[privacy-website] branch main updated: improved wording

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The following commit(s) were added to refs/heads/main by this push:
     new 27c90c4  improved wording
27c90c4 is described below

commit 27c90c4b740cdd0c516600ce8cca590c0fe0592d
Author: Christian Grobmeier <cg...@grobmeier.de>
AuthorDate: Mon Sep 26 22:46:27 2022 +0200

    improved wording
    
    fixes #9
---
 policies/privacy-policy-public.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/policies/privacy-policy-public.md b/policies/privacy-policy-public.md
index d9e99fd..5c704da 100644
--- a/policies/privacy-policy-public.md
+++ b/policies/privacy-policy-public.md
@@ -61,8 +61,8 @@ The following information is being collected without your intervention and store
 
 The data mentioned are processed by us for the following purposes:
 
- - Ensuring a smooth connection of the website
- - Ensuring comfortable use of our website
+ - Ensuring connectivity of our website
+ - Ensuring a use of our website, of which we think is comfortable for you
  - Evaluation of system security and stability
  - Other administrative purposes
 


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