[jira] Updated: (DERBY-1194) Clarify wording for ways to manage the Network Server in the Derby Server and Administration Guide

["Bryan Pendleton (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>]

     [ https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1194?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ]

Bryan Pendleton updated DERBY-1194:
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    Assignee: Bryan Pendleton
     Summary: Clarify wording for ways to manage the Network Server in the Derby Server and Administration Guide  (was: Derby Server and Administration Guide - Managing the Derby Network Server)

There are a lot of good suggestions in the attached patches, and in the various comments.

I will see if I can incorporate these into the current documentation page.

> Clarify wording for ways to manage the Network Server in the Derby Server and Administration Guide
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>
>                 Key: DERBY-1194
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1194
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.1.3.1
>         Environment: DITA files
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>            Assignee: Bryan Pendleton
>            Priority: Minor
>         Attachments: cadminconfig86869.diff, cadminconfig86869.diff.html, cadminconfig86869.html, cadminconfig86869_a.diff, cadminconfig86869_a.diff.html
>
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> In this manual is written:
> Managing the Derby Network Server
> The Derby Network Server can run as a stand-alone server, with Derby as an embedded part of the application.
> It can also be managed remotely from a web server by using a servlet interface. You can manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the command line, or the Network Server API. See Managing the Derby Network Server remotely by using the servlet interface for information about starting and shutting down the Network Server using the servlet interface.
> It seems to me that the sentences of this last paragraph are not in the correct order, and the first  and second sentences should be swapped, becoming:
> You can manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the command line, or the Network Server API. It can also be managed remotely from a web server by using a servlet interface. See Managing the Derby Network Server remotely by using the servlet interface for information about starting and shutting down the Network Server using the servlet interface.

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