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Posted to marketing@cloudstack.apache.org by Joe Brockmeier <jz...@zonker.net> on 2013/03/20 20:42:03 UTC

[DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

In case you missed it in the other thread [1], Sonny has sent out a
second redesign proposal for the site. 

Please take a second to look it over if you haven't already and give any
feedback you might have within the next few days. 

Questions / comments I have:

* The image is 1020x1350 - should we assume that the design is going to be
targeted at a browser window of at least 1024 in width? 

* I'd like to replace "DOCS" with "Get Started" which would take users
to a page that would orient them to the different types of documentation
and put them on the right "path." 

* Could we trim down the Community graphic and have a "Learn" item that
would take users to an page that gives an intro to CloudStack? 

* Can we reduce the size of the main graphic from ~400px to about 250px
high? If we assume common display sizes for laptops today, a lot of
users wouldn't see the DEV/DOCS/COMMUNITY (or whatever we call them)
boxes without scrolling. 

Thanks!

[1]
https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website+redesign+proposal


Best,

jzb
--
Joe Brockmeier
http://dissociatedpress.net/
Twitter: @jzb

RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by "Musayev, Ilya" <im...@webmd.net>.
Hi Sonny,

Please see response in-line...

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Sonny Chhen [mailto:Sonny.Chhen@citrix.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, March 26, 2013 6:13 PM
> To: cloudstack-marketing@incubator.apache.org
> Cc: John Kinsella
> Subject: RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
> 
> Hello all,
> 
> After taking in all the suggestions, I've updated the mockup and the new
> design can be seen at the link below:
> 
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website
> +redesign+proposal
>
> The following changes have been made:
> 
> -Decreased main header image for lower resolution screens 
Suggestion, can we have the picture that is under header menu (has a screenshot of CS with blue circle) be a slideshow? We can then have multiple slides that highlight main features of CS.

>-Removed the > news section and replaced it with "Getting Started" and added a download link 
Curious why would you remove "News" with "Getting Started", my opinion, we need News, at least a text link somewhere (proposed location, the top header menu)

>-Removed the community section which freed up more space for  addition content. So I added a 4th "blog" section
I guess "get involved" has the same meaning.

> 
> Please review and let me know if there is specific sections/content you
> would like to see changed. I'm hoping the next set of responses should be
> the final round for the homepage and then I can move forward with an
> example of an internal page and we can talk development.

Overall, this is by far my favorite and looks great.

Thanks
ilya


> 
> Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
> 
> Thanks You and Best Regards,
> 
> Sonny H. Chhen
> Manager of User Interface & User Experience | Citrix Systems -
> CloudPlatform
> 4988 Great America Parkway, Santa Clara, CA  95054, USA
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: David Nalley [mailto:david@gnsa.us]
> Sent: Wednesday, March 20, 2013 2:04 PM
> To: cloudstack-marketing@incubator.apache.org
> Cc: John Kinsella
> Subject: Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
> 
> On Wed, Mar 20, 2013 at 4:58 PM, Sonny Chhen <So...@citrix.com>
> wrote:
> > Thanks for the feedback and kind words Joe. I'll wait 72 hrs and compile all
> feedback and work from there.
> >
> 
> So I don't know if this is appropriate or not, but tossing it out there anyway.
> I like the overall design a lot.
> However the sections as they are currently showing are completely
> contributor focused. There's no 'download' or 'getting started' or anything
> that would target a new user or potential new user, a group that will easily be
> 98% of the folks showing up at our website.
> 
> --David



RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by "Kelcey Damage (BT)" <ke...@backbonetechnology.com>.
Ooh, the Kerning, spacing/margins are all so much prettier!

2 things I noticed:

