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Posted to commits@community.apache.org by rb...@apache.org on 2017/04/12 17:16:51 UTC

svn commit: r1791160 - /comdev/site/trunk/content/newsletter/2017-04.mdtext

Author: rbowen
Date: Wed Apr 12 17:16:51 2017
New Revision: 1791160

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1791160&view=rev
Log:
edits from shane. Time to consolidate to one copy of this

Modified:
    comdev/site/trunk/content/newsletter/2017-04.mdtext

Modified: comdev/site/trunk/content/newsletter/2017-04.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/comdev/site/trunk/content/newsletter/2017-04.mdtext?rev=1791160&r1=1791159&r2=1791160&view=diff
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--- comdev/site/trunk/content/newsletter/2017-04.mdtext (original)
+++ comdev/site/trunk/content/newsletter/2017-04.mdtext Wed Apr 12 17:16:51 2017
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ In this newsletter: [committer resources
 
 Thank you for your hard work on our Apache projects. You are the reason the Foundation exists, and your work is the reason we have the reputation we enjoy.
 
-In our recent community survey, we heard from a lot of you that you want more information about what committer resources are available, how to connect with developers from other projects, and more proactive messaging about what’s going on in the Foundation at large.
+In our recent community survey, we heard from a lot of you that you want more information about what committer resources are available, how to connect with developers from other projects, and more information about what’s going on in the Foundation at large.
 
-In this, the inaugural edition of the Apache Committers Newsletter, we’re trying to keep the committers better informed about what happens at Apache, and let you know about ways that you can become more involved with the Foundation as a whole.
+In this inaugural edition of the Apache Committers Newsletter, we’re trying to keep the committers better informed about what happens at Apache, and let you know about ways that you can become more involved with the Foundation as a whole.
 
 ## Committer Resources