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[GitHub] [comdev-site] rlenferink commented on a change in pull request #46: Update __index.md
rlenferink commented on a change in pull request #46:
URL: https://github.com/apache/comdev-site/pull/46#discussion_r548857560
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File path: source/calendars/__index.md
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@@ -7,39 +7,37 @@ This calendar lists major events relating to The Apache Software Foundation
and our many Apache projects. We also have an automated
[listing of upcoming Apache-related Meetups][5] (smaller events) available.
-This Calendar is maintained by Apache Community Development volunteers (ComDev);
-to have your event listed considered for addition please mail [dev@community.apache.org][1].
-Note that to be listed in this calendar events must <b>already</b> conform
+Apache Community Development (ComDev) volunteers maintain this calendar. To have your event considered for inclusion, email details to [dev@community.apache.org][1].
+We list events that <b>already</b> conform
Review comment:
Prefer to use markdown here
```suggestion
We list events that **already** conform
```
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File path: source/calendars/__index.md
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@@ -7,39 +7,37 @@ This calendar lists major events relating to The Apache Software Foundation
and our many Apache projects. We also have an automated
[listing of upcoming Apache-related Meetups][5] (smaller events) available.
-This Calendar is maintained by Apache Community Development volunteers (ComDev);
-to have your event listed considered for addition please mail [dev@community.apache.org][1].
-Note that to be listed in this calendar events must <b>already</b> conform
+Apache Community Development (ComDev) volunteers maintain this calendar. To have your event considered for inclusion, email details to [dev@community.apache.org][1].
+We list events that <b>already</b> conform
to the [Third Party Event Branding Policy][2] and have been approved by
-either the relevant Apache PMC or the Branding Committee.
+the relevant Apache PMC or the Branding Committee.
## Upcoming Events
<ul id="events">
<li><i>List loading</i></li>
</ul>
<em>Disclaimer: Events called 'ApacheCon' or 'Apache Roadshow' are
-official Apache Software Foundation events. Other listed events are put
-on by projects, or third-party producers, and are listed here to support
-our community, but are not official Foundation events.</em>
+official Apache Software Foundation events. Apache projects or third-party producers put on other listed events; we list them here to support
+our community, but they are not official Foundation events.</em>
<iframe src="https://www.google.com/calendar/embed?src=nerseigospses068jd57bk5ar8%40group.calendar.google.com&ctz=America/New_York"
style="border: 0" width="800" height="600" frameborder="0" scrolling="no"></iframe>
-This Calendar is also available as an [iCal feed][3]
+This calendar is also available as an [iCal feed][3]
<script src="/js/jquery-1.9.1.min.js"></script>
<script src="https://events.apache.org/js/events-calendar.js"></script>
<script src="https://apis.google.com/js/client.js"></script>
## Other Related Events
-In addition to major conferences that have applied for approval with us, there are a wide range of other
+In addition to major conferences that have applied for approval with us, there is a wide range of other
events which feature Apache projects and technologies. A list of upcoming
[Apache related Meetups is available][5], powered in part by [this script][6]
-(patches welcome!). Secondly, a crowd-sourced list of related events is maintained
+(patches welcome!). Second, a crowd-sourced list of related events is maintained
as a [Lanyrd Guide][4], and we encourage people to help list
-Apache project related events there.
+Apache-project-related events there.
Review comment:
Why the dashes? Is this some kind of convention?
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