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Posted to ojb-dev@db.apache.org by to...@apache.org on 2004/06/27 11:03:37 UTC
cvs commit: db-ojb/src/doc/forrest/src/documentation/content/xdocs/docu index.xml
tomdz 2004/06/27 02:03:37
Modified: src/doc/forrest/src/documentation/content/xdocs/docu
index.xml
Log:
Better wording
Revision Changes Path
1.3 +11 -10 db-ojb/src/doc/forrest/src/documentation/content/xdocs/docu/index.xml
Index: index.xml
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RCS file: /home/cvs/db-ojb/src/doc/forrest/src/documentation/content/xdocs/docu/index.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- index.xml 26 Jun 2004 23:45:15 -0000 1.2
+++ index.xml 27 Jun 2004 09:03:37 -0000 1.3
@@ -30,23 +30,24 @@
<section>
<title>Introduction</title>
<p>
- Here can be found all documentation about OJB (except the
+ This section contains all documentation about OJB (except the
<link href="ext:wiki-page">wiki doc</link>).
</p>
<p>
- To prevent beginner's mistake we recommend to read the
- <link href="site:getting-started">getting-started</link>
- section and <link href="site:faq">FAQ</link>.
+ If you're new to OJB, we recommend that you start with reading the
+ <link href="site:getting-started">Getting Started section</link>
+ and the <link href="site:faq">FAQ</link>.
</p>
<p>
- Tools for building the metadata mapping files used by OJB can
- be <link href="site:large-metadata">found here</link>.
+ There are tools for building the metadata mapping files used by OJB.
+ Information about them can be
+ <link href="site:large-metadata">found here</link>.
</p>
<ul>
<li>
<link href="site:tutorials/summary">Tutorials</link>
<br/>
- Tutorials for all supported API's.
+ Tutorials for the API's supported by OJB.
</li>
<li>
<link href="site:guides/summary">Reference Guides</link>
@@ -56,12 +57,12 @@
<li>
<link href="site:howto/summary">Howto's</link>
<br/>
- Howto's provided by OJB user and committer.
+ Howto's provided by OJB users and committers.
</li>
<li>
<link href="site:testing/summary">Testing</link>
<br/>
- OJB quality assurance and test writing.
+ Info about OJB's quality assurance and test writing.
</li>
</ul>
</section>
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