both local and remnote usage

Review comment:
       Also s/remnote/remote

##########
File path: source/documentation/sparql-apis/__index.md
##########
@@ -89,26 +89,59 @@ objects have been removed.
 
 * Deprecate modifying `QueryExecution` after it is built.
 
-* Parameterization for remote queries.
-  Parameterization - replacing variables by values before sending
-  a query - makes the query into a template. The same applies to updates.
-  This is also provided uniformly for local queries and should be used in
-  preference to the local-only "initial binding" approach which is
-  similarly but not identical.
+* Substitution of variables for concrete values in query and update execution.
+  This is a form of paramterization that works in both local and remnote usage

Review comment:
       s/paramterization/parameterization (I think)




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