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Review Request 30608: LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement

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Review request for lens.


Repository: lens


Description
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LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement


Diffs
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  src/site/apt/admin/deployment.apt 57be5211f080c9d931afde5c7a3c90b5b34d25c5 
  src/site/apt/developer/contribute.apt 8015d68e2bd53043b27181533aabc6ca3a3c6664 
  src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt ef5724de1587c214eb241ee860d9c71ed59c27a8 
  src/site/apt/gettingstarted/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt  
  src/site/apt/gettingstarted/quick-start.apt ec97d073a23f603c2e34f0d46c43aa73fce2f69c 
  src/site/site.xml f0f0a55d4e67e52eb06bdb62f1e8bc4c72b4e6e8 

Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/


Testing
-------

Ran site on local machine to test contents.


Thanks,

Himanshu Gahlaut


Re: Review Request 30608: LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement

Posted by Amareshwari Sriramadasu <am...@apache.org>.

> On Feb. 4, 2015, 4:25 p.m., Amareshwari Sriramadasu wrote:
> > src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt, line 30
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/1/?file=847323#file847323line30>
> >
> >     Let us mention that download contains both source release and convienient binary distribution.
> >     
> >     Also, I'm thinking building from source release should be here itself.
> 
> Himanshu Gahlaut wrote:
>     If intended audience for source release is contributing developer, then shall we have all source release information only in developer doc ?

Intended audience for source release is not only contributing developer, but also all who wants to verify/consume source release. You can refer http://www.apache.org/dev/release.html#what-must-every-release-contain. So, my concern is putting it developer doc will be hard for other to how to build it. So, we can mention the release contains both source and convienient binary distribution and may be link building from source release here.


- Amareshwari


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On Feb. 7, 2015, 6:50 a.m., Himanshu Gahlaut wrote:
> 
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> 
> (Updated Feb. 7, 2015, 6:50 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for lens.
> 
> 
> Repository: lens
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   src/site/apt/admin/deployment.apt 57be5211f080c9d931afde5c7a3c90b5b34d25c5 
>   src/site/apt/developer/contribute.apt 8015d68e2bd53043b27181533aabc6ca3a3c6664 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt ef5724de1587c214eb241ee860d9c71ed59c27a8 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt f83aa72ec06a87fcc4e98ad8ba5d4e295e16dbff 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/quick-start.apt ec97d073a23f603c2e34f0d46c43aa73fce2f69c 
>   src/site/apt/lenshome/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt PRE-CREATION 
>   src/site/site.xml f0f0a55d4e67e52eb06bdb62f1e8bc4c72b4e6e8 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Ran site on local machine to test contents.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Himanshu Gahlaut
> 
>


Re: Review Request 30608: LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement

Posted by Amareshwari Sriramadasu <am...@apache.org>.

> On Feb. 4, 2015, 4:25 p.m., Amareshwari Sriramadasu wrote:
> > src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt, line 30
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/1/?file=847323#file847323line30>
> >
> >     Let us mention that download contains both source release and convienient binary distribution.
> >     
> >     Also, I'm thinking building from source release should be here itself.
> 
> Himanshu Gahlaut wrote:
>     If intended audience for source release is contributing developer, then shall we have all source release information only in developer doc ?
> 
> Amareshwari Sriramadasu wrote:
>     Intended audience for source release is not only contributing developer, but also all who wants to verify/consume source release. You can refer http://www.apache.org/dev/release.html#what-must-every-release-contain. So, my concern is putting it developer doc will be hard for other to how to build it. So, we can mention the release contains both source and convienient binary distribution and may be link building from source release here.

And i agree with Himanshu, install_and_run page is not the page to mention about how to build from source release. Not sure if we have to include them in a differnt place.

Srikanth Sundarrajan, thoughts?


- Amareshwari


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On Feb. 7, 2015, 6:50 a.m., Himanshu Gahlaut wrote:
> 
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> 
> (Updated Feb. 7, 2015, 6:50 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for lens.
> 
> 
> Repository: lens
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   src/site/apt/admin/deployment.apt 57be5211f080c9d931afde5c7a3c90b5b34d25c5 
>   src/site/apt/developer/contribute.apt 8015d68e2bd53043b27181533aabc6ca3a3c6664 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt ef5724de1587c214eb241ee860d9c71ed59c27a8 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt f83aa72ec06a87fcc4e98ad8ba5d4e295e16dbff 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/quick-start.apt ec97d073a23f603c2e34f0d46c43aa73fce2f69c 
>   src/site/apt/lenshome/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt PRE-CREATION 
>   src/site/site.xml f0f0a55d4e67e52eb06bdb62f1e8bc4c72b4e6e8 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Ran site on local machine to test contents.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Himanshu Gahlaut
> 
>


Re: Review Request 30608: LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement

Posted by Himanshu Gahlaut <ga...@gmail.com>.

> On Feb. 4, 2015, 4:25 p.m., Amareshwari Sriramadasu wrote:
> > src/site/apt/developer/contribute.apt, line 96
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/1/?file=847322#file847322line96>
> >
> >     In contributor guide, let us point to git repo as the source sothat it becomes easy for contributor to contribute back his work. and move building from source release to quick start. Thoughts?

