[GitHub] [geode] davebarnes97 commented on a change in pull request #5191: GEODE-8198: Revise docs description of putAll()

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davebarnes97 commented on a change in pull request #5191:
URL: https://github.com/apache/geode/pull/5191#discussion_r433511928



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File path: geode-docs/basic_config/data_entries_custom_classes/managing_data_entries.html.md.erb
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@@ -60,36 +60,90 @@ You can also use the `gfsh put` command to add entries to a region, and the `get
 
 If you want only to create the entry (with a null value and with method failure if the entry already exists), use `Region.create` instead.
 
-## <a id="managing_data_entries__section_7578349EA26A4621B732FE851D71A84F" class="no-quick-link"></a>Batch Operations (getAll, putAll, removeAll)
+## <a id="getAll_method" class="no-quick-link"></a>The getAll Operation
 
-<%=vars.product_name%> provides three APIs to perform batch operations on multiple region entries:
+The batch operation `Region.getAll`
+takes a collection of keys and returns a `Map` of key-value pairs for
+the provided keys. If a given key does not exist in the region, then that key's value in the returned map will be null.
 
--   `Region.getAll`
--   `Region.putAll`
--   `Region.removeAll`
+## <a id="putAll_method" class="no-quick-link"></a>The putAll Operation
 
-The `getAll` method takes a collection of keys and returns a `Map` of values for the provided keys. If a given key does not exist in the region, then that key's value in the returned map will be null.
+The batch operation `Region.putAll`
+takes a `Map` of key-value pairs, puts them into the cache,
+and distributes them in a single operation.
 
-The `putAll` method takes a `Map` of key-value pairs and puts them into the cache and distributes them in a single operation.
 
-**Example:**
+The updates to the cache are done individually in the order in which
+they were placed in the `Map`.
+For partitioned regions,
+multiple events are sent as a single message to the primary buckets
+and then distributed to the secondary buckets.
+
+The design of a client application within a client-server design pattern
+faces the possibility that a partial operation can occur.
+Some, all, or none of the specified entries may be completed with `putAll`.
+If either `ServerOperationException` or `ServerConnectivityException` are

Review comment:
       "Either" is singular, so "If either.. is thrown..."




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