--Features And Functionality header has spacing issues above it

--People of Apache CloudStack header has spacing issues above and below

This was viewed on FF 19.0.2


+1 I approve

-kd


>-----Original Message-----
>From: Sonny Chhen [mailto:Sonny.Chhen@citrix.com]
>Sent: Wednesday, April 10, 2013 5:00 PM
>To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
>Subject: RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
>
>Hello All,
>
>I've uploaded a design for an internal about page at the link below. For
>simplicity sake, we can just swap out the header image and add whichever
>content is needed for each section of the site.
>
>https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website+r
>edesign+proposal?focusedCommentId=30758521&#comment-30758521
>
>To answer a few questions that came briefly:
>
>-Yes I will provide whatever graphical assets are needed(fonts, psd files,
header
>images, etc...) -I'm ok with this being a responsive or fluid design, we
will just
>need a developer that can do this -Please feel free to chip in with spacing
or
>styling the css ;)
>
>Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
>
>Sonny H. Chhen
>Manager of User Interface & User Experience | Citrix Systems -
CloudPlatform
>4988 Great America Parkway, Santa Clara, CA  95054, USA
>
>
>-----Original Message-----
>From: Kelcey Damage (BT) [mailto:kelcey@backbonetechnology.com]
>Sent: Wednesday, March 27, 2013 7:18 PM
>To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
>Subject: RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
>
>I like this but a couple spacing issues are driving me nuts. On that note I
would
>be willing to pitch in on CSS.
>
>-kd
>
>
>>-----Original Message-----
>>From: Joe Brockmeier [mailto:jzb@zonker.net]
>>Sent: Wednesday, March 27, 2013 3:53 PM
>>To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
>>Subject: Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
>>
>>Hi Sonny,
>>
>>On Tue, Mar 26, 2013, at 05:13 PM, Sonny Chhen wrote:
>>> After taking in all the suggestions, I've updated the mockup and the
>>> new design can be seen at the link below:
>>>
>>>
>>https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website+
>>> redesign+proposal
>>
>>This looks great. I really like this look.
>>
>>Looking at this, I *think* this is something we can implement without
>>too
>many
>>problems using the Apache CMS.
>>
>>Would you be able to supply the graphics for all the pieces and then we
>>can start working on trying to implement this? Or did you have a
>>different plan
>to
>>implement this?
>>
>>The other question is - what will the rest of the site's pages look like?
>Do you
>>have any ideas for the content pages inside?
>>
>>(Also, I think we'd need to make sure we can edit the text in the
>>graphics
>- e.g.,
>>be able to change "Getting Started" to "4.1.0 is released!" or "Blog"
>>to
>"News",
>>etc.)
>>
>>Oh - and we can drop the Apache Incubator graphic at the bottom. :-)
>>(We
>will
>>need to find a spot for the "about Apache" stuff, though.)
>>
>>Best,
>>
>>jzb
>>--
>>Joe Brockmeier
>>jzb@zonker.net
>>Twitter: @jzb
>>http://www.dissociatedpress.net/



RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Hugo Trippaers <HT...@schubergphilis.com>.
This looks really nice. Simple and clean design.

I like the header image, nice combination between aesthetically pleasing and tech stuff. 

Cheers,

Hugo

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Sonny Chhen [mailto:Sonny.Chhen@citrix.com]
> Sent: Thursday, April 11, 2013 2:00 AM
> To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
> Subject: RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
> 
> Hello All,
> 
> I've uploaded a design for an internal about page at the link below. For
> simplicity sake, we can just swap out the header image and add whichever
> content is needed for each section of the site.
> 
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website
> +redesign+proposal?focusedCommentId=30758521&#comment-30758521
> 
> To answer a few questions that came briefly:
> 
> -Yes I will provide whatever graphical assets are needed(fonts, psd files,
> header images, etc...) -I'm ok with this being a responsive or fluid design, we
> will just need a developer that can do this -Please feel free to chip in with
> spacing or styling the css ;)
> 
> Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
> 
> Sonny H. Chhen
> Manager of User Interface & User Experience | Citrix Systems -
> CloudPlatform
> 4988 Great America Parkway, Santa Clara, CA  95054, USA
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Kelcey Damage (BT) [mailto:kelcey@backbonetechnology.com]
> Sent: Wednesday, March 27, 2013 7:18 PM
> To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
> Subject: RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
> 
> I like this but a couple spacing issues are driving me nuts. On that note I
> would be willing to pitch in on CSS.
> 
> -kd
> 
> 
> >-----Original Message-----
> >From: Joe Brockmeier [mailto:jzb@zonker.net]
> >Sent: Wednesday, March 27, 2013 3:53 PM
> >To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
> >Subject: Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
> >
> >Hi Sonny,
> >
> >On Tue, Mar 26, 2013, at 05:13 PM, Sonny Chhen wrote:
> >> After taking in all the suggestions, I've updated the mockup and the
> >> new design can be seen at the link below:
> >>
> >>
> >https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+websit
> e+
> >> redesign+proposal
> >
> >This looks great. I really like this look.
> >
> >Looking at this, I *think* this is something we can implement without
> >too
> many
> >problems using the Apache CMS.
> >
> >Would you be able to supply the graphics for all the pieces and then we
> >can start working on trying to implement this? Or did you have a
> >different plan
> to
> >implement this?
> >
> >The other question is - what will the rest of the site's pages look like?
> Do you
> >have any ideas for the content pages inside?
> >
> >(Also, I think we'd need to make sure we can edit the text in the
> >graphics
> - e.g.,
> >be able to change "Getting Started" to "4.1.0 is released!" or "Blog"
> >to
> "News",
> >etc.)
> >
> >Oh - and we can drop the Apache Incubator graphic at the bottom. :-)
> >(We
> will
> >need to find a spot for the "about Apache" stuff, though.)
> >
> >Best,
> >
> >jzb
> >--
> >Joe Brockmeier
> >jzb@zonker.net
> >Twitter: @jzb
> >http://www.dissociatedpress.net/


Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Chip Childers <ch...@sungard.com>.
Looks good, with one comment:

The "About" image font selection seems to be disjointed from the rest of
the fonts, especially when compared with the look of the index page (the
image right above).  I'm a fan of the font selected for the images on
that index page.

