svn commit: r1874030 - /infrastructure/site/trunk/content/foundation/marks/downstream.mdtext

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Author: markt
Date: Fri Feb 14 19:35:08 2020
New Revision: 1874030

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1874030&view=rev
Log:
Clearer wording

Modified:
    infrastructure/site/trunk/content/foundation/marks/downstream.mdtext

Modified: infrastructure/site/trunk/content/foundation/marks/downstream.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/infrastructure/site/trunk/content/foundation/marks/downstream.mdtext?rev=1874030&r1=1874029&r2=1874030&view=diff
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--- infrastructure/site/trunk/content/foundation/marks/downstream.mdtext (original)
+++ infrastructure/site/trunk/content/foundation/marks/downstream.mdtext Fri Feb 14 19:35:08 2020
@@ -64,18 +64,19 @@ be true:
 
 The acceptable changes must meet at least one of the following criteria:
 
-- Changes that have been accepted by the relevant Apache project community
+- The change has accepted by the relevant Apache project community
   for inclusion in a future release. Note that the process used to accept
   changes and how that acceptance is documented varies between projects.
 
-- A fix for an undisclosed security issue provided the fix is not publicly
-  disclosed as as security fix, the Apache project has been
-  [notified of the issue](http://www.apache.org/security/) and the proposed fix
-  and has neither rejected the vulnerability report nor the proposed fix.
+- A change is a fix for an undisclosed security issue; and the fix is not
+  publicly disclosed as as security fix; and the Apache project has been
+  [notified](http://www.apache.org/security/) of the both issue and the
+  proposed fix; and the PMC has neither rejected the vulnerability report
+  nor the proposed fix.
 
-- A fix for a bug provided that the Apache project has been notified of the
-  bug and the proposed fix and has neither rejected the bug report nor the
-  proposed fix.
+- A change is a fix for a bug; and the Apache project has been notified of
+  both the bug and the proposed fix; and the PMC has neither rejected the bug
+  report nor the proposed fix.
 
 - Minor changes (e.g. alterations to the start-up and shutdown scripts,
   configuration files, file layout etc.) to integrate with the target platform



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