Re: Stanbol graduation press release

[Fabian Christ <ch...@googlemail.com>]

Hi,

thanks! The final press release is now online at http://s.apache.org/ul1

Best,
 - Fabian

2012/9/28 Bertrand Delacretaz <bd...@apache.org>:
> Hi Fabian,
>
> Thanks for this, minor suggestions inline.
>
> On Thu, Sep 27, 2012 at 3:45 PM, Fabian Christ
> <ch...@googlemail.com> wrote:
>> ...semantic services
>> for automatic content enhancement, a process where plain text is
>> automatically enriched...
>
> I'd say "content" instead of "plain text"
>
>> Providing reusable components that can be used to enhance content
>> automatically, is an important step...
>
> no comma after automatically
>
>> ...content to other existing resources, adds the kind of value that could...
>
> no comma after resources
>
>> ...developers of content management systems. The Project provides...
>
> lowercase project (spot the germans ;-)
>
>> detection, named entity recognition, and engines for linking entities
>
> no comma after recognition
>
>> "CELI France, thanks to the integration with Stanbol, we were able to
>> integrate...
>
> "at CELI France" ?
>
>> our curriculum vitae (CV) parsing technology with main
>> stream open source document management system, said...
>
> mainstream open source document management systems
>
> -Bertrand



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