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Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-mynewt-site/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-mynewt-site/commit/2ed1b4e7
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-mynewt-site/tree/2ed1b4e7
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-mynewt-site/diff/2ed1b4e7

Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: 2ed1b4e75579de59cee84cfdf335767472b40fad
Parents: e745c2e
Author: Jules S. Damji <dm...@comcast.net>
Authored: Sat Feb 27 12:41:20 2016 -0800
Committer: Jules S. Damji <dm...@comcast.net>
Committed: Sat Feb 27 12:41:20 2016 -0800

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 #Documentation Organization
 
-The technical literature for Apache Mynewt is organized into three manuals. The first describes the Real Time Operating System, its features as well as specifics, and how to get it running on your target. The second one describes how to use the build and packaging tool, Newt, to easily choose firmware modules for your target and compose them into a working executable. The third manual describes the device management tool, Newtmgr, to communicate with a remote device running Mynewt OS and monitor, configure, and upgrade it.
+The technical literature for Apache Mynewt is organized into three manuals. The first describes the Real Time Operating System (RTOS), its features and capabilites, and how to get it running on your target device. The second one demonstrates how to use the build and packaging tool, *Newt*, to easily choose firmware modules for your target and compose them into a working executable. The third manual shows how the device management tool, *Newtmgr*, can communicate with a remote device running Mynewt OS and monitor, configure, and upgrade it.
 
-Each manual includes one or more tutorials for hands-on experience with the material described.
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+For you to learn and get some hands-on experience, each manual includes one or more tutorials. We encourage that you try them, and do send us your feedback.
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