svn commit: r1533673 - /openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/impress.mdtext

[sm...@apache.org]

Author: smansour
Date: Sat Oct 19 00:51:52 2013
New Revision: 1533673

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1533673
Log:
Changed language and changed points to state feature at the beginning of the sentence (more obvious to user).

Modified:
    openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/impress.mdtext

Modified: openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/impress.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/impress.mdtext?rev=1533673&r1=1533672&r2=1533673&view=diff
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--- openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/impress.mdtext (original)
+++ openoffice/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/impress.mdtext Sat Oct 19 00:51:52 2013
@@ -18,43 +18,39 @@ Notice:    Licensed to the Apache Softwa
 
 [![Screendump of Apache OpenOffice Impress](/product/pix/impress.png)](/product/pix/impress-big.png "Click for bigger version") # {.rfloatimg}
 
-*More power to your presentations*
+*Impress your audience with your presentations!*
 
 **Impress** is a truly outstanding tool for creating effective multimedia
 presentations. Your presentations will stand out with 2D and 3D clip art,
 special effects, animation, and high-impact drawing tools.
 
 *Master Pages* simplify the task of preparing your materials. Save even more
-time by [downloading templates][1] from our Extensions repository.
+time by [downloading templates][1] from our Templates repository.
 
-A *complete range of Views* are supported: Drawing / Outline / Slides / Notes /
+*Complete range of Views* are supported: Drawing / Outline / Slides / Notes /
 Handouts to meet all the needs of presenters and audiences, plus an optional
 multi-pane view to put all the tools at your fingertips.
 
-**Impress** supports multiple monitors, so that presenters can look at something
-else while presenting their slides on a projector. Make the most of this With
-the free [Presenter Console Extension][2], which lets you see your next slides
+*Multiple monitors support* so that presenters can have additional materials or notes while presenting their slides on a projector. 
+Make the most of this with the free [Presenter Console Extension][2], which lets you see your next slides
 as well as the time and the speaker notes.
 
-**Impress** has a complete range of *easy-to-use drawing and diagramming tools*
-to spice up your presentation.
-
-'Park' your most commonly used drawing tools around your screen ready for
+*Easy-to-use drawing and diagramming tools* - a complete range to spice up your presentation. 'Park' your most commonly used drawing tools around your screen ready for
 single-click access.
 
 *Slide show Animation and Effects* bring your presentation to life. Fontworks
 provides stunning 2D and 3D images from text. Create lifelike 3D images with
 astounding speed and response.
 
-Save your presentations in OpenDocument format, the new international standard
-for office documents. This XML based format means you're not tied in to
-**Impress**. You can access your presentations from any OpenDocument compliant
+*.odp Standard* - Save your presentations in OpenDocument format, the new international standard
+for office documents. This XML based format means you're not tied up with using
+Impress. You can access your presentations from any OpenDocument compliant
 software.
 
-Of course, you are free to use your old Microsoft PowerPoint presentations, or
-save your work in PowerPoint format for sending to people who are still locked
-into Microsoft products. Alternatively, use **Impress**'s built-in ability to
-create Flash (.swf) versions of your presentations.
+*.ppt & .pptx support* - Of course, you are free to import your old Microsoft PowerPoint presentations, or
+save your work in PowerPoint format for sending to people who are still using Microsoft products. 
+
+*Flash .swf Support* Alternatively, use Impress's built-in ability to create Flash versions of your presentations.
 
 [1]: http://extensions.openoffice.org/templates "Download Apache OpenOffice Templates"
 [2]: http://extensions.openoffice.org/project/presenter-screen "Download the Presenter Console Extension"