(1) Will add github repo link in building from source.

(2) I'm assuming that meaning of quick start in the comment is getting started page under lenshome. If Yes, then that will divert us from the objective of making it difficult for non developers to reach building from source. If the comment meant something else by quick start,then I haven't understood it. Please help in understanding the same.


> On Feb. 4, 2015, 4:25 p.m., Amareshwari Sriramadasu wrote:
> > src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt, line 30
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/1/?file=847323#file847323line30>
> >
> >     Let us mention that download contains both source release and convienient binary distribution.
> >     
> >     Also, I'm thinking building from source release should be here itself.

If intended audience for source release is contributing developer, then shall we have all source release information only in developer doc ?


> On Feb. 4, 2015, 4:25 p.m., Amareshwari Sriramadasu wrote:
> > src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt, line 37
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/1/?file=847323#file847323line37>
> >
> >     These steps to build from github should be moved to contributor guide

Didn't get this. The steps seems to be already moved.


> On Feb. 4, 2015, 4:25 p.m., Amareshwari Sriramadasu wrote:
> > src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt, line 60
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/1/?file=847323#file847323line60>
> >
> >     This would contain only hive source. It needs to b e built and HIVE_HOME should be set to packaging directory

Will add steps to build from hive source here.


> On Feb. 4, 2015, 4:25 p.m., Amareshwari Sriramadasu wrote:
> > src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt, line 137
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/1/?file=847323#file847323line137>
> >
> >     Lets leave it as Hive only.

Will change to Hive.


> On Feb. 4, 2015, 4:25 p.m., Amareshwari Sriramadasu wrote:
> > src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt, line 225
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/1/?file=847323#file847323line225>
> >
> >     bin/lens-cli.sh should work. I dont know about any start option here, is there such an option?

Will fix this.


- Himanshu


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On Feb. 4, 2015, 7:58 a.m., Himanshu Gahlaut wrote:
> 
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> 
> (Updated Feb. 4, 2015, 7:58 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for lens.
> 
> 
> Repository: lens
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   src/site/apt/admin/deployment.apt 57be5211f080c9d931afde5c7a3c90b5b34d25c5 
>   src/site/apt/developer/contribute.apt 8015d68e2bd53043b27181533aabc6ca3a3c6664 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt ef5724de1587c214eb241ee860d9c71ed59c27a8 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt  
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/quick-start.apt ec97d073a23f603c2e34f0d46c43aa73fce2f69c 
>   src/site/site.xml f0f0a55d4e67e52eb06bdb62f1e8bc4c72b4e6e8 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Ran site on local machine to test contents.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Himanshu Gahlaut
> 
>


Re: Review Request 30608: LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement

Posted by Himanshu Gahlaut <ga...@gmail.com>.

> On Feb. 4, 2015, 4:25 p.m., Amareshwari Sriramadasu wrote:
> > src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt, line 30
> > <https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/1/?file=847323#file847323line30>
> >
> >     Let us mention that download contains both source release and convienient binary distribution.
> >     
> >     Also, I'm thinking building from source release should be here itself.
> 
> Himanshu Gahlaut wrote:
>     If intended audience for source release is contributing developer, then shall we have all source release information only in developer doc ?
> 
> Amareshwari Sriramadasu wrote:
>     Intended audience for source release is not only contributing developer, but also all who wants to verify/consume source release. You can refer http://www.apache.org/dev/release.html#what-must-every-release-contain. So, my concern is putting it developer doc will be hard for other to how to build it. So, we can mention the release contains both source and convienient binary distribution and may be link building from source release here.
> 
> Amareshwari Sriramadasu wrote:
>     And i agree with Himanshu, install_and_run page is not the page to mention about how to build from source release. Not sure if we have to include them in a differnt place.
>     
>     Srikanth Sundarrajan, thoughts?

Do we have to do any more changes for this issue ?


- Himanshu


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On Feb. 7, 2015, 6:50 a.m., Himanshu Gahlaut wrote:
> 
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> 
> (Updated Feb. 7, 2015, 6:50 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for lens.
> 
> 
> Repository: lens
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   src/site/apt/admin/deployment.apt 57be5211f080c9d931afde5c7a3c90b5b34d25c5 
>   src/site/apt/developer/contribute.apt 8015d68e2bd53043b27181533aabc6ca3a3c6664 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt ef5724de1587c214eb241ee860d9c71ed59c27a8 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt f83aa72ec06a87fcc4e98ad8ba5d4e295e16dbff 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/quick-start.apt ec97d073a23f603c2e34f0d46c43aa73fce2f69c 
>   src/site/apt/lenshome/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt PRE-CREATION 
>   src/site/site.xml f0f0a55d4e67e52eb06bdb62f1e8bc4c72b4e6e8 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Ran site on local machine to test contents.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Himanshu Gahlaut
> 
>


Re: Review Request 30608: LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement

Posted by Amareshwari Sriramadasu <am...@apache.org>.
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src/site/apt/developer/contribute.apt
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/#comment116456>

    In contributor guide, let us point to git repo as the source sothat it becomes easy for contributor to contribute back his work. and move building from source release to quick start. Thoughts?



src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/#comment116453>

    Let us mention that download contains both source release and convienient binary distribution.
    