-chip

On Wed, Apr 10, 2013 at 05:00:05PM -0700, Sonny Chhen wrote:
> Hello All,
> 
> I've uploaded a design for an internal about page at the link below. For simplicity sake, we can just swap out the header image and add whichever content is needed for each section of the site. 
> 
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website+redesign+proposal?focusedCommentId=30758521&#comment-30758521
> 
> To answer a few questions that came briefly:
> 
> -Yes I will provide whatever graphical assets are needed(fonts, psd files, header images, etc...)
> -I'm ok with this being a responsive or fluid design, we will just need a developer that can do this
> -Please feel free to chip in with spacing or styling the css ;)
> 
> Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Animesh Chaturvedi <an...@citrix.com>.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Joe Brockmeier [mailto:jzb@zonker.net]
> Sent: Thursday, April 11, 2013 3:25 PM
> To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
> Subject: Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
> 
> On Thu, Apr 11, 2013, at 05:21 PM, Animesh Chaturvedi wrote:
> > Sonny good job, like the overall design. Should we have a place for
> > testimonial / user success stories?
> 
> No - we've decided that those live on the wiki. Too much opportunity for
> appearance of corporate influence / bias in picking/choosing which stories go
> up.
[Animesh>] Ok thanks for clarifying
> 
> Best,
> 
> jzb
> --
> Joe Brockmeier
> jzb@zonker.net
> Twitter: @jzb
> http://www.dissociatedpress.net/

Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Joe Brockmeier <jz...@zonker.net>.
On Fri, Apr 12, 2013, at 02:08 PM, Pierre-Luc Bisaillon wrote:
> Re: flow. I did another review of recent posts and I did find a similar
> post from Mark (pasted below) but no consensus. I will put something
> together and share. Maybe on this page?
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Website+Resources+and+Proposals#WebsiteResourcesandProposals-ContentThatLivesontheMainSite

Will this conflict with the primary front page design that Sonny has
proposed? Because that's been in front of the marketing@ list for a
while. 

That page is fine for any additional proposals, etc., though. 

> Re: case studies. I think this warrants further discussion (separate
> thread?). Do we agree that the main purpose here is to get as many people
> to use CloudStack? If so, then are we afraid by the fact that some people
> would shy away from CloudStack if they see corporate influence? But don't
> we think that *more* people would be convinced of using it if they did
> see case studies?

Yes, I think a separate thread is best. I don't know that I can sum up
all of the rationale for everyone who weighed in previously in answer to
your second question. 

Honestly, I think case studies on the CloudStack.org site are of limited
value. Really, if we want to reach a maximal audience we should be
discussing ways to get case studies covered elsewhere and in front of
influencers rather than where they live on CloudStack.org or the wiki. 

Best,

jzb
-- 
Joe Brockmeier
jzb@zonker.net
Twitter: @jzb
http://www.dissociatedpress.net/

Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Pierre-Luc Bisaillon <pb...@cloudops.com>.
Joe,

Re: flow. I did another review of recent posts and I did find a similar
post from Mark (pasted below) but no consensus. I will put something
together and share. Maybe on this page?
https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Website+Resources+and+Proposals#WebsiteResourcesandProposals-ContentThatLivesontheMainSite

Re: case studies. I think this warrants further discussion (separate
thread?). Do we agree that the main purpose here is to get as many people
to use CloudStack? If so, then are we afraid by the fact that some people
would shy away from CloudStack if they see corporate influence? But don't
we think that *more* people would be convinced of using it if they did see
case studies?

[previous comments from Mark]
- Prospects - Potential users that come to CS.org and want to learn
screenshots, feature list, video webcast, case studies of successful users
etc.
- User - Resources for users including user guides, documentation, support
mechanisms, IRC logs etc.
- Developers - Users who want to extend or integrate with CloudStack
including developer guide, wiki links to integrated technologies (e.g.
Puppet Manifests, Chef Cookbooks, Nagios Plugins, etc.)

I think that should be a design point should lead each type of user down
the path. Right now we provide a smorgasbord and users of the site pick
their own adventure. Perhaps we should be more prescriptive to help
improve their success.  I know Sonny floated a design already but I don't
think it addressed these points specifically. Maybe we could take the
feedback from this thread and have him do a rough wire frame and critique
it to get to where we need to be.

