Re: svn commit: r1890232 - in /subversion/site/staging: docs/community-guide/general.part.html faq.html index.html

[Nathan Hartman <ha...@gmail.com>]

On Wed, May 26, 2021 at 5:02 PM <ds...@apache.org> wrote:

> Author: dsahlberg
> Date: Wed May 26 21:01:57 2021
> New Revision: 1890232


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Modified: subversion/site/staging/faq.html
> URL:
> http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/subversion/site/staging/faq.html?rev=1890232&r1=1890231&r2=1890232&view=diff
>
> ==============================================================================
> --- subversion/site/staging/faq.html (original)
> +++ subversion/site/staging/faq.html Wed May 26 21:01:57 2021
> @@ -714,7 +714,9 @@ other resources available:</p>
>        <!--- TBD: libera's matrix bridge should appear soon:
> https://nitter.mailstation.de/liberachat/status/1396920289641091079#m
>        <a href="https://matrix.to/#/#libera_#svn:matrix.org">Matrix</a>
> or -->
>        any IRC software; archived
> -      <a href="https://colabti.org/irclogger/irclogger_logs/svn
> ">here</a>)
> +      <a href="https://colabti.org/irclogger/irclogger_logs/svn
> ">here</a>).
> +      (The IRC channel was hosted on freenode.net until May 2021, it may
> still exist
> +      but it is no longer recognized as an official channel.)


I recommend either a period or a semicolon after May 2021. With a comma
it's a run-on sentence.

One more below:

Modified: subversion/site/staging/index.html
> URL:
> http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/subversion/site/staging/index.html?rev=1890232&r1=1890231&r2=1890232&view=diff
>
> ==============================================================================
> --- subversion/site/staging/index.html (original)
> +++ subversion/site/staging/index.html Wed May 26 21:01:57 2021
> @@ -66,6 +66,20 @@
>
>  <!-- In general, we'll keep only the most recent 3 or 4 news items here.
> -->
>
> +<div class="h3" id="news-20210526">
> +<h3>2021-05-26 &mdash; IRC migration to libera.chat
> +<a class="sectionlink" href="#news-20210526"
> +   title="Link to this section">&para;</a>
> +</h3>
> +
> +<p>The Subversion project has decided to move the official IRC channels to
> + <a href="https://libera.chat">libera.chat</a> due to concerns about the
> + future stability of our previous irc network.</p>


Recommend s/irc/IRC/ at "previous irc network."

Otherwise LGTM. Thanks so much!

Nathan

Re: svn commit: r1890232 - in /subversion/site/staging: docs/community-guide/general.part.html faq.html index.html

[Daniel Sahlberg <da...@gmail.com>]

Den tors 27 maj 2021 kl 02:14 skrev Nathan Hartman <hartman.nathan@gmail.com
>:

> Otherwise LGTM. Thanks so much!
>
> Nathan
>

Thanks, Nathan! Committed r1890255

/Daniel Sahlberg