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Posted to commits@directory.apache.org by sm...@apache.org on 2015/02/17 13:53:22 UTC

directory-fortress-core git commit: FC-66 - adjust introductory text

Repository: directory-fortress-core
Updated Branches:
  refs/heads/master 0d90d6e00 -> 95f9ceebe


FC-66 - adjust introductory text


Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/directory-fortress-core/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/directory-fortress-core/commit/95f9ceeb
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/directory-fortress-core/tree/95f9ceeb
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/directory-fortress-core/diff/95f9ceeb

Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: 95f9ceebe66a167b07d153a40d3abc2934f72d5d
Parents: 0d90d6e
Author: Shawn McKinney <sm...@apache.org>
Authored: Tue Feb 17 06:53:06 2015 -0600
Committer: Shawn McKinney <sm...@apache.org>
Committed: Tue Feb 17 06:53:06 2015 -0600

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 README-TEN-MINUTE-GUIDE.txt                                   | 4 ++++
 .../directory/fortress/core/doc-files/ten-minute-guide.html   | 7 ++++---
 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/directory-fortress-core/blob/95f9ceeb/README-TEN-MINUTE-GUIDE.txt
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diff --git a/README-TEN-MINUTE-GUIDE.txt b/README-TEN-MINUTE-GUIDE.txt
index 59648a4..825e191 100644
--- a/README-TEN-MINUTE-GUIDE.txt
+++ b/README-TEN-MINUTE-GUIDE.txt
@@ -22,6 +22,10 @@ ________________________________________________________________________________
 # Version 1.0-RC40
 # last updated: February 15, 2015
 ###################################################################################
+The documents linked by this guide provide the instructions to download, build
+and install Apache Fortress software from source.  It takes about ten minutes
+after completing the steps on this page.
+
 ___________________________________________________________________________________
 ###################################################################################
 # SECTION 0.  Prerequisites for Fortress Ten Minute Guide

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/directory-fortress-core/blob/95f9ceeb/src/main/java/org/apache/directory/fortress/core/doc-files/ten-minute-guide.html
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diff --git a/src/main/java/org/apache/directory/fortress/core/doc-files/ten-minute-guide.html b/src/main/java/org/apache/directory/fortress/core/doc-files/ten-minute-guide.html
index 2210dc1..52edd64 100644
--- a/src/main/java/org/apache/directory/fortress/core/doc-files/ten-minute-guide.html
+++ b/src/main/java/org/apache/directory/fortress/core/doc-files/ten-minute-guide.html
@@ -26,13 +26,14 @@
 <BODY>
 <p>
     <h3>Overview</h3>
-    The documents linked by this guide provides instructions to download, build and install Apache Fortress software from source in about ten minutes.
+    The documents linked by this guide provide the instructions to download, build and install Apache Fortress software from source.
+    It takes about ten minutes after completing the steps on this page.
     <br><br>
 <hr>
 <h4>Steps</h4>
 <fieldset>
     <legend><b>Navigation Links</b></legend>
-    These steps must be completed in order.  Except fortress rest, which is optional.
+    These steps should be completed in order.  Fortress Rest and Web are optional.
     <ul>
         <li><a href="./apache-directory-server.html">Setup Apache Directory Server</a></li>
         <li><a href="./apache-directory-studio.html">Setup Apache Directory Studio</a></li>
@@ -48,7 +49,7 @@
 <hr>
 <h4>Prerequisites</h4>
 These items are required and must be installed to target machine before any of these tutorial steps.  Instructions cover Debian and Fedora system syntax.
-Fortress is Java, runs on various platforms, but the others are not be covered here.
+Fortress is written in Java, runs on various platforms, but the others are not be covered here.
 <ol type="1">
     <li>Java 7 (or greater) sdk installed.</li>
     <li><a href="http://git-scm.com/download/linux">Git Download for Linux and Unix</a></li>