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[jira] Created: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
---------------------------------------------

                 Key: DERBY-2125
                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
             Project: Derby
          Issue Type: Improvement
          Components: Documentation
    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
            Priority: Minor
             Fix For: 10.0.2.2


In this page is written:

"Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."

but I think the correct could be:

"Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

Because:

1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".

2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."



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[jira] Resolved: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Posted by "Kim Haase (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
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Kim Haase resolved DERBY-2125.
------------------------------

       Resolution: Fixed
    Fix Version/s: 10.2.3.0

Since this was committed I'm marking it fixed. Please correct the fix version if necessary.

> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 10.2.3.0
>
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html, DERBY-2125.diff, DERBY-2125.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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[jira] Updated: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Posted by "Halley Pacheco de Oliveira (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
     [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=all ]

Halley Pacheco de Oliveira updated DERBY-2125:
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    Attachment: cgsinstallingderby.diff
                cgsinstallingderby.diff.html
                cgsinstallingderby.html

The diff file, the diff file HTMLized, and the new manual page.

> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 10.0.2.2
>
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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[jira] Updated: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Posted by "Laura Stewart (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
     [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=all ]

Laura Stewart updated DERBY-2125:
---------------------------------

    Derby Info:   (was: [Patch Available])

> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html, DERBY-2125.diff, DERBY-2125.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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Re: [jira] Commented: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Posted by "Jean T. Anderson" <jt...@bristowhill.com>.
Laura Stewart (JIRA) wrote:
>     [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=comments#action_12455378 ] 
>             
> Laura Stewart commented on DERBY-2125:
> --------------------------------------
> 
> I'll commit this as soon as I figure out how to :-)

feel free to ask derby-dev any questions! lots of committers can help.

 -jean

[jira] Commented: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Posted by "Laura Stewart (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=comments#action_12455378 ] 
            
Laura Stewart commented on DERBY-2125:
--------------------------------------

I'll commit this as soon as I figure out how to :-)


> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 10.0.2.2
>
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html, DERBY-2125.diff, DERBY-2125.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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[jira] Updated: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Posted by "Rick Hillegas (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
     [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=all ]

Rick Hillegas updated DERBY-2125:
---------------------------------

    Fix Version/s:     (was: 10.2.2.0)

Unknown release vehicle.

> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html, DERBY-2125.diff, DERBY-2125.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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[jira] Commented: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Posted by "Halley Pacheco de Oliveira (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=comments#action_12456408 ] 
            
Halley Pacheco de Oliveira commented on DERBY-2125:
---------------------------------------------------

Laura,

Jean T. Anderson gave the instructions bellow to me some time ago, and I hope with the modifications I've made it will help you too:

If you want to see what it's like to apply a patch, do a fresh checkout of the DITA source, place the patch in the trunk directory, then apply it like this:

patch -p0 < DERBY-2125.diff 

What operating system are you on? That command will work on linux or on cygwin on Windows. mks 'patch' won't work.

Then to commit just one file at a time ....

svn commit src/getstart/gsconrefs.dita
svn commit src/getstart/cgsinstallingderby.dita


> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 10.0.2.2
>
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html, DERBY-2125.diff, DERBY-2125.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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[jira] Closed: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Posted by "Dyre Tjeldvoll (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
     [ https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ]

Dyre Tjeldvoll closed DERBY-2125.
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> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>            Assignee: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 10.2.3.0
>
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html, DERBY-2125.diff, DERBY-2125.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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[jira] Commented: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Posted by "Halley Pacheco de Oliveira (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=comments#action_12454588 ] 
            
Halley Pacheco de Oliveira commented on DERBY-2125:
---------------------------------------------------

I think it's all right, ready to be commited.

> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 10.0.2.2
>
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html, DERBY-2125.diff, DERBY-2125.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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[jira] Updated: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Posted by "Andrew McIntyre (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
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Andrew McIntyre updated DERBY-2125:
-----------------------------------

    Fix Version/s: 10.2.2.0
                       (was: 10.0.2.2)

correcting fix version

> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 10.2.2.0
>
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html, DERBY-2125.diff, DERBY-2125.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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[jira] Updated: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Posted by "Kim Haase (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
     [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=all ]

Kim Haase updated DERBY-2125:
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    Attachment: DERBY-2125.diff
                DERBY-2125.html

Thanks very much for catching this error. I would call it a bug rather than an improvement! I've made a few changes, mainly to fix the syntax and use parallel structure. I also made the two href links external so that in the HTML pages version, the link opens in a new window instead of in the same frame as the topic.

The updated diffs file is DERBY-2125.diff, and the new HTML file is DERBY-2125.html.

> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 10.0.2.2
>
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html, DERBY-2125.diff, DERBY-2125.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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[jira] Commented: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Posted by "Laura Stewart (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=comments#action_12458940 ] 
            
Laura Stewart commented on DERBY-2125:
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Committed patch derby2125.diff with version 487665.

> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html, DERBY-2125.diff, DERBY-2125.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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[jira] Assigned: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby

Posted by "Kim Haase (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
     [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=all ]

Kim Haase reassigned DERBY-2125:
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    Assignee: Kim Haase

> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 10.0.2.2
>
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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