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svn commit: r1875143 - in /ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign: community/contribute.html use-cases/provenusecases.html

Author: dmagda
Date: Thu Mar 12 23:13:39 2020
New Revision: 1875143

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1875143&view=rev
Log:
updated contribution and proven use cases pages

Modified:
    ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/community/contribute.html
    ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/use-cases/provenusecases.html

Modified: ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/community/contribute.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/community/contribute.html?rev=1875143&r1=1875142&r2=1875143&view=diff
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--- ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/community/contribute.html (original)
+++ ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/community/contribute.html Thu Mar 12 23:13:39 2020
@@ -54,11 +54,11 @@ under the License.
                 This guide discusses various types of contribution to Apache Ignite extending generic ideas
                 of the <a href="https://community.apache.org/gettingStarted/101.html" target="_blank">ASF Getting
                 Started</a>. Contributing to Ignite doesn’t just mean writing code. Helping new users on the mailing
-                list and improving documentation are also important. In fact, proposing significant code changes usually requires
-                first gaining experience and credibility within the community by helping in other ways.
+                list and improving documentation are also important. In fact, proposing significant code changes
+                usually requires first gaining experience and credibility within the community by helping in other ways.
             </p>
             <p>
-                The guide organizes contributions in order that should be considered by new contributors
+                The guide organizes contributions in an order that should be considered by new contributors
                 who intend to get involved long-term. Build some track record of helping others, become more
                 experienced with Ignite rather than solely focusing on code pull-requests.
             </p>
@@ -70,10 +70,10 @@ under the License.
 			
 				<h2>Getting Started</h2>
             	<p>
-                The first thing to do is to sign up to the <a href="mailto:dev@ignite.apache.org">dev mailing
-                list</a> and say "Hello" to everyone in the community. Tell us as much as you can about your areas of
+                The first thing to do is to join our <a href="mailto:dev@ignite.apache.org">dev mailing
+                list</a> and say "Hello" to everyone in the community. Tell us something about your areas of
                 expertise mentioning how exactly you would like to contribute. We are a friendly and inclusive
-                community and will try to simplify your "onboarding" considering your strengths or areas of interest.
+                community and will try to simplify your "onboarding" considering your strengths and areas of interest.
 
                 Also, make sure to share your JIRA ID in the same email
                 (<a href="https://issues.apache.org/jira/projects/IGNITE"target="_blank">create a new one</a>
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ under the License.
                 the contributors' list.
             </p>
             <p>
-                Next, check <a href="https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/IGNITE/How+to+Collaborate" target="_blank">
+                Next, check the <a href="https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/IGNITE/How+to+Collaborate" target="_blank">
                 How to Collaborate</a> page for more details on various communication channels used by the community
                 members. Even though most of the discussions take place on the dev list, we hang out on Slack.
             </p>
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ under the License.
 			<h2>Contribute by Helping Others</h2>
 
             <p>
-                A great way to contribute to Ignite and to get more practical experience is to help answer
+                A great way to contribute to Ignite and get more practical experience is by helping answer
                 user questions on the user@ignite.apache.org mailing list or on StackOverflow. Ignite users ask dozens
                 of questions daily; taking a few minutes to help answer a question or troubleshoot an issue is a very
                 valuable contribution to the project and community success.
@@ -116,9 +116,9 @@ under the License.
 		
