svn commit: r1639294 - /directory/site/trunk/content/contribute.mdtext

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Author: pierresmits
Date: Thu Nov 13 10:35:23 2014
New Revision: 1639294

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1639294
Log:
JIRA issue DIR-311: rewording of the 'contribute' page to make it more appealing and inviting to participate. Re-wording 'contribution' paragraph. 2nd attempt.

Modified:
    directory/site/trunk/content/contribute.mdtext

Modified: directory/site/trunk/content/contribute.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/directory/site/trunk/content/contribute.mdtext?rev=1639294&r1=1639293&r2=1639294&view=diff
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--- directory/site/trunk/content/contribute.mdtext (original)
+++ directory/site/trunk/content/contribute.mdtext Thu Nov 13 10:35:23 2014
@@ -27,9 +27,8 @@ These contributions, whether you think o
 You can also consider donating in other ways to the Apache Software Foundation. Look for more information on that subject at this pages: [resource donation](http://www.apache.org/foundation/contributing.html) or [sponsorship program](http://apache.org/foundation/sponsorship.html).
 
 So, you consider contributing to our project. But how do you go about achieving this?
-Well, it is as easy as pie. The first thing youÕll need to do is subscribe to one of our mailing lists - see the overview below - and youÕre set to go to deliver your first contribution: a posting there, about how great our products are, what you found missing, or even the bug you got confronted with. You might even consider a more interactive approach and join the team on our IRC channel.
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-To begin with, we suggest you to subscribe to the [Directory Mailing Lists & IRC](mailing-lists-and-irc.html) (follow the link for information on how to subscribe and to access the mail list archives). Listen-in for a while, to see how others make contributions.
+Well, it is as easy as pie. To begin with, we suggest you to subscribe to the [Directory Mailing Lists & IRC](mailing-lists-and-irc.html) (follow the link for information on how to subscribe and to access the mail list archives). Listen-in for a while, to see how others make contributions.
+Now youÕre set to go to deliver your first contribution: a posting there, about how great our products are, what you found missing, or even the bug you got confronted with. You might even consider a more interactive approach and join the team on our IRC channel.
 
 
 Then you can :