[jira] Resolved: (FELIX-2827) Spelling Mistake

["Clement Escoffier (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>]

     [ https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FELIX-2827?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ]

Clement Escoffier resolved FELIX-2827.
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    Resolution: Fixed
      Assignee: Clement Escoffier

> Spelling Mistake
> ----------------
>
>                 Key: FELIX-2827
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FELIX-2827
>             Project: Felix
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Documentation
>            Reporter: Andriyko
>            Assignee: Clement Escoffier
>              Labels: grammar, spelling
>
> In the Providing OSGI services:
> http://felix.apache.org/site/providing-osgi-services.html#ProvidingOSGiservices-Instancereconfiguration
> The mistakes are:
> 1. Under "Service Serving & Object Creation", first sentence in parenthesis, first word should be "from" not "form".
> 2. Under "Service Serving & Object Creation", in the bullet points under "Other strategies are available:", first point: "strategy="instance" allows creating one service object per asking iPOJO instance (despite they are in the same bundle)" - I find the use of word "asking" weird here, and the wording inside the parenthesis is confusing - what is in the same bundle as what?
> 3. In the section titled "Several Service Providing (XML only)", "Several Service Providing" is not a proper sentence or a combination of words, I think.
> 4. Under "Several Service Providing (XML only)", 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: "All this provided service will be manage" - should be "managed". Also it is not clear what is meant by - "by the same handler but separately", how can the same handler manage them "separately", as opposed to "together"?
> 5. Under "Service Property Propagation", 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence, ends in "to all published service.", should be "services".
> 6. Section titled "Publishing abstract and concrete class as services" perhaps should be titled "Publishing an Abstract or Concrete class as a Service"?. Same change must be carried into the 1st sentence.
> 7. Under "Publishing abstract and concrete class as services", last sentence of the section "However, such practice are not recommended.", should be "is not.".

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