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Author: smckinney
Date: Sat Apr 16 05:13:00 2016
New Revision: 1739413

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 # Fortress Overview
 
-FORTRESS is a standards-based access management system that provides role-based access control, delegated administration and password policies APIs and servivces.  It uses LDAP for its data storage.
+FORTRESS is a standards-based access management system that provides role-based access control, delegated administration and password policy services with an LDAP backend.
 
 ## What's in it?  
 
@@ -29,11 +29,11 @@ Included are the following components:
 * Rest  - HTTP protocol wrappers for the APIs
 * Web   - HTML pages for the APIs
 
-It is released under terms of the Apache License 2.0. 
+It's released under terms of the Apache License 2.0. 
 
 ## How Does It Work?
 
-To learn more, check out the quickstarts:
+To learn, check out the quickstarts:
 
 * [README-QUICKSTART-APACHEDS.md](https://github.com/apache/directory-fortress-core/blob/master/README-QUICKSTART-APACHEDS.md) - Install Core for use with APACHEDS
 * [README-QUICKSTART-SLAPD.md](https://github.com/apache/directory-fortress-core/blob/master/README-QUICKSTART-SLAPD.md) - Install Core for use with OPENLDAP
@@ -42,18 +42,18 @@ To learn more, check out the quickstarts
 * [README-QUICKSTART.md](https://github.com/apache/directory-fortress-enmasse/blob/master/README-QUICKSTART.md) - Install Fortress Rest to Tomcat
 * [README-QUICKSTART.md](https://github.com/apache/directory-fortress-commander/blob/master/README-QUICKSTART.md) - Install Fortress Web to Tomcat
 
-Other README's:
+Other Guides:
 
 * [README-MULTITENANCY.md](https://github.com/apache/directory-fortress-core/blob/master/README-MULTITENANCY.md) - How Fortress Multitenancy works
 * [README-CONFIG.md](https://github.com/apache/directory-fortress-core/blob/master/README-CONFIG.md) - How the Fortress Config subsystem works
 
 ## What technologies at play?
 
-Fortress products run on open system hardware and software platforms supporting LDAPv3, HTTP/S & Java technologies. Functionality that extend beyond LDAPv3 is realized via OpenLDAP/ApacheDS specific features. With the advent of Rest and Web products, [Apache Tomcat](http://tomcat).apache.org/, or preferred Java servlet container is used to process HTTP communications between endpoints.  
+Fortress products run on open system hardware and software platforms supporting LDAPv3, HTTP & Java.  
 
 ## What standards apply?
 
-The following technology standards are applied within Fortress...
+The following standards are implemented...
 
 ### ANSI Role-Based Access Control (INCITS 359) 
 
@@ -87,11 +87,11 @@ The Fortress Temporal model allows Users
 
 One day.
 
-## What security services are available?
+## What services are available?
 
 Over one hundred services divided across the Manager components.
 
-A description of the managers follow with their javadoc links...
+A description of these managers follow along with their associated javadoc links that describe the apis...
 
 ###RBAC Managers