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Posted to dev@subversion.apache.org by "C. Michael Pilato" <cm...@collab.net> on 2004/02/06 13:45:44 UTC
Re: svn commit: r8569 - trunk/doc/book/book
kfogel@tigris.org writes:
> + <para>In February 2000, they contacted Karl Fogel, the author of a
> + 1999 book on CVS
How about, "the author of _Open Source Development with CVS_ (Coriolis,
1999)" (with the correct markup, of course). The current phrasing is
both awkward and misses a chance to prop your work by name. :-)
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Re: svn commit: r8569 - trunk/doc/book/book
Posted by kf...@collab.net.
"C. Michael Pilato" <cm...@collab.net> writes:
> > + <para>In February 2000, they contacted Karl Fogel, the author of a
> > + 1999 book on CVS
>
> How about, "the author of _Open Source Development with CVS_ (Coriolis,
> 1999)" (with the correct markup, of course). The current phrasing is
> both awkward and misses a chance to prop your work by name. :-)
Sure, done in r8574.
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