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[GitHub] [cloudstack-documentation] Hudratronium opened a new pull request #194: clearification of the advanced network setup in section "Host KVM installation"
Hudratronium opened a new pull request #194:
URL: https://github.com/apache/cloudstack-documentation/pull/194
I rewrote the setup-description, thinking is gives a better overview of the logical topology of the setup.
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[GitHub] [cloudstack-documentation] Hudratronium commented on a change in pull request #194: clearification of the advanced network setup in section "Host KVM installation"
Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
Hudratronium commented on a change in pull request #194:
URL: https://github.com/apache/cloudstack-documentation/pull/194#discussion_r588691197
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File path: source/installguide/hypervisor/kvm.rst
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@@ -645,11 +645,10 @@ although a reboot is recommended to see if everything works properly.
Network Example for Advanced Networks
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
-In the Advanced networking mode is most common to have (at least) two physical interfaces.
-In this example we will again have the hypervisor management interface on cloudbr0 on the
-untagged (native) VLAN. But now we will have a bridge on top of our additional interface (eth1)
-for public and guest traffic with no VLANs applied by us - CloudStack will add the VLANs
-as required.
+In the Advanced networking mode is most common to have (at least) two physical interfaces per hypervior-host.
+We will use the interface eth0 linked to the bridge 'cloudbr0' using the untagged (native) VLAN for hypervisor management.
+Additionally we configure a the second interface for usage with the bridge 'cloudbr1' for public and guest traffic.
Review comment:
Added suggestions - thanks for checking and reading carefully :-)
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[GitHub] [cloudstack-documentation] rhtyd merged pull request #194: clearification of the advanced network setup in section "Host KVM installation"
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rhtyd merged pull request #194:
URL: https://github.com/apache/cloudstack-documentation/pull/194
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[GitHub] [cloudstack-documentation] DaanHoogland commented on pull request #194: clearification of the advanced network setup in section "Host KVM installation"
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DaanHoogland commented on pull request #194:
URL: https://github.com/apache/cloudstack-documentation/pull/194#issuecomment-791503594
requesting docbuild
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[GitHub] [cloudstack-documentation] GabrielBrascher commented on a change in pull request #194: clearification of the advanced network setup in section "Host KVM installation"
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GabrielBrascher commented on a change in pull request #194:
URL: https://github.com/apache/cloudstack-documentation/pull/194#discussion_r588507443
##########
File path: source/installguide/hypervisor/kvm.rst
##########
@@ -645,11 +645,10 @@ although a reboot is recommended to see if everything works properly.
Network Example for Advanced Networks
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
-In the Advanced networking mode is most common to have (at least) two physical interfaces.
-In this example we will again have the hypervisor management interface on cloudbr0 on the
-untagged (native) VLAN. But now we will have a bridge on top of our additional interface (eth1)
-for public and guest traffic with no VLANs applied by us - CloudStack will add the VLANs
-as required.
+In the Advanced networking mode is most common to have (at least) two physical interfaces per hypervior-host.
+We will use the interface eth0 linked to the bridge 'cloudbr0' using the untagged (native) VLAN for hypervisor management.
+Additionally we configure a the second interface for usage with the bridge 'cloudbr1' for public and guest traffic.
Review comment:
`Additionally we configure a the second interface`
:arrow_down: I would suggest removing `a`, but you might remove `the` instead, if you prefer
`Additionally, we configure the second interface`
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[GitHub] [cloudstack-documentation] DaanHoogland commented on a change in pull request #194: clearification of the advanced network setup in section "Host KVM installation"
Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
DaanHoogland commented on a change in pull request #194:
URL: https://github.com/apache/cloudstack-documentation/pull/194#discussion_r585338334
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File path: source/installguide/hypervisor/kvm.rst
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@@ -694,7 +693,7 @@ Make sure it looks similar to:
TYPE=Ethernet
BRIDGE=cloudbr0
-We now have to configure the VLAN interfaces:
+We now have to configure the second network-interface:
Review comment:
```suggestion
We now have to configure the second network-interface for use in guest VLANs:
```
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