Take care,

PL


On Fri, Apr 12, 2013 at 2:38 PM, Joe Brockmeier <jz...@zonker.net> wrote:

> On Fri, Apr 12, 2013, at 01:02 PM, Pierre-Luc Bisaillon wrote:
> > 2. Joe I know there is a risk of bias in putting case studies here vs.
> > the wiki, but is there an opportunity to define a framework for review?
>
> We've had discussions on this previously, and the consensus was we'd not
> want to get into trying to define this, if I recall correctly.
>
> But if you think you can define a framework that makes sense, I'd
> encourage you to propose that and raise the discussion in a new thread
> so everybody can weigh in. Maybe there's a way to do it and we can
> achieve consensus on it. What we don't want to do is keep raising the
> question every time we talk about the site - so if we could have the
> discussion in a well-defined way and come to a consensus now, that'd be
> excellent.
>
> > CloudStack has impressive success stories but I think they are not told
> > enough. Are you worried about actual corporate influence or the
> > *appearance* of corporate influence?
>
> Both. :-) Sometimes the appearance of influence is just as bad. Being a
> project that started out from a single entity means you have to work
> pretty hard to shake that perception.
>
> Best,
>
> jzb
> --
> Joe Brockmeier
> jzb@zonker.net
> Twitter: @jzb
> http://www.dissociatedpress.net/
>



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Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Joe Brockmeier <jz...@zonker.net>.
On Fri, Apr 12, 2013, at 01:02 PM, Pierre-Luc Bisaillon wrote:
> 2. Joe I know there is a risk of bias in putting case studies here vs.
> the wiki, but is there an opportunity to define a framework for review?

We've had discussions on this previously, and the consensus was we'd not
want to get into trying to define this, if I recall correctly.

But if you think you can define a framework that makes sense, I'd
encourage you to propose that and raise the discussion in a new thread
so everybody can weigh in. Maybe there's a way to do it and we can
achieve consensus on it. What we don't want to do is keep raising the
question every time we talk about the site - so if we could have the
discussion in a well-defined way and come to a consensus now, that'd be
excellent. 

> CloudStack has impressive success stories but I think they are not told
> enough. Are you worried about actual corporate influence or the
> *appearance* of corporate influence?

Both. :-) Sometimes the appearance of influence is just as bad. Being a
project that started out from a single entity means you have to work
pretty hard to shake that perception. 

Best,

jzb
-- 
Joe Brockmeier
jzb@zonker.net
Twitter: @jzb
http://www.dissociatedpress.net/

Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Giles Sirett <gi...@shapeblue.com>.
Pierre

+1 on the first two points

Kind Regards
Giles

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On 12 Apr 2013, at 19:03, "Pierre-Luc Bisaillon" <pb...@cloudops.com>> wrote:

Team,

Great to see the design evolving. I really like the top-half and banner. A
few points:
1. On the last thread Joe asked about "user stories" and I think there is
an opportunity to better segment the incoming visitors based on their
interest. In a way that's what the middle of the page does but it's not
always clear (e.g. Getting Started in this case seems to be a link for
developers, and then "Take CloudStack for a spin" for IT users. I think the
3 main types of visitors are likely to be:
- general business and IT people who have heard about it and want to know
more about it
- IT people looking to install it
- Developers who might be interested in contributing to it

Would be great to clearly direct this traffic to information that these
audiences would be looking for. I think we're close with the sub-text of
the bottom menu, but could make it clearer.

We seem to dedicate a large real estate to developers (whereas, for
example, OpenStack has it as a sub-section under Community).

2. Joe I know there is a risk of bias in putting case studies here vs. the
wiki, but is there an opportunity to define a framework for review?
CloudStack has impressive success stories but I think they are not told
enough. Are you worried about actual corporate influence or the
*appearance* of corporate influence?

3. Personally I'm not a fan of the font or the color choices in the bottom
section, but can't quite justify why :-) and I know that too much personal
feedback is not good!
http://theoatmeal.com/comics/design_hell

Great work and looking forward to the launch,

PL







On Thu, Apr 11, 2013 at 6:25 PM, Joe Brockmeier <jz...@zonker.net>> wrote:

On Thu, Apr 11, 2013, at 05:21 PM, Animesh Chaturvedi wrote:
Sonny good job, like the overall design. Should we have a place for
testimonial / user success stories?

No - we've decided that those live on the wiki. Too much opportunity for
appearance of corporate influence / bias in picking/choosing which
stories go up.

Best,

jzb
--
Joe Brockmeier
jzb@zonker.net<ma...@zonker.net>
Twitter: @jzb
http://www.dissociatedpress.net/




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Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Pierre-Luc Bisaillon <pb...@cloudops.com>.
Team,

Great to see the design evolving. I really like the top-half and banner. A
few points:
1. On the last thread Joe asked about "user stories" and I think there is
an opportunity to better segment the incoming visitors based on their
interest. In a way that's what the middle of the page does but it's not
always clear (e.g. Getting Started in this case seems to be a link for
developers, and then "Take CloudStack for a spin" for IT users. I think the
3 main types of visitors are likely to be:
- general business and IT people who have heard about it and want to know
more about it
- IT people looking to install it
- Developers who might be interested in contributing to it

Would be great to clearly direct this traffic to information that these
audiences would be looking for. I think we're close with the sub-text of
the bottom menu, but could make it clearer.