 			<ul class="page-list">
                 <li>
-                    Come across a misprint or unclear documentation section? Use "Suggest Edits" feature of
-                    our <a href="https://apacheignite.readme.io/docs" target="_blank"> main documentation portal</a> to propose a
-                    change.
+                    Came across a misprint or unclear documentation section? Use "Suggest Edits" feature of
+                    our <a href="https://apacheignite.readme.io/docs" target="_blank"> main documentation portal</a> to
+                    propose a change.
                 </li>
                 <li>
                     Select any <a href="https://issues.apache.org/jira/issues/?jql=project%20%3D%20IGNITE%20AND%20resolution%20%3D%20Unresolved%20AND%20status%20not%20in%20(closed%2C%20resolved)%20and%20component%20%3D%20documentation%20%20ORDER%20BY%20priority%20DESC%2C%20updated%20DESC" target="_blank">
@@ -187,29 +187,29 @@ under the License.
                     SQL tasks</a> to start with.
                 </li>
                 <li>
-                    If you are more interested in .NET, Python, Node.JS or other programming languages different from
-                    Java then use <a
+                    If you are more interested in .NET, Python, Node.JS, or other programming languages different from
+                    Java, then use <a
                         href="https://issues.apache.org/jira/issues/?jql=project%20%3D%20IGNITE%20AND%20labels%20in%20(newbie)%20and%20component%20in%20(platforms)%20and%20status%20%3D%20OPEN" target="_blank">
-                    this filter</a> for the selection of the first tasks.
+                    this filter</a> to select your first task.
                 </li>
                 <li>
                     Curious in distributed data structures?
                     <a
                             href="https://issues.apache.org/jira/issues/?jql=project%20%3D%20IGNITE%20AND%20component%20in%20(%22data%20structures%22)%20and%20status%20%3D%20OPEN" target="_blank">
-                        Help to improve</a> existing ones or contribute a brand new.
+                        Help to improve</a> the existing ones or contribute a brand new.
                 </li>
             </ul>
             <p>
                 Still haven't found anything gripping? Search through all the tickets in
                 <a href="https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/IGNITE/">Ignite Jira</a>, check the latest Ignite
-                discussions on the dev list or simply email us.
+                discussions on the dev list, or simply email us.
             </p>
             
             
 			<h2>Become a Committer and PMC Member</h2>
             <p>
                 We love contributions and gladly promote active contributors to committers and PMC members! If you
-                are new to Apache Software Foundation then Ignite will be an excellent
+                are new to Apache Software Foundation then Ignite will be an excellent choice to start your journey.
             </p>
             <p>
                 The most important point of becoming a committer for Apache projects is active participation

Modified: ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/use-cases/provenusecases.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/use-cases/provenusecases.html?rev=1875143&r1=1875142&r2=1875143&view=diff
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--- ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/use-cases/provenusecases.html (original)
+++ ignite/site/branches/ignite-redisign/use-cases/provenusecases.html Thu Mar 12 23:13:39 2020
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ under the License.
         community attempts to accumulate all publicly disclosed production use cases of Ignite with some
         reference data. We hope the shared architectural and implementation details will help you to build
         more robust Ignite solutions. </p>
-      <p> If you have an Apache Ignite use case to share then do not hesitate reaching us out on <a href="mailto:dev@ignite.apache.org?Subject=Share my Apache Ignite Use Case"
+      <p> If you have an Apache Ignite use case to share, then do not hesitate to reach us out on <a href="mailto:dev@ignite.apache.org?Subject=Share my Apache Ignite Use Case"
                    aria-label="Send Email"> the Ignite dev list</a> and we'll get it added to this page. </p>
     
                    
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ under the License.
     
                            
       <h3 class="usecase-video-title"> Teradata </h3>
-      <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Apache Ignite usage for handling of real-time marketing campaigns. </p>
+      <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Apache Ignite usage for handling real-time marketing campaigns. </p>
       <div class="usecase-video">
         <iframe width="560" height="315" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/z28rthKIrDk" frameborder="0"
                                 allow="accelerometer; autoplay; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture" allowfullscreen></iframe>
@@ -82,13 +82,13 @@ under the License.
                            
