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Posted to legal-discuss@apache.org by rd...@apache.org on 2011/11/26 15:29:34 UTC

svn commit: r1206443 - /infrastructure/site/trunk/content/legal/resolved.mdtext

Author: rdonkin
Date: Sat Nov 26 14:29:33 2011
New Revision: 1206443

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1206443&view=rev
Log:
LEGAL-75 Improve phrasing

Modified:
    infrastructure/site/trunk/content/legal/resolved.mdtext

Modified: infrastructure/site/trunk/content/legal/resolved.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/infrastructure/site/trunk/content/legal/resolved.mdtext?rev=1206443&r1=1206442&r2=1206443&view=diff
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--- infrastructure/site/trunk/content/legal/resolved.mdtext (original)
+++ infrastructure/site/trunk/content/legal/resolved.mdtext Sat Nov 26 14:29:33 2011
@@ -295,12 +295,11 @@ in the source headers.
 
 ## Can Works Placed In The Public Domain Be Included In Apache Products?
 
-Works in the public domain (or covered by a license treated similarly) may be included within Apache products.   
-Attribution is required (in a similar fashion to [permissive licenses][1]).  
+Works in the public domain (or covered by a license treated similarly) may be included within Apache products. Attribution is required (in a similar fashion to [permissive licenses][1]).  
 
 
 
-A work should be treated as being in the public domain when:
+A work should be treated as being in the public domain when one of the following applies: 
 
   - the work is covered by 
        - the Creative Commons [Public Domain Mark][4], or



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