[jira] [Commented] (MNGSITE-397) Improve wording on `Providing a uniform build system` in `What is Maven`

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Hudson commented on MNGSITE-397:
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> Improve wording on `Providing a uniform build system` in `What is Maven`
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>                 Key: MNGSITE-397
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MNGSITE-397
>             Project: Maven Project Web Site
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>            Reporter: Edinson E. Padrón Urdaneta
>            Assignee: Elliotte Rusty Harold
>            Priority: Trivial
>              Labels: documentation
>          Time Spent: 40m
>  Remaining Estimate: 0h
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> The current text is
> {quote}Maven allows a project to build using its project object model (POM) and a set of plugins that are shared by all projects using Maven, providing a uniform build system. Once you familiarize yourself with how one Maven project builds you automatically know how all Maven projects build saving you immense amounts of time when trying to navigate many projects.
> {quote}
> I think this way reads better:
> {quote}Maven allows a project to be built using its project object model (POM) and a set of plugins that are shared by all projects using Maven, providing a uniform build system. Once you familiarize yourself with how one Maven project builds, you automatically know how all Maven projects build, saving you immense amounts of time when trying to navigate many projects.
> {quote}
> Changing "to build" with "to be built" and adding a couple of commas.



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