svn commit: r1776602 - /directory/site/trunk/content/api/user-guide/1-introduction.mdtext

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Author: smckinney
Date: Fri Dec 30 16:24:31 2016
New Revision: 1776602

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1776602&view=rev
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    directory/site/trunk/content/api/user-guide/1-introduction.mdtext

Modified: directory/site/trunk/content/api/user-guide/1-introduction.mdtext
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 # 1 - Introduction
 
-This User Guide goal is to provide some clue for any developer wanting to use the LDAP API. We have mixed some description of each important features with some tested snippet of code (all of them has been integrated as tests in the API code).
+This User Guide teaches developers how to use the Apache LDAP API. Throughout these documents, we have interspersed descriptions of features with snippets of code.  These code samples are used by our integration tests as well.
 
-We hope it will be enough for you to quickly get started, but in any case, if you feel like improving this document, feel free to post your suggestion to the Apache Directory mailing list : any contribution is welcomed !
+Hopefully there's enough here to get you started -- quickly.  If you feel like improving this document or have questions / suggestions, please post to the Apache Directory mailing list.  All code and doc contributions welcome!
 
 ## Contents