We seem to dedicate a large real estate to developers (whereas, for
example, OpenStack has it as a sub-section under Community).

2. Joe I know there is a risk of bias in putting case studies here vs. the
wiki, but is there an opportunity to define a framework for review?
CloudStack has impressive success stories but I think they are not told
enough. Are you worried about actual corporate influence or the
*appearance* of corporate influence?

3. Personally I'm not a fan of the font or the color choices in the bottom
section, but can't quite justify why :-) and I know that too much personal
feedback is not good!
http://theoatmeal.com/comics/design_hell

Great work and looking forward to the launch,

PL







On Thu, Apr 11, 2013 at 6:25 PM, Joe Brockmeier <jz...@zonker.net> wrote:

> On Thu, Apr 11, 2013, at 05:21 PM, Animesh Chaturvedi wrote:
> > Sonny good job, like the overall design. Should we have a place for
> > testimonial / user success stories?
>
> No - we've decided that those live on the wiki. Too much opportunity for
> appearance of corporate influence / bias in picking/choosing which
> stories go up.
>
> Best,
>
> jzb
> --
> Joe Brockmeier
> jzb@zonker.net
> Twitter: @jzb
> http://www.dissociatedpress.net/
>



-- 
Pierre-Luc Bisaillon
VP produits / VP Product
pbisaillon@cloudops.com
[c]  (438) 989-3121
[twitter] @pierreluc09
[www] about.me/pierrelucbisaillon
--
CloudOps
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Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Joe Brockmeier <jz...@zonker.net>.
On Thu, Apr 11, 2013, at 05:21 PM, Animesh Chaturvedi wrote:
> Sonny good job, like the overall design. Should we have a place for
> testimonial / user success stories?

No - we've decided that those live on the wiki. Too much opportunity for
appearance of corporate influence / bias in picking/choosing which
stories go up. 

Best,

jzb
-- 
Joe Brockmeier
jzb@zonker.net
Twitter: @jzb
http://www.dissociatedpress.net/

RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Animesh Chaturvedi <an...@citrix.com>.
Sonny good job, like the overall design. Should we have a place for testimonial / user success stories?

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Sonny Chhen [mailto:Sonny.Chhen@citrix.com]
> Sent: Wednesday, April 10, 2013 5:00 PM
> To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
> Subject: RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
> 
> Hello All,
> 
> I've uploaded a design for an internal about page at the link below. For
> simplicity sake, we can just swap out the header image and add whichever
> content is needed for each section of the site.
> 
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website
> +redesign+proposal?focusedCommentId=30758521&#comment-30758521
> 
> To answer a few questions that came briefly:
> 
> -Yes I will provide whatever graphical assets are needed(fonts, psd files,
> header images, etc...) -I'm ok with this being a responsive or fluid design, we
> will just need a developer that can do this -Please feel free to chip in with
> spacing or styling the css ;)
> 
> Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.
> 
> Sonny H. Chhen
> Manager of User Interface & User Experience | Citrix Systems -
> CloudPlatform
> 4988 Great America Parkway, Santa Clara, CA  95054, USA
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Kelcey Damage (BT) [mailto:kelcey@backbonetechnology.com]
> Sent: Wednesday, March 27, 2013 7:18 PM
> To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
> Subject: RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
> 
> I like this but a couple spacing issues are driving me nuts. On that note I
> would be willing to pitch in on CSS.
> 
> -kd
> 
> 
> >-----Original Message-----
> >From: Joe Brockmeier [mailto:jzb@zonker.net]
> >Sent: Wednesday, March 27, 2013 3:53 PM
> >To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
> >Subject: Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
> >
> >Hi Sonny,
> >
> >On Tue, Mar 26, 2013, at 05:13 PM, Sonny Chhen wrote:
> >> After taking in all the suggestions, I've updated the mockup and the
> >> new design can be seen at the link below:
> >>
> >>
> >https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+websit
> e+
> >> redesign+proposal
> >
> >This looks great. I really like this look.
> >
> >Looking at this, I *think* this is something we can implement without
> >too
> many
> >problems using the Apache CMS.
> >
> >Would you be able to supply the graphics for all the pieces and then we
> >can start working on trying to implement this? Or did you have a
> >different plan
> to
> >implement this?
> >
> >The other question is - what will the rest of the site's pages look like?
> Do you
> >have any ideas for the content pages inside?
> >
> >(Also, I think we'd need to make sure we can edit the text in the
> >graphics
> - e.g.,
> >be able to change "Getting Started" to "4.1.0 is released!" or "Blog"
> >to
> "News",
> >etc.)
> >
> >Oh - and we can drop the Apache Incubator graphic at the bottom. :-)
> >(We
> will
> >need to find a spot for the "about Apache" stuff, though.)
> >
> >Best,
> >
> >jzb
> >--
> >Joe Brockmeier
> >jzb@zonker.net
> >Twitter: @jzb
> >http://www.dissociatedpress.net/


RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Sonny Chhen <So...@citrix.com>.
Hello All,

I've uploaded a design for an internal about page at the link below. For simplicity sake, we can just swap out the header image and add whichever content is needed for each section of the site. 

https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website+redesign+proposal?focusedCommentId=30758521&#comment-30758521

To answer a few questions that came briefly:

-Yes I will provide whatever graphical assets are needed(fonts, psd files, header images, etc...)
-I'm ok with this being a responsive or fluid design, we will just need a developer that can do this
-Please feel free to chip in with spacing or styling the css ;)

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Sonny H. Chhen
Manager of User Interface & User Experience | Citrix Systems - CloudPlatform
4988 Great America Parkway, Santa Clara, CA  95054, USA             


-----Original Message-----
From: Kelcey Damage (BT) [mailto:kelcey@backbonetechnology.com] 
Sent: Wednesday, March 27, 2013 7:18 PM
To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
Subject: RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

I like this but a couple spacing issues are driving me nuts. On that note I would be willing to pitch in on CSS.

-kd


>-----Original Message-----
>From: Joe Brockmeier [mailto:jzb@zonker.net]
>Sent: Wednesday, March 27, 2013 3:53 PM
>To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
>Subject: Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
>
>Hi Sonny,
>
>On Tue, Mar 26, 2013, at 05:13 PM, Sonny Chhen wrote:
>> After taking in all the suggestions, I've updated the mockup and the 
>> new design can be seen at the link below:
>>
>>
>https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website+
>> redesign+proposal
>
>This looks great. I really like this look.
>
>Looking at this, I *think* this is something we can implement without 
>too
many
>problems using the Apache CMS.
>
>Would you be able to supply the graphics for all the pieces and then we 
>can start working on trying to implement this? Or did you have a 
>different plan
to
>implement this?
>
>The other question is - what will the rest of the site's pages look like?
Do you
>have any ideas for the content pages inside?
>
>(Also, I think we'd need to make sure we can edit the text in the 
>graphics
- e.g.,
>be able to change "Getting Started" to "4.1.0 is released!" or "Blog" 
>to
"News",
>etc.)
>
>Oh - and we can drop the Apache Incubator graphic at the bottom. :-) 
>(We
will
>need to find a spot for the "about Apache" stuff, though.)
>
>Best,
>
>jzb
>--
>Joe Brockmeier
>jzb@zonker.net
>Twitter: @jzb
>http://www.dissociatedpress.net/


Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Joe Brockmeier <jz...@zonker.net>.
On Thu, Mar 28, 2013, at 01:22 PM, Kelcey Damage (BT) wrote:
> Hahahaha.
> 
> I opened myself up to that one... Fair game. :)

http://xkcd.com/1015/

Classic. Happy weekend all! 

Best,

jzb
-- 
Joe Brockmeier
jzb@zonker.net
Twitter: @jzb
http://www.dissociatedpress.net/

RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by "Kelcey Damage (BT)" <ke...@backbonetechnology.com>.
Hahahaha.

I opened myself up to that one... Fair game. :)

-kd


>-----Original Message-----
>From: Joe Brockmeier [mailto:jzb@zonker.net]
>Sent: Thursday, March 28, 2013 10:28 AM
>To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
>Subject: Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
>
>On Wed, Mar 27, 2013, at 09:17 PM, Kelcey Damage (BT) wrote:
>> I like this but a couple spacing issues are driving me nuts. On that
>> note I would be willing to pitch in on CSS.
>
>Did you just admit that spacing issues with type can make you crazy?
>This may not end well for you. ;-)
>
>/me goes to look up how to create really annoying kerning combinations with
>CSS...
>
>Best,
>
>jzb
>--
>Joe Brockmeier
>jzb@zonker.net
>Twitter: @jzb
>http://www.dissociatedpress.net/


Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Joe Brockmeier <jz...@zonker.net>.
On Wed, Mar 27, 2013, at 09:17 PM, Kelcey Damage (BT) wrote:
> I like this but a couple spacing issues are driving me nuts. On that note
> I would be willing to pitch in on CSS.

Did you just admit that spacing issues with type can make you crazy?
This may not end well for you. ;-) 

/me goes to look up how to create really annoying kerning combinations
with CSS... 

Best,

jzb
-- 
Joe Brockmeier
jzb@zonker.net
Twitter: @jzb
http://www.dissociatedpress.net/

RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by "Kelcey Damage (BT)" <ke...@backbonetechnology.com>.
I like this but a couple spacing issues are driving me nuts. On that note I
would be willing to pitch in on CSS.

