svn commit: r1347701 - /incubator/ooo/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/get-it-here.mdtext

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Author: robweir
Date: Thu Jun  7 16:24:06 2012
New Revision: 1347701

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1347701&view=rev
Log:
Incorporate feedback from list

Modified:
    incubator/ooo/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/get-it-here.mdtext

Modified: incubator/ooo/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/get-it-here.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/ooo/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/get-it-here.mdtext?rev=1347701&r1=1347700&r2=1347701&view=diff
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--- incubator/ooo/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/get-it-here.mdtext (original)
+++ incubator/ooo/site/trunk/content/openofficeorg/get-it-here.mdtext Thu Jun  7 16:24:06 2012
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-Title:     Apache OpenOffice Trademarks
+Title:     Use of the "Get it here!" logo
 Notice:    Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
            or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
            distributed with this work for additional information
@@ -16,31 +16,62 @@ Notice:    Licensed to the Apache Softwa
            specific language governing permissions and limitations
            under the License.
 
-
-=Use of the Apache OpenOffice Download Promotion Logo=
+#Use of the "Get it here!" logo
 
 Anyone, without additional permission from this project, may use the
 following logo subject to the following conditions:
 
-The logo:  http: http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/images/get-it-here/en.png
+##The logo:
+
+ <p><img width="300" height="100" alt="Download Apache OpenOffice here" src="http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/images/get-it-here/en.png"/></p>
+
+The logo file may be [found here] [1].
+
+If translations of the "Get it here!" text are required, send a request to the 
+[ooo-dev mailing list] [2] and we can make a translated version for you.
 
-Conditions:
+##Conditions:
 
-1. The logo may not be modified except to resize it.  If translations
-of the "Get it here!" text are required, send a request to the ooo-dev
-list and we can provide a translated version for you.
+1. The logo may be resized, so long as the aspect ratio is preserved and the logo
+remains legible, but the logo may not be otherwise altered.
 
-1. The image must be linked to one of:
+1. The logo **must directly link** to one of:
 
-  1. the http://www.openoffice.org webpage
-  1. one of the official Native Language pages at openoffice.org, e.g., http://de.openoffice.org
-  1. the download page for Apache OpenOffice:
-http://download.openoffice.org or
-http://www.openoffice.org/download/other.html
+  1. The Apache OpenOffice [home page][3]
+  1. The download page for Apache OpenOffice, either the [main download page][4] or
+the [detailed download page][5].
+  1. One of the official Native Language pages at openoffice.org, e.g., 
+http://de.openoffice.org, http://it.openoffice.org, http://fr.openoffice.rg, etc.
 
-1. The logo must not link to a specific download file or mirror.  This
+The logo **must not** link to a page at any other website other than openoffice.org.
+
+1. The logo **must not** link to a specific download file or mirror.  This
 causes problems with load balancing and fallbacks and may prevent
-users from getting the latest version of OpenOffice.
+users from getting the latest version of OpenOffice.  
 
 1. Any use Apache-owned logos beyond the above is not covered by this
-program an must be explicitly requested from the ASF.
+program an must be explicitly requested from per the existing [trademark policy][6]
+
+##Example
+
+This is an example of how the "Get it here!" logo might be included in an
+HTML page:
+
+    <img width="300" height="100" alt="Download Apache OpenOffice here" 
+    src="http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/images/get-it-here/en.png"/>
+
+##Feedback
+
+We'd love to hear about your success with adding the "Get it here!" logo to your 
+website.  You can send your links to us at our [ooo-marketing][7] mailing list.
+
+Also, if you run into problems, we want to hear about that as well.
+
+
+[1]: http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/images/get-it-here/en.png
+[2]: http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/mailing-lists.html#development-mailing-list
+[3]: http://www.openoffice.org
+[4]: http://download.openoffice.org
+[5]: http://www.openoffice.org/download/other.html
+[6]: http://incubator.apache.org/openofficeorg/trademarks.html
+[7]: mailto:ooo-marketing@incubator.apache.org.
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