[GitHub] [comdev-site] adityasharma7 commented on a change in pull request #25: Update apache-project-maturity-model.md

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adityasharma7 commented on a change in pull request #25:
URL: https://github.com/apache/comdev-site/pull/25#discussion_r539170026



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@@ -6,54 +6,53 @@ The **Apache Project Maturity Model** provides a suggested framework for evaluat
 
 # Overview
 
-The goal of this maturity model is to describe how Apache projects operate, in a concise and high-level way, and to provide a basic framework that projects may choose to use to evaluate themselves.
+The goals of this maturity model are to describe how Apache projects operate in a concise and high-level way, and to provide a basic framework that projects may choose to use to evaluate themselves.
 
-It is meant to be usable outside of Apache as well, for projects that might want to adopt some or all of these principles. Projects that envision moving to Apache at some point might start working towards this to prepare for their move.
+It is usable outside of Apache as well, for projects that might want to adopt some or all of these principles. Projects that envision moving to Apache at some point might start working towards this to prepare for their move.
 
-It does not describe all the details of how our projects operate, but aims to capture the invariants of Apache projects and point to additional information where needed. To keep the main model as concise as possible we use footnotes for anything that's not part of the core model.
+It does not describe all the details of how our projects operate, but aims to capture the invariants of Apache projects and point to additional information where needed. To be as concise as possible we use footnotes for anything that's not part of the core model.
 
-Contrary to other maturity models, we do not define staged partial compliance levels. A mature Apache project complies with all the elements of this model, and other projects are welcome to pick and choose the elements that suit their goals.
+Contrary to other maturity models, we do not define staged partial compliance levels. A mature Apache project complies with all the elements of this model, and other projects are welcome to adopt the elements that suit their goals.
 
 Note that we try to avoid using the word "must" below. The model describes the state of a mature project, as opposed to a set of rules. 
 
-Projects which incubate at Apache might not fit into all the parts of this model, however a major goal of incubation is to bring the project's community closer to it.
+Projects which incubate at Apache might not fit into all the parts of this model; however a major goal of incubation is to bring the project's community closer to it.
 
-Questions and feedback about this model are welcome on the <a href="https://lists.apache.org/list.html?dev@community.apache.org">comdev mailing list</a>.
+We welcome qQuestions and feedback about this model on the <a href="https://lists.apache.org/list.html?dev@community.apache.org" target="_blank">comdev mailing list</a>.

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   We welcome Questions and feedback about this model on the <a href="https://lists.apache.org/list.html?dev@community.apache.org" target="_blank">comdev mailing list</a>.
   ```




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