[jira] [Resolved] (PLC4X-145) Confusing text on index page

["Christofer Dutz (Jira)" <ji...@apache.org>]

     [ https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/PLC4X-145?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ]

Christofer Dutz resolved PLC4X-145.
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    Fix Version/s: 0.6.0
         Assignee: Christofer Dutz
       Resolution: Fixed

> Confusing text on index page
> ----------------------------
>
>                 Key: PLC4X-145
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/PLC4X-145
>             Project: Apache PLC4X
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Website
>            Reporter: Sebb
>            Assignee: Christofer Dutz
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 0.6.0
>
>
> The page http://plc4x.apache.org has the following text:
> Beyond implementing the pure adapters we have already implemented some of the planned integration modules to popular projects in the Apache IoT world such as:
> ... lots of logos ...
> Hereby greatly reducing the barriers and the learning curve for creating industrial IoT applications.
> This does not make sense -- Hereby should be Thereby -- and the second phrase is separated from the first. Indeed the second phrase is not a complete sentence in itself.
> Hereby is for declarations such as: "I hereby declare that ..."
> Thereby is for consequences.
> ===
> The page also says:
> "At first we will be concentrating on providing adapters for the most widely used protocol such as:"
> "protocol" should be plural.



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