svn commit: r1454814 - /openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/porting/index.html

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Author: pescetti
Date: Sun Mar 10 10:31:09 2013
New Revision: 1454814

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1454814
Log:
Improve wording

Modified:
    openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/porting/index.html

Modified: openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/porting/index.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/porting/index.html?rev=1454814&r1=1454813&r2=1454814&view=diff
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--- openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/porting/index.html (original)
+++ openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/porting/index.html Sun Mar 10 10:31:09 2013
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ send the details to our <a href="mailto:
         <ul>
           <li>
             <h3><a href="http://www.winpenpack.com/en/download.php?view.1341" title="X-ApacheOpenOffice">
-            X-ApacheOpenOffice by winPenPack</a> (Portable version for Windows)</h3>
+            X-ApacheOpenOffice by winPenPack</a> (Apache OpenOffice Portable version for Windows)</h3>
             Apache OpenOffice re-packaged as a live/portable program by the winPenPack team,
             allowing execution without further installation, from a USB Flash Drive or Hard Disk.
           </li>
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ send the details to our <a href="mailto:
 <h2>About ports and distributions</h2>
 
 <p>Apache OpenOffice (AOO) is a productivity suite which is already <a href="http://www.openoffice.org/download/other.html">
-available for the following platforms</a>:</p>
+officially available for the following platforms</a>:</p>
 <ul>
   <li>Windows         - XP, 2003, Vista, 7, 8 (32-bit)</li>
   <li>Linux           - RPM / DEB-based (32-bit and 64-bit)</li>
@@ -99,14 +99,14 @@ available for free but also for a charge
 
 <ul>
 <li>Getting the Source Code: Start to work with the <a href="http://openoffice.apache.org/source.html">Apache OpenOffice code</a></li>
-<li>Building the Source Code: Building <a href="http://wiki.openoffice.org/wiki/Documentation/Building_Guide_AOO">Apache OpenOffice code</a></li>
+<li>Building the Source Code: read the <a href="http://wiki.openoffice.org/wiki/Documentation/Building_Guide_AOO">Building Guide</a></li>
 <li>Introduction to Porting: <a href="http://wiki.openoffice.org/wiki/Porting_Introduction">Some tips for Porting</a></li>
 <li>Release of successful ports on regular basis: Once ports have been made, people are needed for preparing and providing the builds on a regular basis. Use the <a href="http://openoffice.apache.org/mailing-lists.html#development-mailing-list">
- Apache OpenOffice dev mailing list</a>.</li>
+ Apache OpenOffice dev mailing list</a> to coordinate.</li>
 <li>Create a new port. There is a certain demand for doing a port. At the moment there are no efforts visible for such a port. Create one! Use the <a href="http://openoffice.apache.org/mailing-lists.html#development-mailing-list">
- Apache OpenOffice dev mailing list</a>.</li>
-<li><a href="porting_implement.html">Implementation of Porting</a> (Needs to be updated!)</li>
-<li><a href="porting_doclinks.html">Links to Documentation</a> (Needs to be updated!)</li>
+ Apache OpenOffice dev mailing list</a> to coordinate.</li>
+<li><a href="porting_implement.html">Implementation of Porting</a> (outdated)</li>
+<li><a href="porting_doclinks.html">Links to Documentation</a> (outdated)</li>
 </ul>
 
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