       <h3 class="usecase-video-title">Yahoo! Japan</h3>
       <p> <a href="https://techblog.yahoo.co.jp/oss/yahoo_shopping_purchases_ignite/" aria-label="Session at Yahoo Japan" target="_blank" rel="noopener">This blog post</a> explains why Yahoo! Japan chose Apache Ignite as their solution for a highly scalable caching system that
-        can process tens of thousands requests per second. SQL queries were performed via thin clients since they do not require a standard
+        can process tens of thousands of requests per second. SQL queries were performed via thin clients since they do not require a standard
         topology join and therefore are easier to be handled through container services. After a successful POC, Ignite fully met their
         requirements and was quickly rolled into production. </p>
     
         
       <h3 class="usecase-video-title"> American Airlines </h3>
-      <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> American Airlines IT transformation with with the help of Apache Ignite. </p>
+      <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> American Airlines IT transformation with the help of Apache Ignite. </p>
       <div class="usecase-video">
         <iframe width="560" height="315" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/ZZI7MVE1ZBo" frameborder="0"
                                 allow="accelerometer; autoplay; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture" allowfullscreen></iframe>
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ under the License.
     
       
       <h3 class="usecase-video-title"> 24 Hour Fitness </h3>
-      <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Apache Ignite as a digital integration hub and database for a variety 24 Hour Fitness services. </p>
+      <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Apache Ignite as a digital integration hub and database for a variety of 24 Hour Fitness services. </p>
       <div class="usecase-video">
         <iframe width="560" height="315" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/EdFOKJIjRSg" frameborder="0"
                                 allow="accelerometer; autoplay; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture" allowfullscreen></iframe>
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ under the License.
       <h3 class="usecase-video-title">HomeAway</h3>
       <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> As HomeAway, a leading vacation rental website, moved to the cloud, they had to migrate a
         myriad of systems. One such is the high volume, low latency, real-time system that computes
-        pricing and powered by Apache Ignite. </p>
+        pricing and is powered by Apache Ignite. </p>
       <div class="usecase-video">
         <iframe width="560" height="315" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/qYd9GGRC4L0" frameborder="0"
                                 allow="accelerometer; autoplay; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture" allowfullscreen></iframe>
@@ -128,8 +128,8 @@ under the License.
     
       
       <h3 class="usecase-video-title">JacTravel</h3>
-      <p> <a href="https://www.imcsummit.org/2017/eu/sessions/using-memory-grid-compute-achieve-scalability-and-high-performance-legacy-travel" aria-label="In-Memory Computing Session" target="_blank" rel="noopener">This presentation</a> looks at the technical challenges presented to JacTravel Group,
-        following the acquisition of rival hotel accommodation provider, TotalStay Group in 2016.
+      <p> <a href="https://www.imcsummit.org/2017/eu/sessions/using-memory-grid-compute-achieve-scalability-and-high-performance-legacy-travel" aria-label="In-Memory Computing Session" target="_blank" rel="noopener">This presentation</a> looks at the technical challenges presented to JacTravel Group
+        following the acquisition of rival hotel accommodation provider TotalStay Group in 2016.
         Working with specialist technology consultancy, CG Consultancy, a strategic 18 month project
         was formed with a roadmap to consolidate booking platforms, ring-fence legacy functionality and
         to deliver enhanced search capability - underpinned with in-memory data grid capabilities of
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ under the License.
   
         
         <h3 class="usecase-video-title"> E-Therapeutics </h3>
-        <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Apache Ignite as a high-performance compute system for drugs discovery. </p>
+        <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Apache Ignite as a high-performance compute system for drugs' discovery. </p>
         <div class="usecase-video">
           <iframe width="560" height="315" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/PFHb-UuhGkk" frameborder="0"
                                 allow="accelerometer; autoplay; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture" allowfullscreen></iframe>
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ under the License.
       
         
         <h3 class="usecase-video-title">FSB Tech</h3>
-        <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Building real-time sports betting platform with Apache Ignite. </p>
+        <p class="usecase-video-presenter"> Building a real-time sports betting platform with Apache Ignite. </p>
         <div class="usecase-video">
           <iframe width="560" height="315" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/RxWLt3x_yBk" frameborder="0"
                                 allow="accelerometer; autoplay; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture" allowfullscreen></iframe>