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[Impala-ASF-CR] IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

John Russell has uploaded a new change for review.

  http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/6005

Change subject: IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info
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IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

Take out the path A / path B pages with CM and non-CM installation
techniques for packages and parcels.

Replace with steps for building from source, adapted from
http://impala.apache.org/downloads.html

Change-Id: Ia81b1afbf04b93c322b9829d9e05e7af4243c37c
---
M docs/impala.ditamap
M docs/topics/impala_install.xml
2 files changed, 36 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)


  git pull ssh://gerrit.cloudera.org:29418/Impala-ASF refs/changes/05/6005/1
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[Impala-ASF-CR] IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

Posted by "Laurel Hale (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
Laurel Hale has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info
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Patch Set 2: Code-Review+1

(1 comment)

Changes build cleanly and topic looks good.

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6005/2/docs/topics/impala_install.xml
File docs/topics/impala_install.xml:

PS2, Line 43: Cloudera Enterprise Core
I assume that removal of this string is slated for a subsequent cleanup task?


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[Impala-ASF-CR] IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

Posted by "John Russell (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
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Patch Set 3:

Jim, should I turn Laurel's +1 into my +2 or do you want to doublecheck the wording about the README pointer?

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[Impala-ASF-CR] IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

Posted by "John Russell (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
Hello Laurel Hale,

I'd like you to reexamine a change.  Please visit

    http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/6005

to look at the new patch set (#3).

Change subject: IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info
......................................................................

IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

Take out the path A / path B pages with CM and non-CM installation
techniques for packages and parcels.

Replace with steps for building from source, adapted from
http://impala.apache.org/downloads.html

Change-Id: Ia81b1afbf04b93c322b9829d9e05e7af4243c37c
---
M docs/impala.ditamap
M docs/topics/impala_install.xml
2 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)


  git pull ssh://gerrit.cloudera.org:29418/Impala-ASF refs/changes/05/6005/3
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[Impala-ASF-CR] IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

Posted by "Jim Apple (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
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Patch Set 3: Code-Review+2

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[Impala-ASF-CR] IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

Posted by "John Russell (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
John Russell has uploaded a new patch set (#2).

Change subject: IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info
......................................................................

IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

Take out the path A / path B pages with CM and non-CM installation
techniques for packages and parcels.

Replace with steps for building from source, adapted from
http://impala.apache.org/downloads.html

Change-Id: Ia81b1afbf04b93c322b9829d9e05e7af4243c37c
---
M docs/impala.ditamap
M docs/topics/impala_install.xml
2 files changed, 40 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)


  git pull ssh://gerrit.cloudera.org:29418/Impala-ASF refs/changes/05/6005/2
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[Impala-ASF-CR] IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

Posted by "Jim Apple (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
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Patch Set 1:

(2 comments)

Thanks for doing this!

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6005/1/docs/topics/impala_install.xml
File docs/topics/impala_install.xml:

Line 48:       When you work with or contribute to the Apache Impala project, you are typically in a developer
This is odd wording. I think it might be better to say that this guide has instructions for people who have built from source without presuming what people call their "role".


Line 66:           for build instructions.
I think the README.md is the best place for build instructions, since that is tied with the tarball, while the wiki is whatever the latest thing is.


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[Impala-ASF-CR] IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

Posted by "Impala Public Jenkins (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
Impala Public Jenkins has submitted this change and it was merged.

Change subject: IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info
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IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

Take out the path A / path B pages with CM and non-CM installation
techniques for packages and parcels.

Replace with steps for building from source, adapted from
http://impala.apache.org/downloads.html

Change-Id: Ia81b1afbf04b93c322b9829d9e05e7af4243c37c
Reviewed-on: http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/6005
Reviewed-by: Jim Apple <jb...@apache.org>
Tested-by: Impala Public Jenkins
---
M docs/impala.ditamap
M docs/topics/impala_install.xml
2 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

Approvals:
  Impala Public Jenkins: Verified
  Jim Apple: Looks good to me, approved



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[Impala-ASF-CR] IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

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Patch Set 3:

Build started: http://jenkins.impala.io:8080/job/gerrit-docs-submit/68/

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[Impala-ASF-CR] IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

Posted by "Jim Apple (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
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(1 comment)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6005/1/docs/topics/impala_install.xml
File docs/topics/impala_install.xml:

Line 66:       <li>
> The README.md file:
Please make the README.md description note that this is where you can find a pointer to the build instructions, not just "special notices". I believe the wiki page is already bit-rotted. The IPMC also has asked for us to describe a pointer to the build instructions in the README.


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(2 comments)

Addressed comments. Fixed merge conflict because I had already updated the 'Cloudera' reference that Laurel pointed out.

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6005/1/docs/topics/impala_install.xml
File docs/topics/impala_install.xml:

Line 66:       </li>
> Please make the README.md description note that this is where you can find 
Done


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6005/2/docs/topics/impala_install.xml
File docs/topics/impala_install.xml:

PS2, Line 43: ase for Apache Hadoop
> I assume that removal of this string is slated for a subsequent cleanup tas
Done. Was intending to take care of stray 'Cloudera' references as a batch, but since I have this file open I'll do this one now.


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[Impala-ASF-CR] IMPALA-3403: [DOCS] Pare back irrelevant installation info

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(2 comments)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/6005/1/docs/topics/impala_install.xml
File docs/topics/impala_install.xml:

Line 48:       Follow these steps to set up Impala on a cluster by building from source:
> This is odd wording. I think it might be better to say that this guide has 
Done


Line 66:       <li>
> I think the README.md is the best place for build instructions, since that 
The README.md file:

https://github.com/apache/incubator-impala/blob/master/README.md

currently is pretty slim pickings. It just says Impala requires Linux (no distro names or numbers) and for building, it sends the user elsewhere:

"See bin/bootstrap_build.sh."

Why don't I leave the link to the wiki for the time being, and add a reference to the README as well. We can reconsider taking out the wiki link if we later beef up the README file.


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Patch Set 3: Verified+1

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