[comdev-site] branch master updated: Update funding-disclaimer.md

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     new 3af02f7  Update funding-disclaimer.md
     new 2df59a5  Merge pull request #54 from cottage14/patch-38
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commit 3af02f7c9fe56dfcbb180aad29f9f1eda4216c07
Author: Andrew Wetmore <an...@cottage14.com>
AuthorDate: Fri Jan 15 11:24:57 2021 -0400

    Update funding-disclaimer.md
    
    Fixed typo and a couple of other small things.
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diff --git a/source/committers/funding-disclaimer.md b/source/committers/funding-disclaimer.md
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+++ b/source/committers/funding-disclaimer.md
@@ -2,19 +2,19 @@
 title: Funding campaign disclaimer
 ---
 
-Some Apache committers have successfully run funding campaigns to work on their favorite Apache projects.
+Some Apache committers have successfully run funding campaigns to support work on their favorite Apache projects.
 
-This is ok in principle but you have to make it clear that the campaign is your own thing, and avoid any confusion about the role of the 
+This is ok in principle, but you have to make clear that the campaign is your own thing, and avoid any confusion about the role of the 
 ASF and how its projects work.
 
 This page gives a few examples of that.
 
 If you have any question about this, feel free to ask on our 
-[dev@community.apache.org](https://lists.apache.org/list.html?dev@community.apache.org) mailing list.
+[dev@community.apache.org](https://lists.apache.org/list.html?dev@community.apache.org) email list.
 
 ## Example disclaimer for a personal crowdfunding campaign
 
-He's a nice example disclaimer used by one of our committers:
+Here's a nice example disclaimer used by one of our committers:
 
 ```text
     Disclaimers: This campaign is done by me, FOO, as an independent individual, not
@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@ campaign.
 ## Friends of Apache Groovy
 
 [Friends of Apache Groovy](https://opencollective.com/friends-of-groovy) is another good example which supports activities 
-in the Apache Groovy community.
+in the Apache Groovy community:
 
 The [explanation in their about section](https://opencollective.com/friends-of-groovy#section-about) makes it clear that that 
-initiative is _not_ affiliated or driven by the ASF, and also that any contributions, funded or not, have to go 
+initiative is _not_ affiliated or driven by the ASF, and also that any code or documentation contributions, funded or not, have to go 
 through the usual Apache Groovy acceptance process.