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commit c488049f90e69653ca19b631bff7eb80e54b40cb
Author: Elena Sadler <36...@users.noreply.github.com>
AuthorDate: Tue Oct 11 04:14:12 2022 -0500

    Polished docs: fixed grammar and wording issues (#8507)
    
    * Polished docs: fixed grammar and wording issues
    
    * Added more concise wording
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 .../modules/ROOT/pages/getting-started.adoc        | 33 ++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/user-manual/modules/ROOT/pages/getting-started.adoc b/docs/user-manual/modules/ROOT/pages/getting-started.adoc
index c8e421d399a..61e9ea578e7 100644
--- a/docs/user-manual/modules/ROOT/pages/getting-started.adoc
+++ b/docs/user-manual/modules/ROOT/pages/getting-started.adoc
@@ -1,31 +1,30 @@
 = Getting Started
 
-You can get started with Apache Camel using different ways, such as:
+You can get started with Apache Camel in a variety of ways, such as:
 
 - Using online Project generators
 - Using the Camel CLI (command line)
 - Using Camel Karavan (visual UI Camel designer)
 
-And these approaches requires more knowledge to perform:
+And some more alternative methods:
 
 - Adding Camel to an existing project
 - Using IDE tooling wizards
 - Using Maven Archetypes
-- Copy an existing Camel example and modify
+- Cloning an existing example to modify
 
 
 == Using online Project generators
 
-You can use https://kameleon.dev/#/standalone[Camel Kameleon] which is Camels own
+You can use https://kameleon.dev/#/standalone[Camel Kameleon] which is Camel's own
 online project generator. This generator is Camel focused only, which is recommended
-for most users to Camel.
+for most Camel users.
 
 You can also use https://start.spring.io/[Spring Boot Initializer] which is the Spring Boot
-generator that also has Camel support. However, this generator does not allow users
-to fine-grained choose which Camel components, data formats, kamelets etc. to use.
+generator that also has Camel support. However, this generator does not allow users to have fine-grained control over which components, data formats, kamelets etc. they can use.
 
-And there is https://code.quarkus.io/[Code with Quarkus] which is the Quarkus
-generator that have great Camel support.
+And there is https://code.quarkus.io/[Code with Quarkus], the Quarkus
+generator, which has great support with Camel.
 
 
 == Getting Started from command line (CLI)
@@ -87,20 +86,19 @@ You can run in live coding mode, as shown:
 camel run hello.java --dev
 ----
 
-And then you can do source updates to `hello.java` and when the file is saved,
-Camel will automatically do live updates.
+While in live coding mode, whenever you save changes to `hello.java`, Camel will automatically load the updated version.
 
 *Step 5*
 
-Make sure to look at the xref:camel-jbang.adoc[Camel JBang] documentation, for more details on the powers
+Make sure to check out the xref:camel-jbang.adoc[Camel JBang] documentation, for more details on the powers
 of the Camel CLI. You will also find information how you can _export_ what you have built
 with the Camel CLI into a vanilla Camel Spring Boot or Camel Quarkus project.
 
 == Getting started with Camel using Karavan
 
 The https://github.com/apache/camel-karavan[Camel Karavan] is a toolkit for visually
-designing Camel integrations, and fully integrated with xref:camel-jbang.adoc[Camel JBang]
-to quickly try Camel while using the designer.
+designing Camel integrations, it is fully integrated with xref:camel-jbang.adoc[Camel JBang]
+which allows users to easily try Camel while using the designer.
 
 == Alternative ways of getting started with Camel
 
@@ -119,9 +117,8 @@ Apache Camel via Spring Boot Initializer or Code with Quarkus.
 Apache Camel comes with a set of xref:camel-maven-archetypes.adoc[Camel Maven Archetypes],
 you can use to create a new Camel project.
 
-=== Copy an existing example
+=== Cloning an existing example to modify
 
-You can find an existing example which are hosted on github,
-such as https://github.com/apache/camel-spring-boot-examples[Camel Spring Boot examples]
-where you can find an example and copy, and then modify.
+There are tons of Camel examples hosted on Github that you can clone and modify,
+such as https://github.com/apache/camel-spring-boot-examples[Camel Spring Boot examples].