[jira] [Commented] (CASSANDRA-10850) v4 spec has tons of grammatical mistakes

["Robert Stupp (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>]

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Robert Stupp commented on CASSANDRA-10850:
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[~stamhankar999], not everybody in the C* community is a native english speaker. Mind correcting the mistakes in the doc and provide a patch for it? Contributions are always welcome!

> v4 spec has tons of grammatical mistakes
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>
>                 Key: CASSANDRA-10850
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CASSANDRA-10850
>             Project: Cassandra
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Documentation and Website
>            Reporter: Sandeep Tamhankar
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> https://github.com/apache/cassandra/blob/cassandra-3.0/doc/native_protocol_v4.spec
> I notice the following in the first section of the spec and then gave up:
> "The list of allowed opcode is defined Section 2.3" => "The list of allowed opcode*s* is defined in Section 2.3"
> "the details of each corresponding message is described Section 4" => "the details of each corresponding message are described in Section 4" since the subject is details, not message.
> "Requests are those frame sent by" => "Requests are those frame*s* sent by"
> I think someone should go through the whole spec and fix all the mistakes rather than me pointing out the ones I notice piece-meal. I found the grammar errors to be rather distracting.



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