[GitHub] [guacamole-website] mike-jumper commented on a diff in pull request #128: Adding Rampart AI™ as Commercial Support

["mike-jumper (via GitHub)" <gi...@apache.org>]

mike-jumper commented on code in PR #128:
URL: https://github.com/apache/guacamole-website/pull/128#discussion_r1340478482


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_companies/rampartai.md:
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+title: Rampart AI™
+logo: /images/companies/2023RampartLogo.png
+location: https://www.rampart-ai.com/free-hardened-and-minimized-apache-guacamole

Review Comment:
   This landing page displays a third-party product that includes the name "Guacamole" in its branding, and refers to the product as a "version of Apache Guacamole", but this is not permitted. Please take a look at the ASF's branding guidelines and FAQ:
   
   * https://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/#products
   * https://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/faq/#products
   
   From above:
   
   >
   > ### May I use Apache marks (names, logos) in software product names?
   >
   > No, you may **not** use Apache trademarks - the names of any project or software product releases from the ASF - in the primary or secondary branding of any third party product or service names. For example, you may not name a product either "BigCo Project Thing", "BigCo distribution of Project", or any similar kind of name where Project is any Apache mark or project name.
   
   You can use the "powered by" wording, but your product may not include "Guacamole" in its own branding or name, nor be referenced as a "version of Apache Guacamole".
   
   See also: https://lists.apache.org/thread/lhdj913m0k7kxyz5ppr2rz784glkkhvx



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images/companies/2023RampartLogo.png:
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Review Comment:
   Please ensure that your logo is no more than 144x144 pixels in size.



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+title: Rampart AI™
+logo: /images/companies/2023RampartLogo.png
+location: https://www.rampart-ai.com/free-hardened-and-minimized-apache-guacamole
+---
+
+Rampart AI™ is an application security company that provides security solutions directly to your DevOps pipeline. Part of Rampart AI™ protection protocol is our Bloat Harness. With this harness, we have fortified Apache Guacamole for FREE, and anyone who wants to use it can reach out.

Review Comment:
   > ... With this harness, we have fortified Apache Guacamole ...
   
   Please make sure your blurb is neutral and factual. The claim that a copy of Apache Guacamole is fortified by virtue of being run through a third-party product (and the implicit claim that the software is less fortified without being run through said product) is not a neutral/factual claim.
   
   I would recommend rephrasing without the fortification claim, and after rebranding your product to comply with branding guidelines. For example:
   
   > Rampart AI™ is an application security company that provides _[TBD name of your product]_, a set of Docker images that are powered by Apache Guacamole and have been reduced in size by being run through Bloat Harness, a part of our protection protocol.
   



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_companies/rampartai.md:
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+---
+title: Rampart AI™
+logo: /images/companies/2023RampartLogo.png
+location: https://www.rampart-ai.com/free-hardened-and-minimized-apache-guacamole
+---
+
+Rampart AI™ is an application security company that provides security solutions directly to your DevOps pipeline. Part of Rampart AI™ protection protocol is our Bloat Harness. With this harness, we have fortified Apache Guacamole for FREE, and anyone who wants to use it can reach out.

Review Comment:
   > ... With this harness, we have fortified Apache Guacamole ...
   
   Please make sure your blurb is neutral and factual. The claim that a copy of Apache Guacamole is fortified by virtue of being run through a third-party product (and the implicit claim that the software is less fortified without being run through said product) is not a neutral/factual claim.
   
   I would recommend rephrasing without the fortification claim, and after rebranding your product to comply with branding guidelines. For example:
   
   > Rampart AI™ is an application security company that provides _[TBD name of your product]_, a set of Docker images that are powered by Apache Guacamole and have been reduced in size by being run through Bloat Harness, a part of our protection protocol.
   



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