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svn commit: r677837 - /tomcat/tc6.0.x/trunk/webapps/docs/ssl-howto.xml

Author: jfclere
Date: Thu Jul 17 23:47:36 2008
New Revision: 677837

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=677837&view=rev
Log:
Grammar + typos: Fix PR#45422

Modified:
    tomcat/tc6.0.x/trunk/webapps/docs/ssl-howto.xml

Modified: tomcat/tc6.0.x/trunk/webapps/docs/ssl-howto.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/tomcat/tc6.0.x/trunk/webapps/docs/ssl-howto.xml?rev=677837&r1=677836&r2=677837&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- tomcat/tc6.0.x/trunk/webapps/docs/ssl-howto.xml (original)
+++ tomcat/tc6.0.x/trunk/webapps/docs/ssl-howto.xml Thu Jul 17 23:47:36 2008
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@
 
 <p>To import an existing certificate into a JKS keystore, please read the
 documentation (in your JDK documentation package) about <code>keytool</code>.
-Note that OpenSSL often adds a readable comments before the key,
+Note that OpenSSL often adds readable comments before the key,
 <code>keytool</code>does not support that, so remove the OpenSSL comments if
 they exist before importing the key using <code>keytool</code>.
 </p>
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@
   that SSL is required, as required by the Servlet 2.4 Specification.</p>
   </em></blockquote>
 
-<p>There are addional option used to configure the SSL protocol.
+<p>There are additional options used to configure the SSL protocol.
   You may need to add or change the following attribute
 values, depending on how you configured your keystore earlier:</p>
 
@@ -513,8 +513,8 @@
 </section>
 
 <section name="Installing a Certificate from a Certificate Authority">
-<p>To obstain and install a Certificate from a Certificate Authority (like verisign.com, thawte.com 
-or trustcenter.de) you should have read the previous section and then follow these instructions:</p>
+<p>To obtain and install a Certificate from a Certificate Authority (like verisign.com, thawte.com 
+or trustcenter.de), read the previous section and then follow these instructions:</p>
 
 <subsection name="Create a local Certificate Signing Request (CSR)">
 <p>In order to obtain a Certificate from the Certificate Authority of your choice 
@@ -540,20 +540,20 @@
 <subsection name="Importing the Certificate">
 <p>Now that you have your Certificate you can import it into you local keystore. 
 First of all you have to import a so called Chain Certificate or Root Certificate into your keystore. 
-After that you can procede with importing your Certificate.</p>
+After that you can proceed with importing your Certificate.</p>
 
 <ul>
 <li>Download a Chain Certificate from the Certificate Authority you obtained the Certificate from.<br/>
 	For Verisign.com commercial certificates go to:
             http://www.verisign.com/support/install/intermediate.html<br/>
         For Verisign.com trial certificates go to:
-            http://www.verisign.com/support/verisign-intermediate-ca/Trial_Secure_Server_Root/index.html
+            http://www.verisign.com/support/verisign-intermediate-ca/Trial_Secure_Server_Root/index.html<br/>
 	For Trustcenter.de go to:
             http://www.trustcenter.de/certservices/cacerts/en/en.htm#server<br/>
 	For Thawte.com go to:
             http://www.thawte.com/certs/trustmap.html<br/>
 </li>
-<li>Import the Chain Certificate into you keystore
+<li>Import the Chain Certificate into your keystore
     <source>keytool -import -alias root -keystore &lt;your_keystore_filename&gt; \
 	-trustcacerts -file &lt;filename_of_the_chain_certificate&gt;</source>
 </li>



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Re: Thanks and a question [was: svn commit: r677837 ]

Posted by jean-frederic clere <jf...@gmail.com>.
David Barnes wrote:
> 
> Jean-Frederic,
> Thank you for your guidance in how to submit doc
> corrections, and thanks for the rapid turnaround.
> I may submit more
> edits in the future: was the format of my bug reports and patch files
> correct?

Buzilla is a good way to do this, mail to the dev too. I prefer the 
first one.

Cheers

Jean-Frederic

> I will gladly make any improvements you suggest.
> Regards,
> -David
> 
> 


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Thanks and a question [was: svn commit: r677837 ]

Posted by David Barnes <db...@vidiom.com>.

Jean-Frederic,
Thank you for your guidance in how to submit doc
corrections, and thanks for the rapid turnaround.
I may submit more
edits in the future: was the format of my bug reports and patch files
correct?
I will gladly make any improvements you suggest.
Regards,
-David