svn commit: r412605 - /incubator/tuscany/sandbox/sebastien/tmp/ANNOUNCE.txt

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Author: jsdelfino
Date: Wed Jun  7 16:00:18 2006
New Revision: 412605

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=412605&view=rev
Log:
final announce email text

Modified:
    incubator/tuscany/sandbox/sebastien/tmp/ANNOUNCE.txt

Modified: incubator/tuscany/sandbox/sebastien/tmp/ANNOUNCE.txt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/tuscany/sandbox/sebastien/tmp/ANNOUNCE.txt?rev=412605&r1=412604&r2=412605&view=diff
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--- incubator/tuscany/sandbox/sebastien/tmp/ANNOUNCE.txt (original)
+++ incubator/tuscany/sandbox/sebastien/tmp/ANNOUNCE.txt Wed Jun  7 16:00:18 2006
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 Introduction
 ------------
 Tuscany/Java provides a Java implementation of the Service Component
-Architecture (SCA), Service Data Objects (SDO) specifications, and a Data
+Architecture (SCA) and Service Data Objects (SDO) specifications, and a Data
 Access Service (DAS) supporting SDO.
 
 For pointers to the specification documents, visit our documentation page at:
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
 tuscany-user@ws.apache.org
 
 Any contribution in the form of coding, testing, improving the documentation,
-and reporting bugs are always welcome. For more information on how to get
+and reporting bugs is always welcome. For more information on how to get
 involved with the development of Tuscany, visit our Get Involved page at:
 http://incubator.apache.org/tuscany/getinvolved.html
 



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