    Also, I'm thinking building from source release should be here itself.



src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/#comment116454>

    These steps to build from github should be moved to contributor guide



src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/#comment116455>

    This would contain only hive source. It needs to b e built and HIVE_HOME should be set to packaging directory



src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/#comment116450>

    Lets leave it as Hive only.



src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/#comment116448>

    bin/lens-cli.sh should work. I dont know about any start option here, is there such an option?


- Amareshwari Sriramadasu


On Feb. 4, 2015, 7:58 a.m., Himanshu Gahlaut wrote:
> 
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> 
> (Updated Feb. 4, 2015, 7:58 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for lens.
> 
> 
> Repository: lens
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   src/site/apt/admin/deployment.apt 57be5211f080c9d931afde5c7a3c90b5b34d25c5 
>   src/site/apt/developer/contribute.apt 8015d68e2bd53043b27181533aabc6ca3a3c6664 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt ef5724de1587c214eb241ee860d9c71ed59c27a8 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt  
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/quick-start.apt ec97d073a23f603c2e34f0d46c43aa73fce2f69c 
>   src/site/site.xml f0f0a55d4e67e52eb06bdb62f1e8bc4c72b4e6e8 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Ran site on local machine to test contents.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Himanshu Gahlaut
> 
>


Re: Review Request 30608: LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement

Posted by Amareshwari Sriramadasu <am...@apache.org>.
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Ship it!


Ship It!

- Amareshwari Sriramadasu


On Feb. 7, 2015, 6:50 a.m., Himanshu Gahlaut wrote:
> 
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> 
> (Updated Feb. 7, 2015, 6:50 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for lens.
> 
> 
> Repository: lens
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   src/site/apt/admin/deployment.apt 57be5211f080c9d931afde5c7a3c90b5b34d25c5 
>   src/site/apt/developer/contribute.apt 8015d68e2bd53043b27181533aabc6ca3a3c6664 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt ef5724de1587c214eb241ee860d9c71ed59c27a8 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt f83aa72ec06a87fcc4e98ad8ba5d4e295e16dbff 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/quick-start.apt ec97d073a23f603c2e34f0d46c43aa73fce2f69c 
>   src/site/apt/lenshome/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt PRE-CREATION 
>   src/site/site.xml f0f0a55d4e67e52eb06bdb62f1e8bc4c72b4e6e8 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Ran site on local machine to test contents.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Himanshu Gahlaut
> 
>


Re: Review Request 30608: LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement

Posted by Amareshwari Sriramadasu <am...@apache.org>.
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Changes look fine.

- Amareshwari Sriramadasu


On Feb. 7, 2015, 6:50 a.m., Himanshu Gahlaut wrote:
> 
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> 
> (Updated Feb. 7, 2015, 6:50 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for lens.
> 
> 
> Repository: lens
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   src/site/apt/admin/deployment.apt 57be5211f080c9d931afde5c7a3c90b5b34d25c5 
>   src/site/apt/developer/contribute.apt 8015d68e2bd53043b27181533aabc6ca3a3c6664 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt ef5724de1587c214eb241ee860d9c71ed59c27a8 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt f83aa72ec06a87fcc4e98ad8ba5d4e295e16dbff 
>   src/site/apt/gettingstarted/quick-start.apt ec97d073a23f603c2e34f0d46c43aa73fce2f69c 
>   src/site/apt/lenshome/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt PRE-CREATION 
>   src/site/site.xml f0f0a55d4e67e52eb06bdb62f1e8bc4c72b4e6e8 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Ran site on local machine to test contents.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Himanshu Gahlaut
> 
>


Re: Review Request 30608: LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement

Posted by Himanshu Gahlaut <ga...@gmail.com>.
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(Updated Feb. 7, 2015, 6:50 a.m.)


Review request for lens.


Changes
-------

(1) Pseudo Distributed Setup documentation (2) Addressing code review comments


Repository: lens


Description
-------

LENS-221: Install and Run Documentation improvement


Diffs (updated)
-----

  src/site/apt/admin/deployment.apt 57be5211f080c9d931afde5c7a3c90b5b34d25c5 
  src/site/apt/developer/contribute.apt 8015d68e2bd53043b27181533aabc6ca3a3c6664 
  src/site/apt/gettingstarted/install-steps.apt ef5724de1587c214eb241ee860d9c71ed59c27a8 
  src/site/apt/gettingstarted/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt f83aa72ec06a87fcc4e98ad8ba5d4e295e16dbff 
  src/site/apt/gettingstarted/quick-start.apt ec97d073a23f603c2e34f0d46c43aa73fce2f69c 
  src/site/apt/lenshome/pseudo-distributed-setup.apt PRE-CREATION 
  src/site/site.xml f0f0a55d4e67e52eb06bdb62f1e8bc4c72b4e6e8 

Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/30608/diff/


Testing
-------

Ran site on local machine to test contents.


Thanks,

Himanshu Gahlaut