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[cordova-docs] branch master updated: Cleanup and fix grammar mistakes (#957)

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     new f9efc60  Cleanup and fix grammar mistakes (#957)
f9efc60 is described below

commit f9efc60fd0e043ecbe0166d6ca71307c42bedf86
Author: Gedas Gardauskas <ge...@gmail.com>
AuthorDate: Thu Mar 28 17:43:25 2019 +0900

    Cleanup and fix grammar mistakes (#957)
---
 www/docs/en/9.x/guide/platforms/electron/index.md | 8 ++++----
 www/docs/en/dev/guide/platforms/electron/index.md | 8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/www/docs/en/9.x/guide/platforms/electron/index.md b/www/docs/en/9.x/guide/platforms/electron/index.md
index 3957ada..d43342b 100644
--- a/www/docs/en/9.x/guide/platforms/electron/index.md
+++ b/www/docs/en/9.x/guide/platforms/electron/index.md
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Electron is a framework that uses web technologies (HTML, CSS, and JS) to build
 * **Xcode**, the IDE for macOS, comes bundled with necessary software development tools to code signing and compiling native code for macOS. Version 8.2.1 or higher.
 
 * **RedHat Build Support**
-  * **Homebrew**, one of the available macOS package manager, is used for installing additional tools and dependencies. Homebrew will be needed to install RPM packaging dependencies. [**Brew Install Step**](https://brew.sh/)
+  * **Homebrew**, one of the available macOS package managers, is used for installing additional tools and dependencies. Homebrew will be needed to install RPM packaging dependencies. [**Brew Install Step**](https://brew.sh/)
 
   * **RPM**, a standard package manager for multiple Linux distributions, is the tool used for creating the Linux RPM package. To install this tool, use the following [**Homebrew**](https://brew.sh/) command:
 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Electron is a framework that uses web technologies (HTML, CSS, and JS) to build
 
 * **PowerShell**, for Windows 7 users, must be at version 3.0 or greater for [app signing](https://www.electron.build/code-signing#windows).
 
-* **Debugging Tools** for Windows of Windows SDK 10.0.15063.468, if you plan on creating a full distribution.
+* **[Debugging Tools for Windows](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows-hardware/drivers/debugger/)** is a toolkit for enhancing debug capabilities. It is recommended to install with the **Windows SDK 10.0.15063.468**.
 
 
 ## Quick Start
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ By default, the `width` is set to **800** and the `height` set to **600**. This
 #### How to make my window fullscreen?
 
 Using the `fullscreen` flag property, you can force the application to launch in fullscreen.
-1
+
 **Example:**
 ```json
 {
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ The matrix below shows each host OS and for which platforms they are capable of
 **Limitations:**
 * **[1]** If the app contains native dependency, it can only be compiled on the targeted platform.
 * **[2]** Linux and macOS are unable to build Windows Appx packages for Windows Store.
-* **[3]** [All required system dependencies, except rpm, will be downloaded automatically on demand. RPM can be installed with brew. (macOS Sierra 10.12+)](https://www.electron.build/multi-platform-build#macos)
+* **[3]** [All required system dependencies, except rpm, will be downloaded automatically on demand. RPM can be installed using brew. (macOS Sierra 10.12+)](https://www.electron.build/multi-platform-build#macos)
 
 The example below enables multi-platform build for all OS and uses the default build configurations.
 
diff --git a/www/docs/en/dev/guide/platforms/electron/index.md b/www/docs/en/dev/guide/platforms/electron/index.md
index 3957ada..d43342b 100644
--- a/www/docs/en/dev/guide/platforms/electron/index.md
+++ b/www/docs/en/dev/guide/platforms/electron/index.md
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Electron is a framework that uses web technologies (HTML, CSS, and JS) to build
 * **Xcode**, the IDE for macOS, comes bundled with necessary software development tools to code signing and compiling native code for macOS. Version 8.2.1 or higher.
 
 * **RedHat Build Support**
-  * **Homebrew**, one of the available macOS package manager, is used for installing additional tools and dependencies. Homebrew will be needed to install RPM packaging dependencies. [**Brew Install Step**](https://brew.sh/)
+  * **Homebrew**, one of the available macOS package managers, is used for installing additional tools and dependencies. Homebrew will be needed to install RPM packaging dependencies. [**Brew Install Step**](https://brew.sh/)
 
   * **RPM**, a standard package manager for multiple Linux distributions, is the tool used for creating the Linux RPM package. To install this tool, use the following [**Homebrew**](https://brew.sh/) command:
 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Electron is a framework that uses web technologies (HTML, CSS, and JS) to build
 
 * **PowerShell**, for Windows 7 users, must be at version 3.0 or greater for [app signing](https://www.electron.build/code-signing#windows).
 
-* **Debugging Tools** for Windows of Windows SDK 10.0.15063.468, if you plan on creating a full distribution.
+* **[Debugging Tools for Windows](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows-hardware/drivers/debugger/)** is a toolkit for enhancing debug capabilities. It is recommended to install with the **Windows SDK 10.0.15063.468**.
 
 
 ## Quick Start
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ By default, the `width` is set to **800** and the `height` set to **600**. This
 #### How to make my window fullscreen?
 
 Using the `fullscreen` flag property, you can force the application to launch in fullscreen.
-1
+
 **Example:**
 ```json
 {
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ The matrix below shows each host OS and for which platforms they are capable of
 **Limitations:**
 * **[1]** If the app contains native dependency, it can only be compiled on the targeted platform.
 * **[2]** Linux and macOS are unable to build Windows Appx packages for Windows Store.
-* **[3]** [All required system dependencies, except rpm, will be downloaded automatically on demand. RPM can be installed with brew. (macOS Sierra 10.12+)](https://www.electron.build/multi-platform-build#macos)
+* **[3]** [All required system dependencies, except rpm, will be downloaded automatically on demand. RPM can be installed using brew. (macOS Sierra 10.12+)](https://www.electron.build/multi-platform-build#macos)
 
 The example below enables multi-platform build for all OS and uses the default build configurations.
 


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