svn commit: r1533675 - /openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/draw.mdtext

[sm...@apache.org]

Author: smansour
Date: Sat Oct 19 01:22:41 2013
New Revision: 1533675

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1533675
Log:
Changed language and changed points to state feature at the beginning of the sentence (more obvious to user).

Modified:
    openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/draw.mdtext

Modified: openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/draw.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/draw.mdtext?rev=1533675&r1=1533674&r2=1533675&view=diff
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--- openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/draw.mdtext (original)
+++ openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/draw.mdtext Sat Oct 19 01:22:41 2013
@@ -18,21 +18,21 @@ Notice:    Licensed to the Apache Softwa
 
 [![Screendump of Apache OpenOffice Draw](/product/pix/draw.png)](/product/pix/draw-big.png "Click for bigger version") # {.rfloatimg}
 
-*The powerful graphics package*
+*Makes drawing business processes and diagrams a snap!*
 
-**Draw** - from a quick sketch to a complex plan, **Draw** gives you the tools
+**Draw** - from a quick sketch to a complex plan, Draw gives you the tools
 to communicate with graphics and diagrams. With a maximum page size of 300cm by
-300cm, **Draw** is powerful tool for technical or general posters, etc.
+300cm, Draw is powerful tool for technical or general posters, etc.
 
 'Park' your most commonly used drawing tools around your screen ready for
 single-click access.
 
 Use *Styles and Formatting* to put all your graphics styles at your finger tips.
 
-Manipulate objects, rotate in two or three dimensions; the *3D controller* puts
-spheres, rings, cubes, etc. at your disposal.
+*Manipulate objects*, rotate in two or three dimensions; the *3D controller* allows you to create
+spheres, rings, cubes, etc. in a quick pinch.
 
-*Arrange objects*: group, ungroup, regroup, and edit objects while grouped.
+*Arrange objects*, group, ungroup, regroup, and edit objects while grouped.
 Sophisticated *rendering* let you create photorealistic images with your own
 texture, lighting effects, transparency, perspective, and so on.
 
@@ -42,14 +42,14 @@ diagrams, etc. Define your own 'glue poi
 *Dimension lines* automatically calculate and display linear dimensions as you
 draw.
 
-Use the picture *Gallery* for clipart; create your own art and add it to the
+Use the picture *Gallery* for clipart; you can also create your own art and add it to the
 Gallery.
 
 Save your graphics in OpenDocument format, the new international standard for
-office documents. This XML based format means you're not tied in to **Draw**.
+office documents. This XML based format means you're not tied into using Draw.
 You can access your graphics from any OpenDocument compliant software.
 
 *Import graphics* from all common formats (including BMP, GIF, JPEG, PNG, TIFF,
 and WMF).
 
-Use **Draw**'s free ability to create Flash (.swf) versions of your work.
+Use Draw's free feature to create Flash (.swf) versions of your work.