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[GitHub] [camel] sadler-elena commented on a diff in pull request #8507: Polished docs: fixed grammar and wording issues

sadler-elena commented on code in PR #8507:
URL: https://github.com/apache/camel/pull/8507#discussion_r992038569


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docs/user-manual/modules/ROOT/pages/getting-started.adoc:
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@@ -1,31 +1,30 @@
 = Getting Started
 
-You can get started with Apache Camel using different ways, such as:
+You can get started with Apache Camel in a variety of ways, such as:
 
 - Using online Project generators
 - Using the Camel CLI (command line)
 - Using Camel Karavan (visual UI Camel designer)
 
-And these approaches requires more knowledge to perform:
+And more advanced methods:

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   And some more alternative methods:
   ```



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