[skywalking] 01/01: Update als_setting.md

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commit 57b6361b2491d8254a38ba2e3c8a6ffbff266a84
Author: kezhenxu94 <ke...@apache.org>
AuthorDate: Fri Sep 25 23:39:59 2020 +0800

    Update als_setting.md
---
 docs/en/setup/envoy/als_setting.md | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/en/setup/envoy/als_setting.md b/docs/en/setup/envoy/als_setting.md
index 02eb622..5c02dbd 100644
--- a/docs/en/setup/envoy/als_setting.md
+++ b/docs/en/setup/envoy/als_setting.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 # Observe service mesh through ALS
 Envoy [ALS(access log service)](https://www.envoyproxy.io/docs/envoy/latest/api-v2/service/accesslog/v2/als.proto) provides
-fully logs about RPC routed, including HTTP and TCP.
+full logs about RPC routed, including HTTP and TCP.
 
-If solution initialized and first implemented by [Sheng Wu](https://github.com/wu-sheng), [Hongtao Gao](https://github.com/hanahmily), [Lizan Zhou](https://github.com/lizan), 
+The solution is initialized and firstly implemented by [Sheng Wu](https://github.com/wu-sheng), [Hongtao Gao](https://github.com/hanahmily), [Lizan Zhou](https://github.com/lizan), 
 and [Dhi Aurrahman](https://github.com/dio) at 17 May. 2019, 
 and presented on [KubeCon China 2019](https://kccncosschn19eng.sched.com/event/NroB/observability-in-service-mesh-powered-by-envoy-and-apache-skywalking-sheng-wu-lizan-zhou-tetrate).
 Here is the recorded [Video](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tERm39ju9ew).
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ You need three steps to open ALS.
     ```
     istioctl manifest apply --set profile=demo --set meshConfig.defaultConfig.envoyAccessLogService.address=skywalking-oap.skywalking.svc:11800 --set meshConfig.enableEnvoyAccessLogService=true
     ```
-    Note:Skywalking oap service is at skywalking namespace, and the port of gRPC service is 11800
+    Note: SkyWalking OAP service is at skywalking namespace, and the port of gRPC service is 11800
     
 2. (Default is ACTIVATED) Activate SkyWalking [envoy receiver](../backend/backend-receivers.md). 
 3. Active ALS k8s-mesh analysis, set system env variable `SW_ENVOY_METRIC_ALS_HTTP_ANALYSIS`=`k8s-mesh`
@@ -27,14 +27,14 @@ envoy-metric:
     acceptMetricsService: ${SW_ENVOY_METRIC_SERVICE:true}
     alsHTTPAnalysis: ${SW_ENVOY_METRIC_ALS_HTTP_ANALYSIS:""} # Setting the system env variable would override this. 
 ```
-Note multiple value，please use `,` symbol split
+For multiple values，please use `,` symbol to concatenate.
 
 Here's an example to deploy SkyWalking by Helm chart.
 
 ```
 istioctl install --set profile=demo --set meshConfig.defaultConfig.envoyAccessLogService.address=skywalking-oap.istio-system:11800 --set meshConfig.enableEnvoyAccessLogService=true
 
-git checkout https://github.com/apache/skywalking-kubernetes.git
+git clone https://github.com/apache/skywalking-kubernetes.git
 cd skywalking-kubernetes/chart
 
 helm repo add elastic https://helm.elastic.co
@@ -44,6 +44,6 @@ helm dep up skywalking
 helm install 8.1.0 skywalking -n istio-system --set oap.env.SW_ENVOY_METRIC_ALS_HTTP_ANALYSIS=k8s-mesh --set fullnameOverride=skywalking --set oap.envoy.als.enabled=true
 ```
 
-Notice, only use this when envoy under Istio controlled, also in k8s env. The OAP requires the read right to k8s API server for all pods IPs.
+Notice, only use this when Envoy is under Istio's control, and they are in k8s environment. The OAP requires the read right to k8s API server for all pods IPs.
 
-You can use `kubectl logs ${You-OAP-Pod} | grep "K8sALSServiceMeshHTTPAnalysis"` to ensure OAP ALS k8s-mesh analysis has been active.
+You can use `kubectl -n istio-system logs -l app=skywalking | grep "K8sALSServiceMeshHTTPAnalysis"` to ensure OAP ALS k8s-mesh analysis has been active.