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svn commit: r1889174 - /infrastructure/site/trunk/content/foundation/marks/contact.mdtext

Author: andreww
Date: Sun Apr 25 14:02:31 2021
New Revision: 1889174

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1889174&view=rev
Log:
Minor text edits to improve readability

Modified:
    infrastructure/site/trunk/content/foundation/marks/contact.mdtext

Modified: infrastructure/site/trunk/content/foundation/marks/contact.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/infrastructure/site/trunk/content/foundation/marks/contact.mdtext?rev=1889174&r1=1889173&r2=1889174&view=diff
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--- infrastructure/site/trunk/content/foundation/marks/contact.mdtext (original)
+++ infrastructure/site/trunk/content/foundation/marks/contact.mdtext Sun Apr 25 14:02:31 2021
@@ -31,10 +31,10 @@ See Also: [Trademark Resources Site Map]
 ## Uses in Events or Conferences ## {#events}
 
 Review the [Third Party Event Branding Policy][events] and ensure your 
-plans comply with the policy **first**.  Then send us an email confirming 
+plans comply with the policy **first**.  Then send an email confirming 
 your compliance with all points in the Event policy, and asking for 
-permission (or with any questions) to **both** the relevant project list 
-below, **and** cc: to `trademarks@apache.org`:
+permission (or with any questions), to the relevant project list 
+below **and** cc: to `trademarks@apache.org`:
 
 - [Apache Hadoop® Event Requests](mailto:trademarks@hadoop.apache.org?subject=%5bEVENT%5d Hadoop Event branding use request)
 - [Apache CloudStack® Event Requests](mailto:private@cloudstack.apache.org?subject=%5bEVENT%5d CloudStack Event branding use request)
@@ -45,9 +45,9 @@ below, **and** cc: to `trademarks@apache
 ## Uses in Domain Names ## {#domains}
 
 Review the [Third Party Domain Name Branding Policy][domains] and ensure your 
-plans comply with the policy **first**.  Then send us an email confirming 
+plans comply with the policy **first**.  Then send an email confirming 
 your compliance with all points in the Domain policy, and asking for 
-permission (or with any questions) to **both** the relevant project list 
+permission (or with any questions), to the relevant project list 
 below, **and** cc: to `trademarks@apache.org`:
 
 - [Apache Hadoop® Domain Name Requests](mailto:trademarks@hadoop.apache.org?subject=%5bDOMAIN%5d Hadoop Domain Name branding use request)
@@ -60,12 +60,12 @@ below, **and** cc: to `trademarks@apache
 
 We are currently working on guidelines that allow simpler use of Apache 
 brands in such situations in ways that improve the image and reach 
-of Apache projects.  For the time being, you can email [trademarks@](mailto:trademarks@apache.org?subject=%5bMERCH%5d Merchandising branding use request)
+of Apache projects.  For the time being, you can email [trademarks@](mailto:trademarks@apache.org?subject=%5bMERCH%5d Merchandising branding use request).
 
 ## Uses in Software Products ## {#products}
 
-Since the primary goods of any Apache project is a software product 
-provided [free of charge][free] to the general public, we do not generally allow third parties 
+Since the primary goods of any Apache project are software products 
+provided [free of charge][free] to the general public, we generally do not allow third parties 
 to use Apache brands in their software product branding.
 
 You may be eligible to use our [Powered By][poweredby] branding style
@@ -73,8 +73,8 @@ in your software product naming, which d
 as you follow *all* aspects of the policy, in particular **always** using the 
 "Apache *Projectname*" form.
 
-Separately, we offer a set of [Powered By Apache][poweredbylogo] logos that 
-may be used to show support of or use of various Apache software projects.
+Separately, we offer a set of [Powered By Apache][poweredbylogo] logos that you
+may use to show support for or use of various Apache software projects.
 
 ## Uses in Software Hosting, Training, or any Related Services ## {#services]
 



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