-kd


>-----Original Message-----
>From: Joe Brockmeier [mailto:jzb@zonker.net]
>Sent: Wednesday, March 27, 2013 3:53 PM
>To: marketing@cloudstack.apache.org
>Subject: Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2
>
>Hi Sonny,
>
>On Tue, Mar 26, 2013, at 05:13 PM, Sonny Chhen wrote:
>> After taking in all the suggestions, I've updated the mockup and the
>> new design can be seen at the link below:
>>
>>
>https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website+
>> redesign+proposal
>
>This looks great. I really like this look.
>
>Looking at this, I *think* this is something we can implement without too
many
>problems using the Apache CMS.
>
>Would you be able to supply the graphics for all the pieces and then we can
>start working on trying to implement this? Or did you have a different plan
to
>implement this?
>
>The other question is - what will the rest of the site's pages look like?
Do you
>have any ideas for the content pages inside?
>
>(Also, I think we'd need to make sure we can edit the text in the graphics
- e.g.,
>be able to change "Getting Started" to "4.1.0 is released!" or "Blog" to
"News",
>etc.)
>
>Oh - and we can drop the Apache Incubator graphic at the bottom. :-) (We
will
>need to find a spot for the "about Apache" stuff, though.)
>
>Best,
>
>jzb
>--
>Joe Brockmeier
>jzb@zonker.net
>Twitter: @jzb
>http://www.dissociatedpress.net/


Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Joe Brockmeier <jz...@zonker.net>.
Hi Sonny,

On Tue, Mar 26, 2013, at 05:13 PM, Sonny Chhen wrote:
> After taking in all the suggestions, I've updated the mockup and the new
> design can be seen at the link below:
> 
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website+redesign+proposal

This looks great. I really like this look. 

Looking at this, I *think* this is something we can implement without
too many problems using the Apache CMS. 

Would you be able to supply the graphics for all the pieces and then we
can start working on trying to implement this? Or did you have a
different plan to implement this?

The other question is - what will the rest of the site's pages look
like? Do you have any ideas for the content pages inside? 

(Also, I think we'd need to make sure we can edit the text in the
graphics - e.g., be able to change "Getting Started" to "4.1.0 is
released!" or "Blog" to "News", etc.)

Oh - and we can drop the Apache Incubator graphic at the bottom. :-) (We
will need to find a spot for the "about Apache" stuff, though.)

Best,

jzb
-- 
Joe Brockmeier
jzb@zonker.net
Twitter: @jzb
http://www.dissociatedpress.net/

RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Pranav Saxena <pr...@citrix.com>.
Awesome design !  You rock \m/ 

One suggestion though... May be you could remove/hide few of those options in the background image like "None - edit"  .

Regards,
Pranav

-----Original Message-----
From: Sonny Chhen [mailto:Sonny.Chhen@citrix.com] 
Sent: Wednesday, March 27, 2013 3:43 AM
To: cloudstack-marketing@incubator.apache.org
Cc: John Kinsella
Subject: RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Hello all,

After taking in all the suggestions, I've updated the mockup and the new design can be seen at the link below:

https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website+redesign+proposal

The following changes have been made:

-Decreased main header image for lower resolution screens -Removed the news section and replaced it with "Getting Started" and added a download link -Removed the community section which freed up more space for addition content. So I added a 4th "blog" section

Please review and let me know if there is specific sections/content you would like to see changed. I'm hoping the next set of responses should be the final round for the homepage and then I can move forward with an example of an internal page and we can talk development.

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Thanks You and Best Regards,

Sonny H. Chhen
Manager of User Interface & User Experience | Citrix Systems - CloudPlatform
4988 Great America Parkway, Santa Clara, CA  95054, USA             

-----Original Message-----
From: David Nalley [mailto:david@gnsa.us]
Sent: Wednesday, March 20, 2013 2:04 PM
To: cloudstack-marketing@incubator.apache.org
Cc: John Kinsella
Subject: Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

On Wed, Mar 20, 2013 at 4:58 PM, Sonny Chhen <So...@citrix.com> wrote:
> Thanks for the feedback and kind words Joe. I'll wait 72 hrs and compile all feedback and work from there.
>

So I don't know if this is appropriate or not, but tossing it out there anyway.
I like the overall design a lot.
However the sections as they are currently showing are completely contributor focused. There's no 'download' or 'getting started' or anything that would target a new user or potential new user, a group that will easily be 98% of the folks showing up at our website.

--David

RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Sonny Chhen <So...@citrix.com>.
Hello all,

After taking in all the suggestions, I've updated the mockup and the new design can be seen at the link below:

https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website+redesign+proposal

The following changes have been made:

-Decreased main header image for lower resolution screens
-Removed the news section and replaced it with "Getting Started" and added a download link
-Removed the community section which freed up more space for addition content. So I added a 4th "blog" section

Please review and let me know if there is specific sections/content you would like to see changed. I'm hoping the next set of responses should be the final round for the homepage and then I can move forward with an example of an internal page and we can talk development.

