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Posted to commits@cloudstack.apache.org by ra...@apache.org on 2013/08/23 12:28:55 UTC
git commit: updated refs/heads/4.2 to d1ec636
Updated Branches:
refs/heads/4.2 26978abc3 -> d1ec6362f
edit changes across assorted files
Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/commit/d1ec6362
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/tree/d1ec6362
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/diff/d1ec6362
Branch: refs/heads/4.2
Commit: d1ec6362f54193dcae58ffcb081845768d5ec7e6
Parents: 26978ab
Author: Radhika PC <ra...@citrix.com>
Authored: Fri Aug 23 15:58:33 2013 +0530
Committer: Radhika PC <ra...@citrix.com>
Committed: Fri Aug 23 15:58:33 2013 +0530
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docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml | 6 +++---
docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml | 2 +-
docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml | 12 +++++-------
docs/en-US/pvlan.xml | 2 +-
4 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/d1ec6362/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml b/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml
index 688ba34..a671329 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/add-remove-nic-ui.xml
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
<title>Adding a Network</title>
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
+ <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>In the left navigation, click Instances.</para>
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
<title>Removing a Network</title>
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
+ <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>In the left navigation, click Instances.</para>
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@
<title>Selecting the Default Network</title>
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
+ <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>In the left navigation, click Instances.</para>
http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/d1ec6362/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml b/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml
index 6c2b504..e6a018f 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/creating-shared-network.xml
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
<title>Configuring a Shared Guest Network</title>
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as administrator.</para>
+ <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as administrator.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>In the left navigation, choose Infrastructure.</para>
http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/d1ec6362/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml b/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml
index a1976da..193b916 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/non-contiguous-vlan.xml
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
extend the VLAN range.</para>
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
+ <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as an administrator or end user.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Ensure that the VLAN range does not already exist.</para>
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
<para>In the left navigation, choose Infrastructure. </para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>On Zones, click View More, then click the zone with which you want to work.</para>
+ <para>On Zones, click View More, then click the zone to which you want to work with.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Click Physical Network.</para>
@@ -50,15 +50,13 @@
<imagedata fileref="./images/edit-icon.png"/>
</imageobject>
<textobject>
- <phrase>edit-icon.png: button to add a VLAN range.</phrase>
+ <phrase>edit-icon.png: button to edit the VLAN range.</phrase>
</textobject>
</inlinemediaobject></para>
- <para>The VLAN Ranges field now be editable.</para>
+ <para>The VLAN Ranges field now is editable.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Enter the start and end of the VLAN range. If you have multiple ranges, separate them by
- a comma.</para>
- <para>For example: 200-210,300-350,500-600, 100-110</para>
+ <para>Specify the start and end of the VLAN range in comma-separated list.</para>
<para>Specify all the VLANs you want to use, VLANs not specified will be removed if you are
adding new ranges to the existing list. </para>
</listitem>
http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cloudstack/blob/d1ec6362/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml
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diff --git a/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml b/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml
index f647d93..eb4c1d8 100644
--- a/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml
+++ b/docs/en-US/pvlan.xml
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
<title>Creating a PVLAN-Enabled Guest Network</title>
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>Log in to the CloudPlatform UI as administrator.</para>
+ <para>Log in to the &PRODUCT; UI as administrator.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>In the left navigation, choose Infrastructure.</para>