svn commit: r883222 - in /websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk: cgi-bin/ content/ content/product/impress.html

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Author: buildbot
Date: Sat Oct 19 00:52:51 2013
New Revision: 883222

Log:
Staging update by buildbot for ooo-site

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    websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/cgi-bin/   (props changed)
    websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/content/   (props changed)
    websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/impress.html

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     <h1 class="title">Apache OpenOffice Impress</h1>
     <p class="rfloatimg"><a href="/product/pix/impress-big.png" title="Click for bigger version"><img alt="Screendump of Apache OpenOffice Impress" src="/product/pix/impress.png" /></a></p>
-<p><em>More power to your presentations</em></p>
+<p><em>Impress your audience with your presentations!</em></p>
 <p><strong>Impress</strong> is a truly outstanding tool for creating effective multimedia
 presentations. Your presentations will stand out with 2D and 3D clip art,
 special effects, animation, and high-impact drawing tools.</p>
 <p><em>Master Pages</em> simplify the task of preparing your materials. Save even more
-time by <a href="http://extensions.openoffice.org/templates" title="Download Apache OpenOffice Templates">downloading templates</a> from our Extensions repository.</p>
-<p>A <em>complete range of Views</em> are supported: Drawing / Outline / Slides / Notes /
+time by <a href="http://extensions.openoffice.org/templates" title="Download Apache OpenOffice Templates">downloading templates</a> from our Templates repository.</p>
+<p><em>Complete range of Views</em> are supported: Drawing / Outline / Slides / Notes /
 Handouts to meet all the needs of presenters and audiences, plus an optional
 multi-pane view to put all the tools at your fingertips.</p>
-<p><strong>Impress</strong> supports multiple monitors, so that presenters can look at something
-else while presenting their slides on a projector. Make the most of this With
-the free <a href="http://extensions.openoffice.org/project/presenter-screen" title="Download the Presenter Console Extension">Presenter Console Extension</a>, which lets you see your next slides
+<p><em>Multiple monitors support</em> so that presenters can have additional materials or notes while presenting their slides on a projector. 
+Make the most of this with the free <a href="http://extensions.openoffice.org/project/presenter-screen" title="Download the Presenter Console Extension">Presenter Console Extension</a>, which lets you see your next slides
 as well as the time and the speaker notes.</p>
-<p><strong>Impress</strong> has a complete range of <em>easy-to-use drawing and diagramming tools</em>
-to spice up your presentation.</p>
-<p>'Park' your most commonly used drawing tools around your screen ready for
+<p><em>Easy-to-use drawing and diagramming tools</em> - a complete range to spice up your presentation. 'Park' your most commonly used drawing tools around your screen ready for
 single-click access.</p>
 <p><em>Slide show Animation and Effects</em> bring your presentation to life. Fontworks
 provides stunning 2D and 3D images from text. Create lifelike 3D images with
 astounding speed and response.</p>
-<p>Save your presentations in OpenDocument format, the new international standard
-for office documents. This XML based format means you're not tied in to
-<strong>Impress</strong>. You can access your presentations from any OpenDocument compliant
+<p><em>.odp Standard</em> - Save your presentations in OpenDocument format, the new international standard
+for office documents. This XML based format means you're not tied up with using
+Impress. You can access your presentations from any OpenDocument compliant
 software.</p>
-<p>Of course, you are free to use your old Microsoft PowerPoint presentations, or
-save your work in PowerPoint format for sending to people who are still locked
-into Microsoft products. Alternatively, use <strong>Impress</strong>'s built-in ability to
-create Flash (.swf) versions of your presentations.</p>
+<p><em>.ppt &amp; .pptx support</em> - Of course, you are free to import your old Microsoft PowerPoint presentations, or
+save your work in PowerPoint format for sending to people who are still using Microsoft products. </p>
+<p><em>Flash .swf Support</em> Alternatively, use Impress's built-in ability to create Flash versions of your presentations.</p>
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