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Thanks You and Best Regards,

Sonny H. Chhen
Manager of User Interface & User Experience | Citrix Systems - CloudPlatform
4988 Great America Parkway, Santa Clara, CA  95054, USA             

-----Original Message-----
From: David Nalley [mailto:david@gnsa.us] 
Sent: Wednesday, March 20, 2013 2:04 PM
To: cloudstack-marketing@incubator.apache.org
Cc: John Kinsella
Subject: Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

On Wed, Mar 20, 2013 at 4:58 PM, Sonny Chhen <So...@citrix.com> wrote:
> Thanks for the feedback and kind words Joe. I'll wait 72 hrs and compile all feedback and work from there.
>

So I don't know if this is appropriate or not, but tossing it out there anyway.
I like the overall design a lot.
However the sections as they are currently showing are completely contributor focused. There's no 'download' or 'getting started' or anything that would target a new user or potential new user, a group that will easily be 98% of the folks showing up at our website.

--David

Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by David Nalley <da...@gnsa.us>.
On Wed, Mar 20, 2013 at 4:58 PM, Sonny Chhen <So...@citrix.com> wrote:
> Thanks for the feedback and kind words Joe. I'll wait 72 hrs and compile all feedback and work from there.
>

So I don't know if this is appropriate or not, but tossing it out there anyway.
I like the overall design a lot.
However the sections as they are currently showing are completely
contributor focused. There's no 'download' or 'getting started' or
anything that would target a new user or potential new user, a group
that will easily be 98% of the folks showing up at our website.

--David

RE: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by Sonny Chhen <So...@citrix.com>.
Thanks for the feedback and kind words Joe. I'll wait 72 hrs and compile all feedback and work from there.

John,

I'm perfectly fine with making this a responsive design. We'll just need a developer with the know-how. But I assume we can discuss development as soon as we lock down a design.

Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns.

Thanks You and Best Regards,

Sonny H. Chhen
Manager of User Interface & User Experience | Citrix Systems - CloudPlatform
4988 Great America Parkway, Santa Clara, CA  95054, USA             

-----Original Message-----
From: John Kinsella [mailto:jlk@stratosec.co] 
Sent: Wednesday, March 20, 2013 12:56 PM
To: <cl...@incubator.apache.org>
Cc: Sonny Chhen
Subject: Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Actually, the width/size comments remind me - could we make this a responsive interface?

John

On Mar 20, 2013, at 12:42 PM, Joe Brockmeier <jz...@zonker.net>
 wrote:

> In case you missed it in the other thread [1], Sonny has sent out a 
> second redesign proposal for the site.
> 
> Please take a second to look it over if you haven't already and give 
> any feedback you might have within the next few days.
> 
> Questions / comments I have:
> 
> * The image is 1020x1350 - should we assume that the design is going 
> to be targeted at a browser window of at least 1024 in width?
> 
> * I'd like to replace "DOCS" with "Get Started" which would take users 
> to a page that would orient them to the different types of 
> documentation and put them on the right "path."
> 
> * Could we trim down the Community graphic and have a "Learn" item 
> that would take users to an page that gives an intro to CloudStack?
> 
> * Can we reduce the size of the main graphic from ~400px to about 
> 250px high? If we assume common display sizes for laptops today, a lot 
> of users wouldn't see the DEV/DOCS/COMMUNITY (or whatever we call 
> them) boxes without scrolling.
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> [1]
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website+
> redesign+proposal
> 
> 
> Best,
> 
> jzb
> --
> Joe Brockmeier
> http://dissociatedpress.net/
> Twitter: @jzb
> 


Re: [DISCUSS] Website Mock-Up #2

Posted by John Kinsella <jl...@stratosec.co>.
Actually, the width/size comments remind me - could we make this a responsive interface?

John

On Mar 20, 2013, at 12:42 PM, Joe Brockmeier <jz...@zonker.net>
 wrote:

> In case you missed it in the other thread [1], Sonny has sent out a
> second redesign proposal for the site. 
> 
> Please take a second to look it over if you haven't already and give any
> feedback you might have within the next few days. 
> 
> Questions / comments I have:
> 
> * The image is 1020x1350 - should we assume that the design is going to be
> targeted at a browser window of at least 1024 in width? 
> 
> * I'd like to replace "DOCS" with "Get Started" which would take users
> to a page that would orient them to the different types of documentation
> and put them on the right "path." 
> 
> * Could we trim down the Community graphic and have a "Learn" item that
> would take users to an page that gives an intro to CloudStack? 
> 
> * Can we reduce the size of the main graphic from ~400px to about 250px
> high? If we assume common display sizes for laptops today, a lot of
> users wouldn't see the DEV/DOCS/COMMUNITY (or whatever we call them)
> boxes without scrolling. 
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> [1]
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/CLOUDSTACK/Apache+website+redesign+proposal
> 
> 
> Best,
> 
> jzb
> --
> Joe Brockmeier
> http://dissociatedpress.net/
> Twitter: @jzb
>